高中英语人教版选择性必修第一UNIT2USINGLANGUAGEWRITING教案-

TeachingPlanforWriting：Anopinionessayaboutchangescausedbytechnology

(Unit2LookingintotheFuture)LeaminqobjectivesToexpressideasofthechangesthatcouldbecausedbyadvancesintechnology;Tolearntowriteanessayonyourpointofview.TeachingProceduresStepLWhat一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查学生的英文基础，还考查学生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的表达。Step2.How［基本框架］.首段：提出观点或有争议的观点(一般提出两个相对的观点然后客观地对其进行评析)。.中段：展开论述，可用主题句来点明论点，并对论点进行比拟和比照、分析和评论。.尾段：对所论述观点进行客观、合理的评论，提出自己的看法、建议；或者也可以将不同观点相互融合，选其可取之处，形成自己独到的观点。考前须知：.观点鲜明。.层次要清楚，过渡要自然。.通常采用一般现在时。.语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。［常用词块］anincreasingnumberofpeople越来越多的人inreactiontothephenomenon针对这——现象begintorealize...开始意识到arousepublicconcernnationwide引起了全国公众的关注alongwiththedevelopmentof…随着的开展itgoeswithoutsaying不言而口俞asfarasIamconcerned就我而言oneoftheimportantdisadvantages最重要的缺点之一tomakemattersworse更糟糕的是lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是becomemoreandmoreserious变得越来越严重ontheonehand...ontheotherhand・••一方面另一方面givepeoplemorepleasure给人带来更多的快乐theabovementionedreasons上述原因throughaboveanalyses通过以上分析［常用语句］★精彩开头Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat...Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.有一个广泛引起关注的问题……。但众所周知有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer...,becauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.现如今很多人更喜欢……，因为它在我们生活中扮演了一个重要的角色。Nowadays,therearemoreandmorestudentsbecomingshort-sighted.现在，越来越多的学生近视了。★正文佳句People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.然而在这个话题上人们的观点各不相同。Generallyspeaking,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.总的来说，优点如下。Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.但凡事都有利有弊。消极的一面也是很明显的。Weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.我们应该采取一系列的措施来解决这个处境。★余味结尾Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.只有用这种方法，我们才能解决这个问题。It'shightimethatwedidsomethingtoimproveourenvironment.该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了。Consequently,I'mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingus.因此，我相信一个崭新的未来正在等待着我们。Step3.Demonstrate假如你是李华，学校论坛英文版想邀请你写一篇介绍微信(WeChat)利弊的文章，刊登在论坛上。要点如下：.微信的益处；.微信的弊端；.你的看法。注意:1.词数80左右：.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。一、审题定调.确定体裁:本次写作是篇短文,内容为微信的利弊。.确定人称:由于是介绍微信，所以要以第三人称为主。.确定时态:由于对微信进行客观介绍，所以以一般现在时为主。二、谋篇布局本文分为三个段落。第一段:说明微信受欢迎,但要客观看待微信；第二段:益处一一微信拉近了人们之间的距离;可以找到倾诉心事的朋友。弊端一一有虚假信息，容易让人上当受骗。第三段：自己的观点一一合理利用微信。三、常用语块

moreandmorepeople越来越多的人becomeaddictedto对上瘾shortenthedistancebetweenpeople缩短了人们之间的距离nomatterwhere无论在哪里telloursecrets告知我们的秘密resultin导致spendtoomuchtimeon在……上花费太多时间asfarasIamconcerned就我而言useitproperly合理利用四、遣词造句Possibleversion:普通表达高级表达♦Wecaneasilygetintouchwithourfriends.♦Wecanfindfriendstoshareoursecrets.SomeinformationwhichofferedonWeChatisfalseandpeoplemaybecheated.SomepeoplespendtoomuchtimeonWeChatwhichgreatlyinfluencestheirnormallife.Inmyopinion,WeChatisconvenientbutweshoulduseitproperly.♦Nomatterwherewearewecaneasilygetintouchwithourfriends.♦Wecanfindfriendstowhomwecantelloursecrets.SomeinformationofferedonWeChatisfalseanditmayresultinpeoplebeingcheated.SomepeoplespendtoomuchtimeonWeChat,greatlyinfluencingtheirnormallife.AsfarasIamconcerned,WeChatisconvenientbutweshoulduseitproperly.MoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtouseWechatandsomehaveevenbecomeaddictedtoit.However,WeChatisadobule-edgedsword,whichhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Tobefrank,WeChatreallyshortensthedistancebetweenpeople.Nomatterwhereweare,wecaneasilygetintouchwithourfriends.Besides,wecanfindfriendstowhomwecantelloursecrets.However,italsohasdisadvantages.First,someinformationofferedonWeChatisfalseanditmayresultinpeoplebeingcheated.Second,somepeoplespendtoomuchtimeonWeChat,greatlyinfluencingtheirnormallife.Frommypersonalperspective,WeChatisindeedconvenientbutweshoulduseitproperly.Step4.Drill假如你是李华，你班同学最近参加了某报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：要不要克隆人类。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社编辑投稿，客观地介绍讨论情况。大约35%的同学支持克隆.克隆人很有趣，可以使人复生.给人带来更多的快乐.可以克隆一些著名科学家，为人类做更多的事情大约65%的同学不支持克隆.克隆人会引发道德问题.每个人是不同的，被克隆的人只不过是复制品.克隆人会不时地被坏人所利用你的观点现在很难说克隆人类是对还是不对Recentlywehavehadadiscussiononwhetherweshouldclonehumans.Possibleversion:Recentlywehavehadadiscussiononwhetherweshouldclonehumans.35percentofthestudentsthinkcloninghumansisinterestingandcanbringpeoplebacktolife.ltcanmaketheworldmoreinterestingandgivepeoplemorepleasure.Besides,wecanclonesomefamousscientistssothattheycandomorethingsforushumans.65percentofthestudentsholdtheviewthatitisamoralquestiontoclonehumans.Eachofusdifferswhileaclonedpersonismerelyacopy.Fromtimetotime,clonedpeoplemaybetakenadvantageofbysomeevilpersons.Inmyopinion,whethercloninghumansisrightornotisdifficulttosayrightnow.Perhapswewilljusthavetowaitandsee.Step5.Assigmneiit现在,网上购物正在被越来越多的消费者所接受。但是，由网上购物引发的问题也引起了人们的高度关注。请根据以下内容，写一篇英语短文，分析网上购物的利与弊,并简述自己的观点。网上购物利弊你的观点•方便快捷•价格廉价•产品种类多•质量无法保证・容易上当受骗Reflection:Possibleversion:WiththespreadoftheInternet,moreandmorepeopleprefergoingshoppingonline.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.WecanbuythingsontheInternetwithoutleavingourhouses.Shoppingonlinecansavealotoftimeforus.What'smore,therearemanydifferentkindsofgoodsforustochoosefrom,whichmaybecheaperthanthoseinrealshops.However,shoppingonlinealsocausesus