高中英语新高考-英语作文：热点话题指导和解读：意见分歧、教育

1、高中英语新高考-英语作文：热点话题指导和解读：意见分歧、教育 / 6高中英语新高考-英语作文：热点话题指导与解读：意见分歧、教育作文不常写，写作技能就会生疏，这是必然的。但是每次写一定要有 所突破，才会有效，其中一个好方法就是把别人的好作文的好文笔内 化为己有。下面这篇文字用到了很多高级词块，个别是四级常用词汇，相信对成绩非常好的读者也会有用。我一贯主张，先广泛阅读大量的同类话题作文，然后下笔，调用自己的思维，用上积累的词块。 欢迎大家提出更好的写法建议。非常感谢。 题目： 在我们合作的过程中，经常小组里出现不同的声音，如何看待不同的 声音并且取得一致的声音。写作过程：首段导入：说明分歧的坏处

2、：破坏合作和孤立成员 （话题导入+解释说明结果+明确立场）Nowadays, alongwith peoplefromdifferentbackgrounds come many conflicts in a community, which, if not handled properly , may threaten cooperation.（这个句子比较复杂的，主句是倒装句，定语从句里含有状语从句的省略结构，属于：现象+结果的思维模式 ）Forexample, it makes members graduallylose support and isolatethemselves .（对

3、前面的 threat 继续解释）Therefore,great efforts should be made to achieve a universal voice.（最后提出观点）中间段：解释立场，说明消除分歧争取统一的声音的好处First, it can help achieve high working efficiency . Obviously, a group where all members unite as one is usually full of passion and strength . Otherwise, a lot of time will be spent

4、 convincing each other.（展开方式：主题句 +解木举+反向说明）Second, it contributes to afriendly environment in which everyone can workwith a goodmood . By contrast, individuals with strong opinionsare inclinedto be aggressive, imposing great pressure on others.（展开方式：主题句+反向说明）结尾段：提出建议Personally, even with the most de

5、eply held differences, treatingtheotherpersonwith respectis always agoodfirststeptowards greater understanding. Also, a good listening cangainyoudeepempathy with others. Both willbe asource ofpersonal comfort and reassurance in various conflicts.（158个词） 好词好句： Along with - come两个事物一起发生 if not handled

6、 properly 如果处理不好 lose support失去支持isolate themselves 孤立 自 我 mutual respect 相互尊重 achieve high working efficiency赢得高效full of passion and strength充满激情和力量with a good mood 好心情are inclined to 倾向于imposing great pressure on 对施力口压力gain you deep empathy with others带来共鸣a source of personal comfort and reassuran

7、ce安抚和宽慰的来源注：最后一段是圣诞节英国女王致辞里的。But through the many changes I have seen over the years, faith, family and friendship have been not only a constant for mebut a source of personal comfort and reassurance.但纵观这些年间诸事变迁。我的信仰，家庭和友谊不仅是我永恒的坚守，同时也是我的 安抚和宽慰。Even with the most deeply held differences,treating the

8、 other person with respect and as a fellow human being is always agood first step towards greater understanding.即使彼止匕间存在最根深蒂固的分歧，视对方为同侪、待他人以尊重永远是增进理解的 第一步。题目：评价虎爸虎妈的严苛教育本题目可以用在所有父母不当的教育方式上，可以随意拓展开头段：不赞成这种方式In China, the idea that “spare a rod, spoil a child has been rooted in a family from generatio

9、n to generation. Personally, such severe parenting styles could becounterproductive .主体内容：.削弱创造力和想象力.不利于培养沟通能力Firstly, the controlling methods weaken childrens creativity and imagination .（后 面开 始说明 原因） The fast-changingsociety favors those who will try something newand do awaywith oldroutines .（从反面来

10、说明） Unfortunately, manyparents confine childrens behaviors and thoughts to a crampedspace, depriving them of the freedom to set theirminds free .Secondly, they pose a great threat to the cultivation of communicative ability.（后 面具 体解释 threat） Children subjected to high-pressure parenting for long ten

11、d to make compromises and blindly follow the footsteps of others结尾：lead a secure lifeinIn conclusion, the styles of tiger mothers should be abandoned though their children may be modest andthe future.（主题句用一个though 说明了虎妈教育并非都是缺点，后面来了个转折，以退为进。）However, they will wear down the childrensbravery to voice

12、 different ideas and fight for their own interests, which makes them obedient and mediocre in the end.（150 词）好词好句：spare a rod, spoil a child孩子不打不成器be rooted in 扎根于counterproductive事与愿违的weaken childrens creativity and imagination肖U弱孩子的仓造力和想象力favor 青睐于try something new尝试新的do away with 打破，去除confine - to把限制在deprive them of录 U 夺的set their minds free 释放； 让自由pose a great threat to对构成危害the cultivation of 的培养communicative ability