中考英语写作指导(书面表达)话题10健康与安全课件

1、话题10 健康与安全命题探索教材链接三阶攻关目录写作练兵 分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“健康与安全”这一话题，河北并未考查。但分析全国近年真题发现，此话题在中考中出现频率较高，常见的命题角度有：谈论健康饮食、如何保持健康以及如何保证自身安全等。命题探索人教课本中涉及“健康与安全”这个话题的单元有：八(上)Unit 2 How often do you exercise？；八(下)Unit 1 Whats the matter?教材链接(2019怀化改编) 对于每个人来说，生命只有一次。注意安全是善待和珍惜生命的一种有效途径。请你根据所给提示和要求，以“Protect ourse

2、lves, cherish(珍爱) our lives”为题，写一篇短文。典例剖析一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审主题：保护自己，珍爱生命；审人称：第一人称；审时态：一般现在时提示：(1)Get on well with our classmates, not fight.(2)Never swim alone and swim in dangerous places. (3)Follow the traffic rules.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句要点1：和同学友好相处，不要打架要点2：不要独自游泳以及在危险的地方游泳要点3：遵守交通规则要求：(1)短文须包括所有提

3、示内容，可适当发挥。 (2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 (3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 Protect ourselves, cherish our lives Life is only once for everybody. Its important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do?_1. I dont like hamburgers for dinner.I dont like hamburgers for dinner because the

4、y are not healthy.七(上)Unit 6 P352. We think the best way to relax is through exercise.We think the best way to relax is through exercise. It is healthy for the mind and the body.1角度如何保持健康一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子扩写范例】3. I think you should lie down and rest. I think you should lie down and rest. If you

5、r head and neck still hurt tomorrow, then go to see a doctor.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1. You need to keep a balanced diet.(扩写结果) _ 2. We shouldnt eat food that goes bad.(扩写原因) _ _ You need to keep a balanced diet. It is good for your health.We shouldnt eat food that goes bad because it will do harm to ou

6、r health.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子扩写】3. I think we should get enough sleep during the night.(扩写原因) _ _4. You can drink some hot water.(扩写结果) _ You can drink some hot water. It is healthy for your body.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句I think we should get enough sleep during the night. If we stay up late, we would

7、 feel sleepy during the class.1. Its easy to slip and fall down on a wet floor. Be sure to keep the bathroom floor dry after you have a shower.2. If you are outside when an earth quake happens, get to an open area as fast as you can. Stay away from buildings and trees.3. I dont think sixteenyearolds

8、 should be allowed to drive. Im worried about your safety.九(全)Unit 7 P492角度如何保证自身安全一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【好句范例】【句子仿写】1. 在你进入房间之后，确保你的门是关着的。 _2. 如果有危险，你应该尽快离开。 _3. 我认为你不应该独自在河里游泳。那可能有危险。 _ _Be sure to keep your door closed after you come into the room.If there is a danger, you should leave as soon as y

9、ou can.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句I dont think you should go swimming alone in the river. It may be dangerous. In order to keep healthy, I _(方法1). Every meal I keep a balanced diet, and I _(方法2), which_(原因). In my spare time, I _(方法3), such as _(举例). get up early and run for an hour every day 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成

10、篇章二阶写好句练语段保持健康eat many green vegetables and fruitare good fortake part in many activitiesswimming, dancing and traveling with friendsmy health语段练习1 it is wise to go together with our classmates As teenagers, we know it is important to keep safe on our way to school and home. As for this problem, Id

11、like to share my advice on keeping safe. Above all, _(建议1). Second, on our way to school, _(建议2). And whats more, _(建议3). Then, _(建议4). its necessary to be careful when we make new friends一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句保证自身安全wed better not stay outside for a long timewe are supposed to know some basic ways to

12、keep ourselves safe语段练习2一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章Protect ourselves, cherish our lives Life is only once for everybody. Its important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Dont fight with them. If we really have trouble in comm

13、unicating with them, we can tell the problem to our teachers. Second, we shouldnt swim alone and swim in dangerous places. Whats more, now there are more and more cars. So we must follow the traffic rules. We should walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Safety comes first. So we must

14、be careful at any moment. (2019承德县一模)请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。写作练兵写作练兵提示：(1)What can you see in the picture? (2)What should you do if you want to keep a healthy body?要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (2)短文中不要出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 (3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)参考词汇：overweight(超重的), eating habits写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵 In the pict

15、ure, I can see _ an overweight boy eating some food and he wants more. Nowadays, more and more people are overweight. Obviously, being too fat is harmful to health. There are quite a few ways to lose weight and keep fit.写作练兵_ First, we should form good eating habits. We are supposed to eat more vegetables and less meat. Remember to