Celebrationwriting“衡水赛”一等奖-完整精讲版课件

1、(Module 2) Unit 3 Celebration Communication workshopWritingClassical MusicMozart Beethoven In todays class, we are going to 1. write a description of a birthday; 2. use correct time linking words to make your passage well-connected. Objectives What are they doing?have a birthday partyBrainstormingHo

2、w do people celebrate birthdays ? With whom?Where？What to do？What to eat & drink? Feelings?Who do you usually celebrate your birthday with? classmates family members friendsWhere do you usually celebrate your birthday? at home in a restaurant in the classroom in the parkin the open air What do you u

3、sually eat and drink? birthday cakesfruitssoft drinks orange juicetea & coffeesnacksWhat do you usually do during your party? sing songsdanceplay games take pictureschat How do you feel ? have a good timefeel excited be happyWriting Help 1. Outline 2.Linking wordsA description of a party usually inc

4、ludes: 2. The beginning:What preparations? What food and drinks? What happened during? What happened in the end? When did it finish? Feelings? 1.Introduction :When? Where? Why? Who? 3. Development:4.Conclusion: II. Using time linking words correctly can make the article clear and closely-connected.

5、First of allafter thatduringlaterthenwhennextin the endbeforeWrite a description of your party. 上周是你的生日，你举行了一个生日聚会。请用英文描述这次聚会的过程。A. Introduction: Why? What? Where? When? Who?B. Beginning: Preparations? Food and drinks?C. Development: What happened during the party?D. Conclusion: When did it finish?

6、Your feelings?1.Four parts: 2. Time linking words: before, first of all, after that, during, later, then, next, when, as soon as, in the end1.Four parts: A. Introduction: Why? What? Where? When? Who?B. Beginning: Preparations? Food and drinks?C. Development: What happened during the party?D. Conclus

7、ion: When did it finish? Your feelings?1.Four parts: 1.Four parts: A. Introduction: Why? What? Where? When? Who?B. Beginning: Preparations? Food and drinks?C. Development: What happened during the party?D. Conclusion: When did it finish? Your feelings?1.Four parts: 上周是你的生日，你举行了一个生日聚会。请用英文描述这次聚会的过程。1

8、.Four parts: 1.Four parts: A Possible Version : Last week I held a big party at home to celebrate my birthday. I invited my family members and some friends. Several neighbors attended the party as well. Before the party, we prepared some cakes and fruits. We also made some orange juice. Then my fami

9、ly and friends started coming. They brought some beautiful presents for me, including flowers, sweets and books. After that I served them with fruits and soft drinks. Later, my parents cooked some food and we had a big meal. After dinner, we cut and ate the birthday cake happily. Theysang birthday s

10、ong for me. Next we had all kinds of activities, such as singing ,dancing, playing games and so on. We took many photos as well. The party lasted three hours. In the end all the guests left my house at 11:00. I felt very excited. I had a good time on my birthday! Share your writing with your group m

11、embers. If there are any mistakes, please correct them.Thinking What do Chinese people usually do to celebrate the Spring Festival? go shopping Before the Spring FestivalWe put up Spring Festival couplets, paper-cuts to create the atmosphere On Spring Festival Eveeat dumplingsOn Spring Festival Evewatch the Spring Festival party On Spring Festival Evehave family reunion dinnerOn New Years Dayset off fireworksOn New Years Day get gift money On New Years Day My Memories of the Spring FestivalWritingHomework:Homework: Write a descriptio