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雅思考试写作总 Task2——议..........................................................................................................................Task2题型介 Task2评分标 Task2写作步 同意与否题 题目分析+构 范文解 典型结 开头段写 主体段写 主体段拓 结尾段写 双方题 题目分析+构 范文解 典型结 驳斥反方观 己方观点论 利弊比较题 题目分析+典型结 原因方案题 题目分析+构 范文解析+典型结 开头段写 原因分 解决方案+结尾段写 Task1图表作 Task1图表类 Task1写作要 Task1写作步 Task1评分标 如何根据评分标准写 饼状 饼状 多个饼状 柱状 柱状图（1）图形分 柱状图（1）写作分 柱状图（2）图形分 柱状图（2）写作分 表格 表格图图形分 表格图写作分 流程 流程图图形分 流程图写作分 地图 地图题图形分 地图题写作分 雅思考试写作总Task2——议Task2Thereisatendencythatnewsreportsinthemediafocusonproblemsandemergenciesratherthanpositivedevelopments,whichisharmfultotheindividualandtosociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor ernmentsshouldgivefinancialsupporttoartprojectssuchastheatersandmuseums,whileotherssuggestthatthemoneyshouldbespentonhealthcareandeducation.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownInthefuture,therewillbeahigherproportionofelderlypeoplethanyoungerpeopleinmanyDoyouthinktheadvantagesoutweightheInmostcitiesandtowns,thehighvolumesofroadtraffichave eaproblem.Whatarethecausesofthatand tionscouldbetakentosolvethisTask2评分标TaskCoherenceand7Addressesallpartsofthe throughouttheresponsePresents,extendsandsupportsmainideas informationandideasUsesarangeofcohesivedevicesappropriayPresentsaclearcentraltopicwithineachparagraphLexicalandAccuracy7UsesasufficientrangeofvocabularytoallowsomeflexibilityandprecisionUseslesscommonlexicalitemswithsomeawarenessofstyleandcollocationOccasionalUsesavarietyofcomplexProducesfrequenterror-freeHasgoodcontrolofgrammarandpunctuationTask2勾双方构确定结题目分析(1)Thereisatendencythatnewsreportsinthemediafocusonproblemsandemergenciesratherthanpositivedevelopment,whichisharmfultotheindividualandtosociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor (2012-04-14双方构 社会问题/紧急情况有害引起对社会发展失去 社会问题/紧急情况有益发现问题才能范文赏TrafficandhousingproblemsinmajorcitieswouldbesolvedbymovingbigfactoriesandtheiremployeestotheDoyouagreeorInmajorcities,problemswithtransportationandlivingconditionsareproblemsmostpeoplehavetofaceeveryday.Somepeopleholdthattheprincipalreasonfortheseproblemslieswiththebigcompaniesandfactorieslocatedinthecityproper.Theybelievethatthesecompanies,factoriesandeventheiremployeesshouldbemovedtothecountryside.Thisisnotasatisfactorysolution,Likeanyoneelse,peopleengagedbybigcompaniesandfactoriesdocausesometrafficjamsiftheydrivecarsontheirwaytoandfromwork,andsomeofthemalsohavedifficultyfindinganidealhousetodwellin.Greatasthenumberofsuchemployeesis,theyonlyconstituteasmallproportionoftheentirepopulation,whichconsistsofmorepeoplelivinginthecitiesandworkinginothersectors,suchassmallfirmsandschools.Inconsequence,movingthoseinbigcompaniesandfactoriestothecountrysidemayeasethetransportationandlivingconditionstoacertainextent,butitwillnotleadtoaradicalchangeofthealready-existingsituation.Moreover,therealcauseoftrafficandhousingproblemsisthattheinfrastructureatthemomentcannotmeetthedemandoftherapiddevelopmentofthecities.Movingcompaniesandemployeesoutonlybringsaboutatemporarysolution,butdoesnotaffectalong-lastingcure.Policiesshouldbemadetoallowmoreroads,overpasses,andskyscrrstobebuiltsoasto modatetheincreasingnumberofautomobilesandcitizens.Inconclusion,actionstoimplementtheimprovementofthecurrenttrafficandhousingproblemsshouldawaittheparticipationofernments,bigandsmallcompaniesandfactories,andpeoplefromallwalksofliferatherthanthatofasmallproportionof同意与否题题目分析+构题目分ernmentsshouldgivefinancialsupporttoartprojectssuchastheatersandmuseums,whileotherssuggestthatthemoneyshouldbespentonhealthcareandeducation.