全国二卷高考教学英语作文分析

1、WORD文档第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件见告你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达希望。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以合适增加细节，以使行文连结。排球队队长captainoftheschoolvolleyballteam.DearChris,ImLiHua,captainoftheschoolvolleyballteam.Imwritingtoinformyouoftheupcomingtournamentthatyoushouldpreparefor.Thethree-weektournamentissch

2、eduledtobeheldinthenewlybuiltstadiumearlynextmonth.Youbeingamemberoftheteam,properpreparationonyourpartwouldbeappreciated.Forstarters,pleasecomeupwithaworkoutscheduleandsticktoitsothatyoucangetinshapesoon.Secondly,youshouldattendteamtrainingsessionsandmeetingstostudyouropponentstogetherwiththeteamma

3、tes.Sincetheschoolattachesgreatimportancetothistournament,Ihopewecandevoteourselvestobecomingastrongerteamandaqualifiedchampion.Sincerely,LiHua本文为通知队友做赛前准备的应用文。题目中比赛可以是一场比赛(theupcomingvolleyballgame)，也可以是多场比赛(theupcomingvolleyballtournament)。本文采用多场比赛进行写作。在开头说明写信妄图后，依照文章要点张开写作，结构为：第一段：1主句，同位语。2主句（inf

4、ormsbofsth），定语从句。第二段：主句（bescheduled被动语态）。2独立主格，主句（onyourpart搭配）。3Forstarters，1祈使句，结果状语从句。4Secondly，主句（神情动词）。第三段：1原因状语从句，主句（devoteourselvestodoingsth）。若是采用一场比赛进行写作，则可对文章做以下变动DearChris,ImLiHua,captainoftheschoolvolleyballteam.Imwritingtoinformyouoftheupcomingvolleyballgamethatyoushouldpreparefor.Thega

5、meisscheduledtobeheldinthenewlybuiltstadiumnextSunday.Youbeingamemberoftheteam,properpreparationonyourpartwouldbeappreciated.Forstarters,pleasecomeupwithaworkoutscheduleandsticktoitsothatyoucangetinshapesoon.Secondly,youshouldattendtheteamtrainingsessionsandmeetingstostudythevisitingteamtogetherwiththeteammates.Sincetheschoolattachesgreatimportancetothisgame,Ihopewecandevote