读后续写课件-浙江高考英语专题

1、Continuation writing读后续写Skill training李林蔚What is continuation writinglogicalcomplete读后续写提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。材料内内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整150词融洽度高衔接合理关键词语语法词汇结构紧凑requirementsrequirementsWriting stepsStep 1 Thorough readingStep 2 Logic

2、al plottingStep 3 Vivid writingStep 1 Thorough readingtone (基调决定结局)writing style and main emotion content (内容: 六要素 定二条)who when where what why howplot line and emotion line Step 1 Thorough reading -contentcontent (5w & 1h): who what when where why howWhoArthur, the young man, a young woman.Whenon th

3、e way to work.WherePark Avenue.What (main idea)Arthur helped the young man carry a suit case; A bank robbery happened. Arthur thought the young woman mistook him as the bank thief and started to runWhy (climax)A bank robbery just happened and Arthur was carrying a suitcaseStep 1 Thorough readingThe

4、story is a happy story.The story is a sad story.A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.a happy and interesting ending基调决定结局Step 1 Thorough reading -contentcontent (5w & 1h): who what when where why howWhoArthur, the young man, a young woman.Whenon the way to work.Whe

5、rePark Avenue.What (main idea)Arthur helped the young man carry a suit case; A bank robbery happened. Arthur thought the young woman mistook him as the bank thief and started to runWhy (climax)A bank robbery just happened and Arthur was carrying a suitcaseStep 1 Thorough reading -contenthow 定二条how d

6、oes the story develop? Plot line and emotion lineStep 1 Thorough reading -contentplot 1: Arthur heard someone try to start a carplot 2: Arthur helped the young manplot 3: a robbery happened in a bankplot 4: a woman looked at him and the suitcasebeginningclimaxplot 5: he started to runcuriouspleasedc

7、uriousfrightenedendingwhat happed?nervousplot 1: Arthur heard _plot 2: Arthur helped _plot 3: _ happened in a bankplot 4: a woman looked at _plot 5: he started to _Step 2 Logical plottingPara 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur 第一段尾句Para 1: As he was running, Arthur heard t

8、he young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”第二段尾句正能量结局不能偏a happy and interesting ending四点倒推定框架第二段首句中关键信息第一段中应该有所提及Arthur asked a taxi to the Police station1Step 2 Logical plottingIs the young man the robber? Whats in the suitcase? Money or other things?Does the thing belong to the young man? 根据主要人物和主

9、要道具自问自答推动情节发展2Step 2 Logical plotting箱子里所属人Young man身份1Money bankrobber2the young mannot robber5Other thingsSomebody elseRobber or thief6the young mannot robberStep 2 Logical plotting箱子里所属人Young man身份1Money bankrobber2the young mannot robber5Other thingsSomebody elseRobber or thief6the young mannot

10、robberStep 2 Logical plottingPara 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”What did Arthur think when the young man shouted at him?Why did Arthur run so fast?What would the young man do?Para 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur Why did A

11、rthur go to the Police Station?根据续写段落第一句主要人物及其动作和新信息自问自答推动情节发展3Step 2 Logical plottingPara 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”What would Arthur say to the driver?Para 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur What would Arthur say to th

12、e police?What were the reactions of the police?人物间加入适当对话推动情节发展4Step 2 Logical plottingWhat did Arthur think when the young man shouted at him?Why did Arthur run so fast?What would the young man do?What would Arthur say to the driver?He thought the young man was the robber.He was afraid to be misunde

13、rstood.“Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have something important to report to the policeman.” P1The young man wanted to get his suitcase back. Step 2 Logical plottingWhy did Arthur go to the Police Station?What would he say to the police?What were the reactions of the police?Wha

14、t s the ending? theres a bank robbery and I know the bank thief. The police would investigate the case.P2He planned to explain the truth and ask police to arrest the young man.Arthur and the young man cleared their misunderstanding.Step 2 Logical plottingplot 1: he heard someone try to start a carpl

15、ot 2: he helped the young manplot 4: a woman looked at him and the suitcasebeginningclimaxplot 5: he started to runcuriouspleasedcuriousfrightenedendingplot 3: a robbery happened in a bankplot 6: He mistook the young man for thiefplot 7: He went to the Police Station by taxiplot 8: They opened the s

16、uitcase and the young man arrive thereplot 9: They cleaned the misunderstandingexcitedexcitedsurprised/embarrassedhappy梳理情节，对应人物情感5Step 3 Vivid writing融洽度高衔接合理语法词汇结构紧凑Tip 1Using linking words effectively.Adding some details reasonably.Using different structures.Tip 2Tip 3Step 3 Vivid writingTip 1Using linking words effectively.Adding some details reasonably.Using different structures.Tip 2Tip 3At that moment; then; afterwards; finally; immediately; suddenly; unfortunately Step 3 Vivid writingTip 1Using linking words effectively.Adding some details reasonably.Using dif