语法改错练习答案

1、参照答案1.Schoolsshouldrewardtopstudentswhohavehighestscore.讲解：最高等前面需要冠词the改：Schoolsshouldrewardtopstudentswhohavethehighestscore.Iftheyspendtoomuchtimeonhousework,theymaynothaveenoughtimetodotheirwork,inthatcase,theymayperformpoorlyintheworkplace.讲解：独立的句子之间相连，需要有连词。改：Iftheyspendtoomuchtimeonhousework,t

2、heymaynothaveenoughtimetodotheirwork,andinthatcase,theymayperformpoorlyintheworkplace.Weencouragementosharehouseworkwithwomen,itdoesnotmeanthathouseworkshouldbeallocatedtohusbandandwifeequally.讲解：独立的句子之间相连，需要有连词。改：Weencouragementosharehouseworkwithwomen,butitdoesnotmeanthathouseworkshouldbeallocated

3、tohusbandandwifeequally.4.Thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosetospendholidaysoverseas.讲解：therebe句型本身就是完满的句子，不能够再出现其他谓语动词，需要使用定语从句也许分词来修饰名词people改：Thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplewhochoosetospendholidaysoverseas.改：Thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosingtospendholidaysoverseas.5.Thepercentage

4、ofpeopletraveledbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.讲解：句子里面不能够出现两个谓语动词travelled和decreased，若是有两个谓语动词，能够做成从句，也许使用分词。改：Thepercentageofpeoplewhotraveledbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.改：Thepercentageofpeopletravellingbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.Comparingwithfossilfuels,nuclearpowercanprov

5、idemoreenergyanditdoesnotproducecarbondioxide.改：Comparedwithfossilfuels,nuclearpowercanprovidemoreenergyanditdoesnotproducecarbondioxide.Forthosestudentswhodonothaveself-controlprobablywillmimicthosewrongbehaviorfromTVprograms.讲解：加了for今后变成了介词短语，变成了句子的状语，以致这句话没有了主语。介词短语不能够作为句子主语。改：Thosestudentswhodon

6、othaveself-controlprobablywillmimicthosewrongbehaviorfromTVprograms.Ifthehouseholdtaskscouldbedividedaccordingtothefamilyssituationwouldbebetter.讲解：有一个条件状语从句，主句却没有主语。改：Ifthehouseholdtaskscouldbedividedaccordingtothefamilyssituation,itwouldbebetter.9.Parentsbuyalargequantityoftoysmaydistractchildrenf

7、romtheirstudy.讲解：不能够拿一个句子去当另一个句子的主语。改：Ifparentsbuyalargequantityoftoys,itmaydistractchildrenfromtheirstudy.Somescenicspotsaresopopularthateveryyearthenumberoftouristswhoaccommodateexceedstheirrealcapacity.讲解：accommodate是“款待”和“容纳”，这个词的主语应该是旅游景点scenicspots，而不是游客。所以加了个they，这个they表示scenicspots改：Somescen

8、icspotsaresopopularthateveryyearthenumberoftouristswhotheyaccommodateexceedstheirrealcapacity.11.ThetimewhichspendsinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolledstrictly.讲解：定语从句的主语which，指代time，时间“被花在看电视上”，是被动语态。也许干脆把定语从句修饰time改成过去分词修饰time改：ThetimewhichisspentinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolledstrictly.改：Thetimespentinwa

9、tchingTVshouldbecontrolledstrictly.Usingfossilfuelswillproducecarbondioxide,whichisakindofgreenhousegascausesglobalwarming.讲解：定语从句里面出现了两个谓语：is和cause，所今后边用了定语从句that来修饰greenhousegas改：Usingfossilfuelswillproducecarbondioxide,whichisakindofgreenhousegasthatcausesglobalwarming.Manyyoungpeoplemovefromrura

