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1、范文赏析 Today, more and more students go to school with mobile phones. Students attitudes towards this vary from person to person. Those who support this say it helps students to keep in touch with their parents and friends. Moreover, using mobile phones can be fun. However, other students hold the opp

2、osite opinion. They think that using mobile phones can cause problems.Firstly, students with mobile phones at school do not concentrate on studying during class, but play games or send text messages instead. Besides, it costs a lot to use a mobile phone. As for me, there is no denying that using mob

3、ile phones has its advantages, but Id still prefer students to use them at home because study should come first.第1页 书面表示系列讲练 之 赢取高分策略 第2页NMET书面表示评分标准1、先依据文章内容,语言和整体感觉初步确定档次。第五档. 2125分第四档. 1620分第三档. 1115分第二档. 610分 第一档. 15分 0分第3页语言地道，规范覆盖全部内容关键点2、主要内容： 内容关键点； 词汇和语法数量和准确性； 上下文连贯； 语言得体性应用了较多语法结构和词汇有效地使用

4、了语句间连接成份第4页3、拼写和标点是语言准确性一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际影响程度给予考虑。第5页4、词数少于80和多于120，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。第6页 技 巧1. 使用较高级词汇3. 使用恰当连接词词汇反应你知识贮存量多少，也是衡量英语水平一个主要标志。利用得当句子结构能够给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章所以而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”文章很主要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表示效果技巧2. 使用较丰富句式第7页1. Because the weather was good, our journey was com

5、fortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎样使用较高级词汇We all think highly of him .A g

6、ood idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.第8页二 丰富句式：(惯用到句型结构） 利用不一样句型来表示同一个意思， 能增加文章文采。1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old g

7、ranny. I do hope you can come if possible.第9页3、 倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短语 e.g. I saw a youn

8、g lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.第10页6、 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We s

9、hould do a favour to whoever needs help at present.第11页8、 各种状语从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airpor

10、t. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. 第12页三 高考纲领中惯用连接词1.表示递进; 另外，还有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示转折关系 不过， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.第13页3. 表示因果关系 因为，所以，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; ther

11、efore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系 假如，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 不然: or else第14页5. 表示时间关系 当 时候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 以后， 然后: later; afterwards 很快: soon 最近: lately; recently 自从 :since 从那时起: from then on 常见对称关系过渡词语1. For one thing, for ano

12、ther thing, 2. On one hand, on the other hand, 第15页6. 表示特定次序关系 首先， 最主要: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最终: finally; in the end；last but not least7. 换一个方法表述 换句话说: in other words; that is to say; 第16页8. 进行举例说明 比如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陈说事实 实际上: in fact; actually; as a

13、 matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth第17页10. 对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word；in conclusion; ;. To sum up ; in brief 其它惯用到表示1.in terms of 就而言2.as far as be concerned 3. in my opinion/ view 4. As far as I know 5. As for sb,第18页假设你是星光中学李华，将参加主题为“Let

14、s Ride Bicycles”英语演讲比赛。 请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包含： 1汽车即使便利但带来空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2骑自行车益处，如节能环境保护、 有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活 lowcarbon life节能 energy saving 注意： 1. 词数： 120词左右； 2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出， 且该部分不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles” _ _ _第19页Dear

15、classmates, Im very glad to have this chance to talk to you. The topic of my speech is Lets ride a bicycle. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some

16、 problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off w

17、aste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is good for our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you for listening!第20页春季高考作文给澳大利亚朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生学习和生活带来改变。 I will tell you the cha

18、nges of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV.

19、 I go to bed at 10:00 now.17分第21页高考满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We co

20、uld not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the con

21、trary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.第22页书面表示惯用语句书信 Thanks for your last letter. I am writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: 开 头 Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you! Thanks for your consideration. Do remember me to your parents! 结 尾第23页2. 叙事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很显然) There is no doubt that (毫无疑问) Take as an example. (以为例） On one hand, on the o