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1、海龙 603 精讲 B Day 2TPO 23议题：yellow cedar总论点：为啥下降？1.虫2.棕熊3.冻伤根部3.3 Aernment should focus its budget more on young children educationn on universities.同意。小孩学习能力更强。To begin with, younger children definiy learn faster.众所周知，低龄小孩的力要明显比他们的大学对应物更好。As is known to all, younger children is much better at memoriz

2、ingn their college countarts.如果不能充分利用这一点优势的话，大学生注定要付出 N 倍的努力。If we cannot fully harness/exploit/utilize this advantage, college students are doomed to spend tons of effort tocatch up.这就是为什么中国自古以来就会让小孩去背三Three Character Classic、唐诗三百首。This is the reason why ancient Chiwould require children to memoriz

3、e Three Character Classic and The 300poems from the Tang Dynasty.虽然小孩当时不懂，但随着增长，他会逐渐开始理解。True, children cannot fully grasp the essence of suaterials, but, as they grow older, they will gradually begounderstand.而如果长大再学，基本已经背不下来。On the other hand, if college students were required to memorize the same

4、 material, it is highly likely they will notplish the task.因此，只有侧重将财政拨款 fiscal subsidies 都花在初、中等教育上，才能确保在孩子学习的黄金能够最有效的利用他们有效的时间。Consequently, only if theernment spend most of its fiscal subsidies on prind secondary education canstudentsize their period/time of the golden age of learning/study.TPO 26

5、议题：ZM 鱼总论点：扩张不能被组织+减少其他鱼的数量1.History / Ballast water2.Dominate, no predator3.Compete for foodThe reading and listening have a debate on zebra mus. The reading bevest its spread to Normericacannot be stopped and it threatens the areas fish population, which is refuted by the following lecturer., the

6、reading claimst historical trendggestt the spread cannot be stopped, sincehe past, themus spread through ballast water carried by ships. However, the professor argues there are new ways to preventthis from happening. For exle, ships can be required to empty their ballast water and refill the ship wi

7、th oceanwater, as salt water will kill all the mus.让步段写作：大城市更好还是小城市更好？大城市更好。1.吃的更好2.更好让步段主旨句：Of course/admittedly/granted, some might argue t small cities have better air quality. I agree with the claim tosome extent. I know this from myal experience.适当展开（25）（一定控制好语气）Every time when I fly back to Be

8、ijing on an airplane, the grey color of the sky would sicken me. When the dooropens after the landing, I would cough violently.转折However, as soon as I put on my spel-ordered 3M mask, all myfort would instantly disappear.该不该爬珠穆朗玛？该爬。1.为国争光2.强身健体3.让步：我承认，确实可能会摔死。Do you agree or disagree with the follo

9、wing sement? Competition betn friends usually negatively impactsfriendships. Use specific details and exles to support your opinion.To begin with, competition actually enhanfriendship.Admittedly, some might arguet people who care too much about wins and losses can only be negativelyinfluenced by com

10、petition. This is true to some extent.+ 适当展开For exle, once there was a badmon competition in New Oriental. Foosen and Tianyi entered the finals, andthey had been best friends. Unfortunay, both of them had held extremely high expecion to win because theyboth invited their boyfriends to watch.he end,

11、Foosen lost by a mere 2 pos. He feltt he lost all his faceand thus angrily smashed his racket to the ground and left without a word.+转折However, this is notof story. As soon as Foosens boyfriend told himt he looked so cute, even afterlosing the game, he realized what he had lost. So he called Tianyi

12、immediay, and invited him to his house.Something good happened. Soon aftert, they both broke up with their boyfriends ande a nice coupletogether, and lives happily thereafter.让步段错误汇总：在家看好还是院看好？家里好。诚然，有人觉得院屏幕大，音效好，更震撼，更容易投入。但是，可以把家里布置的很像院。离家近赚钱少的工作好，还是离家远高薪的工作好？高薪离家远的工作好。诚然，有人说家近钱少能多跟家人一起面对面吃饭。但是，高薪离

13、家远可以 WeChat，还可以给家人在过节时买。是否应该投钱给没有实用价值的研究？该。诚然，有人说浪费钱，并没有近期内的利益。但是，就是天天琢磨树上为什么掉苹果，才想出了三大定律。有家人帮助以后，现在更容易成功了。同意。支持段：现在人都有钱，可以借给亲戚。诚然，有人说其实好多家人现在都不愿意帮助亲戚，很抠门。但是，我爸就很大方。他老借别人钱，所以借钱那些人都成功了。让步段练习：1.决定同意还是。2.想出支持段理由3.想出对方反驳的理由（让步段主旨句）4.想出自然的转折2.1穿衣能看出性格。Agree.理由：花狸狐哨 张扬让步段理由：不同场合穿着不同。有时看不出来有少数特殊的场合可能看不出来。正装晚宴。让步段转折：但是私下里的穿衣是可以