10、lareastocities,whichtherearemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.讲解：which叫作关系代词，在定语从句里面担当主语也许宾语。这句话的定语从句therearemorejobopportunities已经是完满的句子，所以把which改成where，where是关系副词，等于inwhich，在从句里面作为状语。改：Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,wheretherearemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.14.M

11、anyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,wherehavemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.讲解：这里的定语从句需要一个主语，而不是状语，所以需要使用which，关系代词作为定语从句的主语。改：Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,whichhavemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.15.Manypeopledonotunderstandthathowimportantitistoprotectwil

12、danimals.讲解：使用带疑问词how的宾语从句，不需要that。使用一般的宾语从句，就把疑问词how去掉。改：Manypeopledonotunderstandhowimportantitistoprotectwildanimals.understandthatitisimportanttoprotectwildanimals.改：Manypeopledonot16.ThenumberofAustraliantouristsincreasedto20thousands.讲解：hundred，thousand，million这样的单词，前面有数字的时候，改：ThenumberofAustr

13、aliantouristsincreasedto20thousand.依旧使用其单数形式。Itseemsreasonableforgovernmenttorestricttheuseoffreshwatertoprotecttheenvironment.讲解：government是可数名词，单数形式的前面需要冠词the改：Itseemsreasonableforthegovernmenttorestricttheuseoffreshwatertoprotecttheenvironment.18.Whentheriverpolluted,fisheswoulddie讲解：这里的污染是指河流被污染

14、，需要使用被动语态。改：Whentheriverispolluted,fisheswoulddie19.Asthegovernmentsmoneyislimited,whichisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.讲解：这句话里面有原因状语从句，有定语从句，却没有主句。改：Asthegovernmentsmoneyislimited,itisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.改：Thegovernmentsmoneyislimited,whichisexp

15、ectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.Bycontrast,althoughthesalesofapplesintheUKincreasedslightlyfromonemillionto5.5millionpoundsin2004.讲解：这句话只写了退步状语从句，却没有主句改：Bycontrast,thesalesofapplesintheUKincreasedslightlyfromonemillionto5.5millionpoundsin2004.Toomuchhomeworkmakesstudentsstressfuland

16、tired.讲解：stressful是修饰“造成压力的事物”，而修饰“人的压力大”应该使用stressed。比方tired修饰人，而tiring修饰事物。改：Toomuchhomeworkmakesstudentsstressedandtired.22.StudentswhorarelywatchTVmaybelimitedtogainknowledge.讲解：知识面碰到限制，没有belimitedtodosth.这样的句型，这是属于依照自己的中式思想一想法造出来的句子。改：StudentswhorarelywatchTVmaybelimitedintheirknowledge.Student

17、sareeasiertofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.讲解：这种句式属于典型的中式思想造句。改：改：Studentsaremorelikelytofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.Itiseasierforstudentstofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.24.Takingpartinsportsactivi

18、tiesinsparetimecandeclinethestressatwork.讲解：decline是不及物动词，这里需要使用及物动词reduce改：Takingpartinsportsactivitiesinsparetimecanreducethestressatwork25.Manyyoungpeopledecidemovetocitiestolookforbetterjobs.讲解：decide作动词的用法是decidetodosth.这些动词用法在福利课句法录屏里面有过总结。改：Manyyoungpeopledecidetomovetocitiestolookforbetterjo

19、bs.Ifcriminalscouldreceiveeducationandtraininginprison,theywouldavoidtocommitcrimesagainaftertheyarereleased.讲解：avoid作动词的用法是avoiddoingsth.这些动词用法在福利课句法录屏里面有过总结。改：Ifcriminalscouldreceiveeducationandtraininginprison,theywouldavoidcommittingcrimesagainaftertheyarereleased.27.Astherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,peopleslivingstandardhasimproved.讲解：As表示“因为”，是连词，后边要接句子，若是后边接名词，应该使用介词dueto，也许becauseof。改：Duetotherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,peopleslivingstandardhasimproved.Childrenwholackofparentsloveandcaremaybecomesensitiveandin