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.（2012-05-双方构Supportart有助于文化和思想的Supporthealthcareand人们最基本的需范文解Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownAsaresultofconstantmediaattention,sportsprofessionalsinmycountryhaveestarsandcelebrities,andthoseatthetoparepaidhugesalaries.Justlikestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandManypeoplefindtheirrewardsunfair,especiallywhencomparingthesesupersalarieswiththoseoftopsurgeonsorresearchscientists,orevenleadingpoliticianswhohavetheresponsibilityoferningthecountry.However,sportssalariesarenotdeterminedbyconsideringthecontributiontosocietya makes,orthelevelofresponsibilityheorsheholds.Instead,theyreflectthepublicpopularityofsportingeneralandthelevelofpublicsupportthatsuccessfulstarscangenerate.Sothenotionof‘fairness’isnottheissue.Thosewhofeelthatsportsstars’salariesarejustifiedmightarguethatthenumberofprofessionalswithrealtalentisveryfew,andthemoneyisarecognitionoftheskillsanddedicationrsonneedstobesuccessful.Competitionisconstantandaplayeristestedeverytimetheyperformintheirrelativelyshortcareer.Thepressurefromthemediaisintenseandthereislittleprivacyoutofthespotlight.Soallofthesefactorsmayjustifythehugeearnings.ally,Ithinkthattheamountofmoneysuchsportsstarsmakeismorejustifiedthanthehugeearningsofmoviestars,butatthesametime,itindicatesthatoursocietyplacesmorevalueonsportthanonmoreessentialprofessionsandachievements.典型结典型结构——同意与开头段写Inmajorcities,problemswithtransportationandlivingconditionsareproblemsmostpeoplehavetofaceeveryday.Somepeopleholdthattheprincipalreasonfortheseproblemslieswiththebigcompaniesandfactorieslocatedinthecityproper.Theybelievethatthesecompanies,factoriesandeventheiremployeesshouldbemovedtothecountryside.Thisisnotasatisfactorysolution,话题引入+主要观点+作者观Acriticismoftenheardthesedaysisthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolstendtobetooacademic,andcontribuittletopreparingayoung forthereal-lifetasks.Theysayth ademicsubjectsarerootedinthepast,andarenotusefulforsolvingmodernproblems.Idisagreewiththispointofviewforthree话题引入+主要观点+作者观开头简单的背景介绍引入话双方对立观点或一方主要观开头Thereisatendencythatnewsreportsinthemediafocusonproblemsandemergenciesratherthanpositivedevelopment,whichisharmfultotheindividualandtosociety.Formanypeople,newsisaregularpartoflife,buttoday,itisimportanttonotethatcontentofdifferentnewsincludingnational,local,politicsandtrafficnewstendstobefullofnegativeinformationinsteadofpositiveprogress.Ithasbeenarguedthatnewsreportsaboutsocialproblemsandemergenciesshouldbeminimizedorevenrestricted.Iagreeonthissuggestionbasedonthefollowing主体段写Fromthetimetheyarelittlegirls,femaleslearnaboutwithdollsandlaterperhapswithyoungerbrothersandsisters,girlsaregiventheroleofcareer.Girlsseetheirmothersinthesamerolesandsoitisnaturalthattheyidentifythisasafemaleactivity.Boys,incontrast,learncompetitiverolefarremovedfromwhatitmeanstonurture.Whileboysmaydreamofadventures,girlsconditioningmeanstheytendtoseethefutureintermsofraisingfamilies.Inaddition,weneedn’tdirectlyassociateclotheswithourculturalChina’sgloriouscivilizationcanbeillustratedinmanydifferentways,andsomeofthemarevanishing.Forexample,inordertimes,theSpringFestivalwasalways paniedbythesoundoffirecrackers.Butnow,manycitieshavebannedthem.Tradition,includingclothing,ischanging.