高中英语读后续写素材积累1

1、读后续写素材积累1一、境描述的素材境描述分客和主两种角度:客从境事物自己下手,主从察者角度描述。平时在描述主客交替行,主描述比重稍大。客境描述:Part1境描述的adj要求:有声,有色,有感,有味道thebluesky(天)thesongsofbirds()thethunderingclouds(光雷)thefragileflowers(嫩的花);(thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚)thegreengrass(青草)thefragrantroses(的玫瑰);thesetting/risingsun(斜阳/渐渐升起的太阳)Part2境描述的verb(vi&vt)要求)

2、.Wind(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一吹,吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条,就像卷起的窗帘。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.,柔却寒冷,点着枝,着斜坡下的灌木。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.凉爽的微吹拂着沉静的公园。4.Acoldbreeze

3、waftedthroughmyhair.冷(吹拂我的)Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.(今日正是放筝的晴日气,的力了筝的上升。).Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)声音:1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某,潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurfa

4、ce.水是深色的,阳光在透明的玻璃表面光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.离此不,有一条小溪,在色的河岸奔耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.忧如它在温柔低,就一位天真少女着她那慈的母私。(action,sound,colour).Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.

5、天空是的灰色,伴着的云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar的天空高高立主境描述:1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人某物(状/作/被).2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/听到/感觉/到某物(状/被)3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是这样.致使于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/光景使我这样陶醉/惊/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower光景我完好惊呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike光景看起来像二、景描述

6、的素材(来自原著:追筝的人)Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.(放风筝的场景描述,从各个角度,立体描述

7、)空中已经挂着最少二十来只风筝,仿佛纸制的鲨鱼,巡游搜猎食品。不到一个钟头,这个数字翻了一番,红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞,熠熠生辉。寒冷的细风吹过我的头发。这风正合适放风筝,风速不大,恰好能让风筝飘浮起来,也便于控制。2.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄蓝,波平如镜,阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovet

8、hetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.(场景、比喻)我抬初步,看见两只红色的风筝,带着长长的蓝色尾巴,在天空中渐渐升起。它们舞动着,飞越公园西边的树林,飞越风车,并排飘浮着,仿佛一双眼睛俯视着旧金山,这个我现在看作家园的城市。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.Creekswh

9、ereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby.(场景、比喻)天空一碧如洗,阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流取水漂,到了夏天它们也枯竭了。黄包车嗒嗒走过,扬起阵阵灰尘。5.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefain

10、tsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音,还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风轻轻拂动树枝,吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面,水流在山谷淌动,传来阵阵稍微的声音。6.Bythreeoclock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark.(天气)到三点时,雨停了,铅灰色的天空阴云密布,一阵寒风吹过公园。7.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthe

11、cracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.(情形)太阳开始下山,那些岌岌可危的房子的裂缝中,溢出闪闪的红色斜晖。三、描述时间,动作,心理和感情)、感情好词:1.喜乐Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石相同闪闪发光。Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface他.脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里缭绕。Hiseyestwinkl

12、edwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。Awildgaiety(快乐)tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石相同闪闪发光,嘴角保持着牢固的微笑。Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我快乐得难以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface她.脸上带着灿烂的笑容。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照

13、亮了整个房间。Sheshedtearsofjoy.她快乐得流下了眼泪。Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激动得满脸通红。Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起欢乐。Iwasfloatingonair.我飘扬在空中。Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛显露出快乐的神情。2.气愤:Iwasseizedbyanger我.充满了气愤。Hewasfuming

14、withrage.他气得雷霆之怒。Hisangerboiledover.他的气愤爆发了。Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因气愤而颤抖。Hegavemealookofburninganger他.气愤地看了我一眼。Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒目着我。Heflaredupattheword.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得神

15、情阴沉。3.悲Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着,眼泪着面流了下来。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness我.飘扬在悲的海洋里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears她.的手在抖。她快要哭了。Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine听.到个信息,他望地把悲淹没在酒里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房。Shesob

16、bed,hidingherfaceinherhands她.掩面哭泣。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充了泪水。Afrown(眉)nowstoodonhisface.他起了眉。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他坐在那处,着一郁。Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.信息使他上蒙上了一阴影。Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen.他是悲Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他陶醉在沉痛之中。Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.些日子他情低落。4.害怕:Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他身来,眼里充了害怕。Fearslowlycreepsuponher.害怕慢慢地延长到她身上。Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen.她感觉害怕Shewaschokedbyfear她.因害怕而窒息。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她色白地站在那处,舌打。Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一害怕。/害怕淹没了他。Her