课件主题：中考英语看图作文写作策略

1、学校：广西百色德保初中课件制作：沈耀武联系电话件主题：中考英语看图作文写作策略 近几年来，在各省、市的中考英语试卷上出现看图写作题目不少。因此，如何应对看图写作是中考备考的一个重要组成部分。看图写作就是根据试卷上的所给图画或图表里面所提供的重要信息和特定的语境来写作。近几年来，在各省、市的中考英语的看图写作题中主要有两种形式。第一种：图画写作；第二种：图表写作。 看图写作的特点 纵观近几年的各省、市中考英语的看图写作题，我们不难发现：第一：看图写作大多数内容趋向于就图画写观后感想，也就是我们所讲的寓意作文。第二：这样的看图写作给学生写作带来较大难度，其目的是通过画面的

2、写作来表达现实生活中的一些实际问题。其主要命题目的在于考察学生的观察能力和想象能力。同时，考察学生的语言灵活运用和语言组织的综合运用能力。 写作方法认真审题，抓住所给图片前后关键信息 认真看懂写作题目的各项要求，这是具备良好写作效果很关键的第一步。比如务必看准人称代词、时态、提示词和词数要求等。其目的是确定下一步的写作准备正确方向，避免出现离题，产生漏洞和犯下严重错误。认真审题，抓住关键信息，就是要求我们务必仔细和全面地解读所提供的画片内容，不能忽略任何一个相关细节。 仔细构思，描绘图片信息构建写作框架 仔细观察所提供的图片以后，写作的全部内容就自然会出现在脑海中。因此，务必快速抓住这些写作灵

3、感，把思路继续拓展下去，描绘出短文轮廓，简单列出提纲，构建写作完整框架。 了解目的，尽力使用正确语言描述图片信息 避免用无关的信息大量进行陈述以后才对着图片进行描述切入主题，这样会觉得是在读不懂题目要求的条件下胡乱进行写作导致的结果。因此，务必对图片意思的纵向理解和横向扩展。力争做到主次分明、结构严谨、符合题目的要求。尽力避免出现低级错误，更不要使用一些复杂句或者较难理解的词语来故弄玄虚，务必使用正确、简单句或者词间接表达同样意思的句子来表达，以保证不丢太多的分数。 耐心推敲，仔细检查行文中是否有误 写作时间花费较多。因此，务必分配和掌握好宝贵时间。就针对一些细小的问题都不能放过。比如务必注意

4、的人称代词中的主格、宾格、形容词性物主代词、名词性物主代词，单词拼写、标点符号、单词大小写、书写工整等。还有务必对题目要求、所写题目（或拟定题目）耐心推敲、查缺补漏，把错误降到最低限度。 看图写作步骤 第一个步骤第一要看好：审好题 根据所给的图片写一篇大约80-100词的短文。短文通常要求：表达意思连贯、 字迹工整，语法正确，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥；不得逐句翻译，不得出现真实校名和人名等。 确定写作基本六要素: 5W1Hwhen 何时 where 何地 who 何人 why 为何 what 何事 how 如何 这个过程必须努力做到以下四个方面：审文体、审时态、审人称、审要求典型事例 提示语: g

5、o boating 划船 fall into 掉入里 pull v. 拉 save v. 救 dangerous adj. 危险的 看图作文 1 ：以下是李辉上周星期天上午 和他父母去公园旅行里所发生的事。请根 据事情发生先后顺序，写一篇短文。 要求：1.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合 乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：80100。 第一副图：他们在公园里散步。 第二副图：他们在湖面上划船。 第三副图：李辉掉进湖水里。 第四副图： 妈妈跳进湖里把李辉推上船。第一副图: They walked in the park. 第二幅图: They went boating in the lake.第

6、三副图: Li Hui fell down into the water. 第四幅图: Mother jumped into the water to pushed LiHui into the boat. Last Sunday morning, LiHui went to the park with his parents. First, they walked in the park for about an hour.Then they went boating together in the lake.There were a lot of beautiful fish in the