主体段拓IndividualsaremorelikelytobepessimisticwhentheyfrequentlyreceivenegativeNewsreportconcerningemergencyandseveresocialproblemswillinevitablygiverisetopanicandnegativeattitude;becausetheyareanxiousaboutthepossibilitiesthatsimilareventsmayappeararoundthem,whichhaveharmfuleffectsontheirnormallife.Forexample,whencitizenssawthousandsofcrocodilesleavetheirheadsawaythewater,theyconcernaboutthepossibilityofearthquakesratherthanenjoyingtheirvacation,duetoarecentreportaboutminorearthquakeinnewsprograms.结尾段写结尾段——重申观点+简单总Allinall/tosumToeliminatepossibleandunnecessarypaniccausedandaddressthedeficiencyofpositiveattitudetowardsfuturedevelopment,evisionandradioprogramsshouldlaymoreemphasisonspreadinggood双方题题目分析+构题目分Inthefuture,therewillbeahigherproportionofelderlypeoplethanyoungerpeopleinmanycountries.Doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthe范文解典型结 典型结构—双驳斥反方观驳斥反方观点的方驳斥反方观点举Manypeople ernmentbudgetshouldbeallocatedtoEverybodyneedssomebeautyintheirlife,butnoteveryonecanaffordaPicassoorapieceofmusic,so ernmentsshouldprovidemoneyformuseumsorconcerthallstoHowever,artprojectsaremorelikelytoattracttheinvestmentoftheprivatesectorsandartistsshouldrealizeifthereisademandfortheirmusicorsculpture,thentheywillbewealthy.Therefore,financialsupportsfromernmentsseemunnecessaryandshouldbeputintomoreimportantprojects.己方观点论己方观点论证举ernmentinterferenceineducationandmedicalservicesishighlyProvidingsufficienteducationopportunitiesandeliminatingilliteracyclowcitizenstohuntajobandearnregular e,therebyimprovingtheirstandardoflivingandshakingoffpoverty.Foracountryasawhole,educationislinkedtoskilledworkforceandtohighproductivity,affectingbothprosperityandstability.Inaddition,accesstohealthcareisabasichumanrightandameasuretoensureadecentstandardofliving.Peoplefeelassuredlivingandworkinginacountrywheretheycanbegivenmedicalservicewhenunemployed,sick,injuredorretired,soofferingtheneedypeoplewithaffordablemedicalserviceisthefulfillmentoftheernment’sresponsibilitytoitsmembersandcanmakeernmentwintheloyaltyofcitizens.利弊比较题题目分析+典型结 典型结构—利弊比题目分析(4)Alargenumberofyoungpeoplecannotfindajobwhentheyleaveuniversity.Whatarethemaincausesofthisproblem?Givesomemeasurestohelpreduce （2012-08-对劳动力市场不够了解，解决方法摆正态范文赏Nowadaysweareproducingmoreandmorerubbish.Whydoyouthinkthisishappening?What ernmentsdotohelpreducetheamountofrubbishIthinkitistruethatinalmosteverycountrytodayeachhouseholdandfamilyproducesalargeamountofwasteeveryweek.Mostofthisrubbishcomesfromthepackagingfromthethingswebuy,suchasprocessedfood.Butevenifwebuyfreshfoodwithoutpackaging,westillproducerubbishfromtheplasticbagsusedeverywheretocarryshophome.Thereasonwhywehavesomuchpackagingisthatweconsumesomuoreonadailybasisthanfamiliesdidinthepast.Convenienceisalsoveryimportantinmodernlife,sowebuypackagedorcannedfoodthatwecanbetransportedfromlongdistancesandstoreduntilweneedit,inthesupermarket,andthenathome.However,Ithinktheamountofwasteproducedisalsoaresultofourtendencytousesomethingonceandthrowitaway.Wefetthateventhechestplasticbaghasusedupvaluableresourcesandenergytoproduce.Wealsofetthatitisasourceofpollutionanddifficulttodisposeof.Ithink,therefore,thaternmentsneedtoraisethisawarenessinthegeneralpublic.Childrencanbeeducatedaboutenvironmentalissuesatschool,butadultsneedtotakeactions.ernmentscanencouragesuchactionbyputtingtaxesonpackaging,suchasplasticbags,byprovidingrecyclingservicesandbyfininghouseholdsandshopsthatdonotattempttorecycletheirwaste.Withthepoliticalwill,sueasurescouldreallyreducetheamountofrubbishweproduce.Certainlynobodywantstosee usedupandourplanetpoisonedbywaste.