M4作文约稿信carl教学课件

1、Writing CarlReading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.阅读对于我们心灵之重要，犹如运动对于身体一样。每日一句我们也对美国高中生的生活感兴趣。(张嘉慧)We are also interested in the senior high students life in America. (这是谓语！)她是一个对各种创意点子感兴趣的发明家，她写了一篇关于创意的有趣文章。(黄俊)She is an inventor interested in creative ideas, writing an interesting art

2、icle concerning creativity.(这是后置定语!)Proof-readingIm writing a letter to invite you to write a article for our column.Please send me the article before June 28 and I will appreciate you.(既不地道又有语法错误)You can share you after-class activities to us.It is one of the most popular newspapers in our school t

3、hat most students can learn some words and English grammar, so that we students very like it!I will appreciate it if the article could be handed in before June 28.anyourthrough which/wherewithlike it very much5. My school newspaper have a column named “Foreign Culture” want to introduce American fes

4、tival and the teenagers life in the US.have-haswant to 既有语法错误又不地道concerning introducing/aimed at introducingFestival-festivalsMy school newspaper has a column named “Foreign Culture” concerning introducing American festivals and the teenagers life in the US.6. I am writing a letter telling you what

5、there is a interesting section in our newspaper.7. The topic is aimed at writting an article to introduce the festival and life styles of an America.that there is anwritingAmerican 回初中去吧！ 高考题型链接 书面表达 满分25分 （Homework）（2015-6-8）全国新课标I卷高考英语作文：假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。一、要点如下

6、：1、栏目介绍；2、稿件内容3、稿件长度：约400字4、交稿日期：6月28日前注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。4.尝试学过的词组句型和模板DearPeter, Im lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon. Yours, Li HuaOutline写作提纲根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一段：问候+写信背景(我校办杂志)+写信目的( “求助信“写法)第二段：主题句+拓展句1(介绍外国生活)+拓展句2(介绍外国节日)+拓展句3(不少于400字)+拓展句4(6.28前交)第三段：我希望(你能帮助我

7、)。我相信(大家会喜欢你的文章)。感谢你(读我的信)。请回信!Words and Phrases1.邀请某人做某事Invite/ask sb to do sth2. 为写一篇文章write an article for 3.校英语报the schools English newspaper3.目的是为了in order to do=with the aim to do=be aimed at doing sth4. 使某人了解make/help sb know something aboutintroduce sth to sb5.设定栏目来刊登Set up columns/sections

8、to publish6. 受到欢迎Be popular with/among7.登载着外国学生写关于的文章carry articles written by foreign students about=There are articles written by foreign students aboutin it.8.一听到这个消息On hearing the news9.迫不及待告诉你Cant wait to tell you about sth10. 热烈欢迎关于的稿件Welcome articles aboutWelcome you to contribute to11. 稿件要求r

9、equirementsabout the article12. 美国人如何度过节假日How America spend their holidays and festivals13. 高中生日常生活the life of American high school students14. 任何相关的内容Anything relevant/concerned15. 只要As/so long asOn condition that16.寓教于乐interesting and informative17.要求要be expected/required/asked to do18. 交稿hand in

10、ones articles19.截止到x月x日Be due on/ the deadline is20.不超过400字的文章An article within/in 400 wordsSentence Patterns约稿信中常见句型归纳1. 我想请你为我们校英文报写一篇文章。 Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.介绍栏目的句子你将投稿的外国文化部分在我们学生中非常受欢迎。 The “Foreign Cultures” section where you are expected to

11、 contribute articles（定语从句） in our newspaper is very popular among/with us students.3. 这个部分通常刊载外国学生写的关于他们国家文化的文章。It carries articles written by foreign friends about/concerning/regarding the cultures of their home countries. 约稿句子请问您愿意写点关于你们美国的文章吗？Would you please write something about the culture in

12、your part of the United States/back America?我们尤其欢迎关于美国人如何度过节假日和高中生日常生活的文章。we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. 5. 你可以写任何相关文章只要你认为其寓教于乐。You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and

13、 informative.6. 400个字就行了。400 words would be fine. =The article is supposed to be within 400 words.7. 请问您能够在7月28号之前截稿吗？Could we have your article before June 28?We wonder if it is practicable to have it before June 28?Have 小词大用可以秒杀无数大词！Ending 8. 期待尽快收到您的回复/确认Looking forward to your reply/confirmation

14、!Format模板一：Dear 被约稿人 ，Id like to ask you to write an article for 某媒体 .The “ 某栏目 ” section in our 某媒体 is very popular among 某些媒体受众 to 做某事 . It carries articles written by 某些别的被约稿人 about the 某些话题 . Would you please write something about 某些话题 ? And we would especially welcome articles about A方面 and B方面

15、 . You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 某数量 words would be fine. Could we have your article before 某日期 ?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,写信人名字模板二:Dear PeterId like to ask you to write an article for 某媒体 .The “ 某栏目 ” section provides a nice platform

16、for 某些媒体受众 to 做某事 . In this section there are a wide variety of materials available to 这些媒体受众 . And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for. To begin with, not only can you write something about A方面 , but also you can focus on B方面 . Whats more, your article can have a titl

17、e made up by yourself with a vocabulary of 某数量 or so. Last but not least, you are supposed to subscribe your article by 某日期 . I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours,写信人名字Model Letters3 recommended versionsDear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our school

18、s English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especia

19、lly welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing fro

20、m you.Yours,Li Hua Dear PeterId like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The“Foreign Cultures”section provides a nice platform for us students to learn more about foreign cultures. In this section there are a wide variety of English materials available to English learne

21、rs. And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for. To begin with, not only can you write something about the life of American high school students, but also you can focus on the ways you Americans spend your festivals. Whats more, your article can have a title made up by you

22、rself with a vocabulary of 400 or so. Last but not least, you are supposed to subscribe your article by June 28th. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours,Li HuaDearPeter, IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.InordertomakestudentsknowmoreaboutAmericanculture, ourschoolhasdecidedtosetupacolumn to publish some articles written byAmericanstudents.Hearingthenews, Iwasveryhappy. Icouldntwaittotellyouaboutit.AsfarasIknowyouareverygoodatwritingandyoualwaysdreamofbecominga writerinthefuture.Ithinki