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Withmajorcitiescontinuegrowing，arethereanyproblemstoyoungpeople?HowtosolvetheseInmanycountries,moreandmoreyoungpeopleareleavingschoolsandunabletofindjobsaftergraduation.Whatproblemsdoyouthinkyouthunemploymentwillcausetotheindividualandthesociety?Andmakesomesuggestions.许多的学生离开学校找不到工作，失业对于社会和个人首段：背景介绍+问题影响 写作目Alarmingly,itisfarfromeasyforcollegegraduatestosecureidealjobsandcountlesscollegejobcandidatesfeelfrustratedwhenseekingforareasonablecareer.Thecrisisoftheyouthemploymenthasbeenexertingabanefulinfluenceonthosegiftedcollegeleaversandtheharmonyofthecommunity.Thisessayaimstoexplorethepossiblereasonsofyouthunemploymentandthenpresentmy Alarmingly,itisfarfromeasyforsbtodosth令人担忧的是，做……很getareasonablecareerhasbeenexertingabanefulinfluenceonandtheharmonyofthecommunity……一直对于……和社会的和谐造成不良影响giftedcollegeleaversThisessayaimstoexplorethepossiblereasonsof……andthenpresentmy mendations.本文将会探究下……的原因，再提出个人的建议二段：问题原因的展Virtually,anumberoffactorsexplainthehardshipofcollegegraduates’employment. ,thepressureofyouthunemploymentcouldbeowedtothefactthatthesupplyofcollegegraduatesfaroutweighsthedemandofthesociety.Specifically,countlessuniversityjob-seekersarecompetingforlimitedpositions.Further,someenterprisessufferingfromeconomicdownturnarereducingstaffandcuttingdowntheplansofrecruitingnewemployees.Meanwhile,thedemandofsomecorporationsforjobcandidatesgrowscontinuously,eye-dazzlingacademicqualificationorrichworkingexperiencecouldallserveasexcellentexamples.Eventually,the petenceofsomecollegejob-huntersandimpropercareerconceptsaccountforthetruththatjobsarechallengingtoget.(110)二段写作年轻人择业难的三个原因：（从客观原因谈及原因virtually,anumberoffactorsexplain……实际上，很多原因解释,……couldbeowedtothefactthat……，第一,……可以被归结为someenterprisessufferingfromeconomicdownturn一些遭遇经济的企reducestaff裁cutdowntheplansofrecruitingnewemployeesthedemandofgrowscontinuously……eye-dazzlingacademicqualificationrichworkingexperiencecouldallserveasexcellentexamples……accountforthetruththat…………解释了……的事实Consideringtheseverityofyouthunemploymentitistimethatweadoptedsomeeffective ,itisimperativeforthe ernmenttoenactrelevantlegislationstobalancethesupplyandthedemandofthecollegestudents.Meanwhile,the ernmentisurgedtoprovidecollegeleaverswithpreferentialpoliciessothatthoseambitiouscollegejob-hunterscouldcarveouttheirowncareers.Further,effortsshouldbemadebyrelevantenterprises,theyshouldcreatemoreon-the-jobtrainingchancesforyoungstersandproperlylowercriteriainselectingcollegejob-seekers.Ultimay,undergraduatesoughttostudyevenharderandadjusttheirmentalityintermsofcareerchoice.Moreprecisely,everycollegestudentshouldexcelacademicallyandstrivefromthebottomofthesociety.（118）Consideringtheseverityof……itishightimethatweadoptedsomeeffectiveitisimperativeforthe ernmenttoenactrelevantlegislationsto……颁布相关立 ernmentisurgedtoprovidecollegeleaverswithpreferentialpolicies应该给carveouttheirowncareerseffortsshouldbemadeby……努力应该有……createmoreon-the-jobtrainingchances创造的在职培训的机properlylowercriteriain……在……studyevenharderadjusttheirmentalityintermsofcareerchoiceexcelacademicallyandstrivefromthebottomofthesociety精通专业知识以及从社会底尾段：亮明作家立场：强调协同努力才能解决问Inanuts ,itisnoeasytasktohelpeveryyoungjob-huntertosecureanidealjob.Concertedeffortsshouldbemadebythe ernment,therelevantcompaniesandeverycollegejob-seeker.Onlyinthiswaycancrisisofyouthunemploymentbetackledproperly.(45)ina itisnoeasy