7、 water.LiHui was so excited that he wanted to catch the fish in the water very much. Suddenly,LiHui fell into the water. He was so frightened that he cried for help loudly.His mother jumped into the water at once and she lifted him out of the water. His father pulled him to sit in the boat. Li Hui w

8、as saved at last. How dangerous the trip was！第二个步骤第二要找点：抓住要点 明确图片所提供信息中的主要行为。做到一幅图，一个要点；在抓住要点时，能正确使用人称代词和物主代词，配对动词、形容词、副词、连词、介词和数词等；能正确运用时态和语态等。看图作文2: 以下是魏敏今天所做的事情。请根据事情发展先后顺序，写一篇的短文。要求：1.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：80100。 典型事例提示语： Womens Day 妇女节 go shopping 购物 do some cleaning 扫地 cook v. 烹饪 ha

9、ppy adj. 快乐的第一幅图：今天三月八日，是妇女节。第二幅图：魏敏去购物，买了一些肉和青菜。第三幅图：魏敏在厨房里打扫卫生。第四幅图：妈妈下班回家，见到晚饭很高兴。第一幅图: Today is March 8th,Womens Day.第二幅图: WeiMing went shopping.He bought some meat and vegetables.第三幅图:WeiMing did some cleaning in the kitchen.第四幅图: Mum went home from work. He was very glad to see the dinner. Tod

10、ay is March 8th . It is Womens Day.Wei Ming went shopping after school in the afternoon.He bought some meat and vegetables in the shop.He did some cleaning in the kitchen after he got home. He worked very hard. He cooked dinner for his mother after he finished cleaning the kitchen. He tried to get e

11、verything ready before his mother came back home from work. His mother was very happy to see the dinner on the table. She said he was a good boy.He said happy Womens Day to his mother.Though he was very busy this afternoon, he was very happy to cook dinner for his mother.第三要表述：正确陈述 根据所给图片正确使用时态。务必确定

12、使用的是一般现在时态，现在进行时态，一般过去时态，过去进行时还是现在完成时态等，努力做到正确扩写句子。看图写作 3: 请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，描述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。要求：1.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：80100。 典型事例提示语：invite v. 邀请 beer n. 啤酒 get drunk 喝醉的 run into 撞入 injure v. 受伤 fine v. 罚款 revoke v. 吊销 第一幅图：叔叔和朋友聚会、喝酒 第二幅图：叔叔和朋友道别、酒后驾车 第三幅图：叔叔出交通事故、受伤 第四幅图：叔叔住院、警察吊销驾照 第

13、一幅图：Uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He drank a lot of beers and he got drunk. 第二幅图：His friends tried to persuade him not to drive to his home but he didnt listen to them. He said “ No problem ”.第三幅图: He was winding his way in the street. His car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured

14、 but he was still alive. 第四幅图：He had to stay in hospital for a few days because he was badly injured. He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked. Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so excited that he drank a lot of beer. At last, he got drunk.

15、 After the dinner, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didnt listen to them, he said “No problem”. Then he got into the car and drove away. Several minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The

16、 police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unluckily, he had to stay in hospital for a few days and he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked. 第四要成面：连词成文 选择使用通俗易懂、正确的单词和句子来陈述图片形成短文。词与词之间的搭配，句子与句子之间的相连都要正确、通顺、连贯、合乎逻辑，符合文法。根据写作内容的需要，在保证不偏题的条件下，应可适当发挥增加短文细节，并努力做到短文的开头

17、和结尾相互照应，避免漏掉不写发表两到三句的个人观点或看法这个要求，以免造成被认为内容写得不够全面、不够完整而被扣一定分数的理由。看图写作 4: 请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，描述上周星期天发生在海滩的事。要求：1.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：80100。 典型事例提示语： beach n. 海滩 wave v. 挥动 jump up 跳起来 run toward to 向跑去 carry back 背回 brave adj. 勇敢 第一幅图： 约翰正躺在沙滩上听音乐。 第二幅图：突然听到有人喊救命声音。 第三幅图: 约翰赶紧向小孩跑去。 第四幅图:

18、约翰把小孩救上岸来。 第一幅图：John was lying on the beach and listening to the radio. 第二幅图：Suddenly he heard someone calling help. 第三幅图: He ran toward to the boy at once.第四幅图: He carried the boy back to the beach. The boy was saved. John is a foreign student. He is studying Chinese in Shenzhen Middle School. He i

19、s very kind and helpful. He is always ready to help others. Last Sunday afternoon, the weather was very sunny. He came to the beach for relaxing as usual. He was lying on the beach and listening to the radio when he suddenly heard someone calling for help. He jumped up quickly. He looked out toward

20、the sea and saw a little boy waving his hands in the air. He took off his clothes and jumped into the water. He swam to the little boy and carried him back to the beach. What a brave student John is! We should learn from him.看图作文专项练习题1. 最近媒体对“中国式过马路”这一现象进行了尖锐的批评，请你以一个中学生的角色，写一篇短文，对“中国式过马路” 这一现象加以评述。

21、 【2013四川宜宾】 注 意1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称。2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 词数：80词左右，不可逐字翻译。3. 参考词语：红绿灯 traffic lights 缺乏交通安全意识 lack traffic safety awareness 遵守交通规则 obey the traffic rulesChinese Styles of Crossing StreetsChinese styles of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently. 和谐，玉润心田；文明，风暖校园。情节和下面

22、所提供的漫画和提示词，以 “ Doing our part ” ( 从我做起 ) 为题写一篇短文。 【2013 浙江湖州】 内容必须包括1. 简单描述图中人物行为，并简述你的看法；2. 发表你的校园文明倡议。提示词：talk loudly; drop litter; save food; get along well with要求：1. 条理清楚，又表明自己观点的句子；可适当发挥。2. 文中不能出现校名、人名、地名等真实信息。3. 80100词。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Doing Our Part From the picture, we can see that the boy3.

23、根据所给图画, 用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。 【2013山东济南】 参考词汇： blind adj. 盲的, 瞎的 stick n. 拐杖 praise v. 赞扬 precious adj. 珍贵的 写一篇题为“Take action to realize our dreams”的英语短文。你的短文应包括以下内容:(1) 描述图片内容，如情景、人物(Frank)、动作等；并简要表达你的观点；(2) 谈谈你的梦想，及如何实现。 【2013年江苏连云港】注意：(1) 词数80-100左右，短文首段已经给出，不计入总词数；(2) 文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。提示语：

24、 dream v. 梦想 lie v. 躺 without pre. 没有 fail v.失败 improve v. 改善 Take action to realize our dreams All of us have dreams, but how can we realize our dreams?_参考答案 1. Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently. Nowadays, many people cross streets without looking at th

25、e traffic lights. Why? I think there are two main reasons. Some people lack traffic safety awareness. Besides, some people are so hurry that they dont want to wait for the green lights. However, it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others. So I hope something must be done to avoid traff

26、ic accidents. For example, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished. As middle school students, we should obey the traffic rules. Whats more, I will try my best to advise people to obey the rules. Only in this way can we cross streets safely. 2. Doing Our Part From the picture, we can see

27、 the boy is dropping litter outside the trash bin. The ground looks dirty. I think what he does is wrong. As middle school students, it is our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful. We shouldnt talk loudly in public. Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school. Never w

28、aste food while eating in the dining room. Also we are supposed to get on well with the classmates. Being polite to teachers is also very important. In a word, if every can do out part, we can make a difference to the world. 3.Last weekend Xiaoming went to the park with his mother and sister. It was sunny and there were some people and traffics in it. They played very happily. When they wanted to have taken photos, Xiaoming saw an old blind man far from them, he was walking with