原因方案题题目分析+构范文解析+典型结 典型结构—原因方开头段写开头Theyoungadults’unemploymentisatroublingissuepreoccupyingmanyernmentsacrosstheworld.Agrowingnumberofuniversitygraduatescomplainaboutthedifficultiesinjobhunting.Apartfromeconomicrecession,therearesomeotherforcesthatfostertheconsistencyofyoungadults’unemployment.Thisessaywillpresentanoverallviewofthesecausesandfeasible原因分原因分析写法举Themaincauseofrisingunemploymentamonguniversitygraduatesistheirdeficiencyofworkexperienceandqualifications.Afterleavingcollege,youngjobseekersgenerallyhavelittlepracticalexperience.Besides,mostoftheknowledgetheyhaveacquiredisfromtext,whichisnotsatisfactorilyconsistentwithteralpracticeintheworkplace.Thisweaknesscanbefatalatatimewhenthemarkethasastrongpreferenceonskilledandexperiencedapplicants,whoarereadytofillvacancieswithoutrequiringanyjobSecondly,youngadultsknowlittleofthesituationofthelabourmarket.解决方案+结尾段写解决方案写法举Tacklingthisproblemrequiresthecommitmentofbothsocietyandyoungsters ernmentcanprovideemployerswithtaxationincentivesforrecruitingyoungLow-costcourses,especiallyjobtrainingcourses,shouldbemadeavailablefortheyoungunemployed.Consultancyservicescanbeprovidedfreeofcharge,givingyoungstersinstructiononjob-seekingandhelthemmakeproperadjustmentfromuniversitytowork.结尾Assuggestedabove,thisisacomplexproblem,andlackofworkexperienceandinappropriateattitudestowardemploymentaretwomainreasonsthataccountforyoungsters’unemployment.However,Iamconvincedthatthestepsmentionedabovewouldbehelpful.Task1图表作Task1图表类Task1Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.内容概括——整体趋势，大小关Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.Task1Task7Presentsaclearoverviewofmaintrends,differencesorClearlypresentsandhighlightskey6PresentsanoverviewwithinformationappropriayPresentsandadequayhighlightskey5Recountsdetailmechanicallywithnoclearoverview;theremaybenodatatosupportthedescriptionPresents,butinadequaycoverskeyTask1评分标如何根据评分标准写ThegraphbelowshowstheconsumptionoffishandsomedifferentkindsofmeatinaEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.Thegraphillustrateschangesintheamountsofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedper perweek.Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarties(around150grams),whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams)However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximay100gramsand55gramsrespectively.Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50grams,soalthoughitremainedtheleastpopularfood,consumptionlevelswerethemostTheconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.By2004ithadsoaredtoalmost250gramsperOverall,thegraphshowshowtheconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.饼状60%的钱被用来交房租60%ofmoneyisspentonThereis60%ofmoneyspentonThepercentageofmoneyspentonrentisaboutMoneyspentonrentaccountsfor60%ofoccupy,constitute,takeup,makeAccordingtothepiechart,morethanhalfofelectricityisusedforheatingroomsandwater(52.5%).Inmarkedcontrast,thepercentageofelectricityconsumedinovens,kettlesandwashingmachinesisonly17.5%,andtheelectricityusedforlighting,TVandradioaccountsfor15%collectively,whichisequaltotheconsumptionofotherhouseholddevices(vacuumcleaners,foodmixersandelectrictools).