概要写作116-From-Page-to-Screen(课件)-高考英语作文新题型

1、 Summary Summary 概要写作文本主题、体裁与结构解读文本各段落要点精读表达微技能之高度概括篇牛刀小试参考范文欣赏 概要写作体裁：主题：结构：1.文本主题、体裁与结构解读体裁：主题：结构：1.文本主题、体裁与结构解读主题AdaptationsA. authors opinion on adaptationsB. the origin of adaptationsC. causes for adaptations failureD. some experts opinions主题AdaptationsA. authors opini体裁：A. argumentation（议论文）B.

2、 exposition(说明文) C. narration（记叙文）主题：结构：1.文本主题、体裁与结构解读the authors opinion on adaptations and the causes for adaptations failure 体裁：A. argumentation（议论文）主题：结构结构Cause 1issue Cause 2Cause 3Cause 4结构Cause 1issue Cause 2Cause 3C体裁：A. argumentation（议论文）B. exposition(说明文) C. narration（记叙文）主题：结构：the authors

3、 opinion on adaptations and the causes for failure Para 1Para 3Para 2Para 5Para 4argumentation1.文本主题、体裁与结构解读体裁：A. argumentation（议论文）主题：结构Reading a book and watching a film are two very different experiences, but its normal to have high expectations when a film of a favourite book is made. There are

4、very many times I have been disappointed by a film of a book I love. The films can be adapted from classic novels, short stories, comic books and stage plays, as well as non-fictions, even those written by ghostwriters. All can work well, but why do many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences a

5、nd critics?2.文本各段落要点精读A. All the films are very good.B. All kinds of books can be adapted to fimls.C. All the books are very good.Main idea:Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics, which may arise from different reasons.关注连词Reading a book and watching aA key question is obviousl

6、y how close to the original the film is. Since a typical film is only around two hours long, it becomes a question for the screenwriters to decide what to leave out and how to write the dialogue. Sometimes there may be changes to the plot, additions, and even different endings. I, like many people,

7、have often left the cinema feeling “the film is not like the book”.2.文本各段落要点精读Main idea: The key reason is that the film is not like the original, since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes.becauseA key question is obviously h Another problem is the cast. Finding act

8、ors acceptable to film audiences can mean the difference between success and failure. Readers have their imaginations about how characters look and sound. This is where I think many film adaptations fall down.Main idea:Another reason is the cast, because readers have their imaginations about how cha

9、racters look and sound.2.文本各段落要点精读关注代词 Another problem is the cast.Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons, although movies like The Life of Pi are very successful. CGI (Computer Generated Image) technology has had a huge impact on the movie industry. It allowed the previousl

10、y unfilmable to become a reality.Main idea: Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons, although CGI technology allowed the previously unfilmable to become a realilty.2.文本各段落要点精读关注连词和代词Some books are just too diffi One may think that it is the book writer who is in the best posi

11、tion to do film adaptations. In fact, this can actually be a bad thing because they may be too close to the material and find it difficult to adapt. Also, some writers have been very unsatisfied with the film versions of their work. Roald Dahl and Stephen King are examples of this. For me, anyway, i

12、t is always a bad idea to watch a film of a book you love.Main idea:The book writer is not the best to do film adaptations, because he or she is too close to the material and will find it difficult to adapt, and also unsatisfied with the adapted versions.2.文本各段落要点精读关注连词和代词 One may think that it is t

13、heMany adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics, which may arise from different reasons. The key reason is that the film is not like the original, since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes. Another reason is the cast, because readers have their imagin

14、ation about characters. Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons,although CGI technology allowed the previously unfilmable to become a realilty. The book writer is not the best to do film adaptations, because he or she is too close to the material and will find it difficult to

15、 adapt, and also unsatisfied with the adapted versions. (108 words)点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是字数严重超标，有多处表达抄袭原文，此外，有些表达过于冗长，又缺乏连贯性。仔细观察，我们会发现，有些表达的解释其实没有必要，有些解释有必要但又太繁琐。点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是字数严重超标，有多处概要写作原则4C+NOcompletecoherentobjectivecorrectconciseno copyCover all the key points.Make sure theres no grammar

16、 mistakes.Be brief and to the point.Use proper transitions.Use your own words.Noextraideasoremotions.概要写作原则4C+NOcompletecoherentob3.表达微技能之高度概括篇1. 描述性词汇变概括性词汇。我们可以考虑把含有定语的短语通过转换词性、精简词汇等方式，把描述性的语言概括成一个或几个词。2. 短语变词汇。在短语变词汇时，可以重点关注有多个变形的单词，往往会有意外的收获。3. 短句变短语。通过使用高度概括性的词汇，或转换某些核心词的词性并进行一定的筛选，可以将句子变短语。4.

17、长句变短句。复杂的长句变精简的短句，其核心在于抓住句子的主干，即抓住句子的主语、谓语和宾语，尽可能用主语+谓语+宾语的形式来改写句子。Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics, which arise from different reasons.Many adaptations fail with people, which arise from different reasons.Many adaptations failures arise from different reasons. Many adapt

18、ations fail with both cinema audiences and critics for different reasons.Many adaptations fail with people for different reasons.概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型3.表达微技能之高度概括篇1. 描述性词汇变概括性词汇。我们一、根据要求完成下列句子的改写或翻译。1. The key reason is that the film is

19、not like the original, since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes. The key reason is that the film is not like the original, since _ _ and there may be many changes.(描述性词汇变概括性词汇) The key reason is that the film is not like the original since there may be many changes

20、 because of _. (短句变短语) The key reason is that the film is not like the original because of _ and _.(短句变短语)The key reason is that the limited time and changes _ _. (长句变短句)5.牛刀小试a typical films time is limitedthe limited timelimited time many changesmake the film not like the original概要写作1.16 From Pag

21、e to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型一、根据要求完成下列句子的改写或翻译。5.牛刀小试a typ参考范文欣赏1Many adaptations fail with people for different reasons. （要点1）The key one is that the film is not like the original as there may be many changes because of the limited time.（要点2） Besides, readers have their own imagination about the cast. （要点3）And its really hard work to film some books for technology limit. （要点4）Additionally, the book author is not the best choice for adaptation because of their very close connection to the material. （要点 5）（78 words）概要写作1.16 From Page to Sc