如何做比 (倍数)AismorethanTheeyesofTomarebiggerthanAistwiceasmany/muchasB.Thenumberoffemaleswastwiceasmanyasthatofmalesin罗列数据+转折连多个饼状Accordingtothecharts,threetreatingmethodsaregenerallyappliedinbothKoreaandSweden.Specifically,nearly70%ofdangerouswasteisrecycledinRepublicofKorea,landfillisthemostwidelyusedtreatmentforhazardoustrashinSwedenThepercentageofwasteproductswhichareincineratedinSwedenisabouttwiceaslargeasthatinKorea(20%and9%respectively).Obviously,bothUnitedKingdomandSwedenaredependentonlandfillinthedisposalofhazardousproducts,whereastheproportionofwasterecyclingisthehighestinKorea.柱状图（1）图形分Thegraphshowsthatthereisagradualdecreaseinstudyforcareerreasonswithage.(总趋势)Nearly80%ofstudentsunder26years,studyfortheircareer.Thispercentagegraduallydeclinesby10-20%everydecade.(起点+变化情况)Only40%of40-49yroldsand18%ofover49yroldsarestudyingforcareerreasonsinlateadulthood.(特殊点+终点)Conversely,thegraphalsoshowsthatstudystemmingfrominterestincreaseswithage.(总趋势)Thereareonly10%ofunder26yroldsstudyingoutofinterest.Thepercentageincreasesslowlytillthebeginningofthefourthdecade,andincreasesdramaticallyinlateadulthood.(起点+变化情况)Nearlysamberof40-49yroldsstudyforcareerandinterest.特殊点However70%ofover49yroldsstudyforinterestincomparisonto18%studyingforcareerreasonsinthatagegroup.(终点)柱状图（1）写作分Thesecondgraphshowsthatemployersupportis um(approximay60%)fortheunder26yrstudents.Itdropsrapidlyto32%uptothethirddecadeoflife,andthenincreasesinlateadulthooduptoabout44%Itisunclearwhetheremployersupportisonlyforcareer-focusedstudy,butthehighestlevelisforthosestudentswhomainlystudyforcareerpurposes.Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationsinAustraliaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999柱状图（2）图形分Thechartgivesinformationaboutpost-schoolqualificationsintermsofthedifferentlevelsoffurthereducationreachedbymenandwomeninAustraliain1999.WecanseeimmediaythatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheproportionofandwomenatdifferentThebiggestgenderdifferenceisatthelowestpost-schoollevel,where90%ofthosewhoheldaskilledvocationaldiplomaweremen,comparedwithonly10%ofwomen.Bycontrast,morewomenheldundergraduatediploma(70%)andmarginallymorewomenreacheddegreelevel(55%).Atthehigherlevelsofeducation,menwithpostgraduatediplomasclearlyoutnumberedtheirfemalecounterparts(70%and30%,respectively),andalsoconstituted60%ofMaster’sThuswecanseethatmorementhanwomenholdqualificationsatthelowerandhigherlevelsofeducations,whilemorewomenreachundergraduatediplomalevelthanmen.TderdifferenceissmallestatthelevelofBachelor’s柱状图（2）写作分ThebarchartshowswhattheUKstudentsdidaftergraduation(excludingfull-timeemployment)in2008.表格图图形Thetablebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsix表格图写作Thetableshowsthedetailsregardingtheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.Londonhastheoldestundergroundrailwaysystemsamongthesixcities.Itwasopenedintheyear1863,anditisalready140yearsold.ThetubeinParisisthesecondoldest,andithasservedcitizenssince1900.ThiswasthenfollowedbytheopeningoftherailwaysystemsinTokyo,WashingtonDCandKyoto.LosAngelesdidnotconstructundergroundsystemsuntiltheyear2001.Intermsofthesizeoftherailwaysystems,London,forcertain,hasthelargestundergroundrailwaysystems.Ithas394kilometersofrouteintotal,whichisnearlytwiceaslargeasthesysteminParis.Kyoto,incontrast,hasthesmallestsystem.Itonlyhas11kilometersofroute,whichismorethan30timeslessthanthatofLondon.Interestingly,Tokyo,whichonly