初中英语写作复习课课件

Compositionwriting

写作复习课Compositionwriting写作复习课随着互联网的发展，网络购物变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络购物了，比淘宝网，京东商城等。

请以“ShoppingontheInternet”为题写一篇80词的短文，谈谈你对网购利与弊的看法。随着互联网的发展，网络购物变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经advantages?disadvantages?Ideas(观点)advantages?disadvantages?Idaheadatailabodybeginningendmainbody主体Structure（结构）aheadatailabodybeginninge

1.Theworldislarge.Andmanypeoplewanttobuysomethingfromothercountries.Buttheycan’t.Howtobegin2.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingontheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.

1.TheworldislTopicsentence（

主题句）Atopicsentenceexpressesthemainideaofaparagraphandhelpsyouunderstand

apassage.

Atopicsentenceisusuallythefirstsentenceofaparagraph.Topicsentence（主题句）AtopicseTherearemanythingsontheInternet.

OntheInternet,peoplecanbuyfoods,clothes,booksandsoon.What’smore,manythingsarecheaperandnicer,andpeoplehavemoretimetochoose.Alsopeoplecandosomeshoppingwithoutleavingtheirhouses.Reviseatopicsentence修改主题句TherearemanythingsontheISupportingsentences(推展句)Supportingsentencessupportyourideaandgivesomedetailsaboutyouridea.Supportingsentences(推展句)S①Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.②First,shoppingonlineismoreconvenientthangoingtotheshop.③Second,thegoodsarecheaperthanthoseinthestores.④Manypeoplewhocan’tfindajobusuallychoosetorunashopon

line.

①Shoppingonlinehasmany

restateyouridea(重申观点)Shoppingonlinehelpsusalot,butweshoulddoitcarefully.

givesomeadvice(提出建议)Thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoimprovethesafetyofshoppingonline.Howtoendrestateyouridea(重申观点)HowWordsandSentences

遣词造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?A:Byusinglinkingwords

（连接词）WordsandSentencesQ:Howtoforexample,suchas,like,forinstanceBrainstorm

what’smore,what’sworse,besides,alsohowever,but,whilebecauseof,becauseso,so…that,asaresult

inorderto,inorderthat,sothatinshort,intotal,inaword举例递进转折原因结果目的总结forexample,suchas,like,fAsweknow,shoppingontheInternethasmanyadvantages.___________,wecannotonlysavelotsoftimebutalsobuycheaperthings.__________,

wecanshopatanytime.__________,

italsohasdisadvantages.Wecanonlyseethepictures,_____wedon’tknowaboutthequality._________,

it’snotsafetopayontheNet.____________,

weshouldshopontheNetcarefullysothatitcanserveusbetter.Forexample

What’smoreHoweversoWhat’sworseInshortForexampleWhat’smoreWordsandSentences遣词造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?B:Byusinggoodsentencepatterns句式WordsandSentences遣词造句Q:HowE.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.It’simportant.It’simportantforus

tokeephealthy.E.g.2:It’sbeautifulmusic.Whatbeautifulmusic(itis)!

Howbeautifulthemusicis!

E.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.Goodsentencepatterns1.Itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todosth.2.notonly…butalso…3.the+比较级，the+比较级4.从句(状语、宾语、定语从句等)Goodsentencepa1.Wecansavealotoftime.

WecanbuycheaperthingsontheNet.

WecannotonlysavealotoftimebutalsobuycheaperthingsontheNet.Wordsandsentences1.Wecansavealotoftime.

2.Ifwecanbemorecareful,we’llbesafer.Themorecarefulweare,thesaferwe’llbe.Wordsandsentences2.Ifwecanbemorecareful,3.Therearemanykindsofclothes.Theylookverybeautiful.Therearemanykindsofclotheswhich\thatlookverybeautiful.Wordsandsentences3.Therearemanykindsofclo

ideasstructurewordsandsentences

ModelDisplay范文展示1.

Whatdoyouthinkoftheideas?2.Isthereabeginning,amainbody,andanend?3.Whichwordsorsentencesdoyoulike?

ideasModelDisplaEvaluatingEvaluating1.Readthetitlecarefully（仔细读题，弄清题意）2.Choosetherightwords,tenseandsentencepatterns

（确定时态，选用词句）3.Writecarefullyandneatly（认真书写，工整清楚）4.Readagainandmakesureyoumakefewmistakes（通篇阅读，检查错误）

Summary1.Readthetitlecarefully（仔细读Homework:RewriteyourcompositionHomework:Compositionwriting

写作复习课Compositionwriting写作复习课随着互联网的发展，网络购物变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络购物了，比淘宝网，京东商城等。

请以“ShoppingontheInternet”为题写一篇80词的短文，谈谈你对网购利与弊的看法。随着互联网的发展，网络购物变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经advantages?disadvantages?Ideas(观点)advantages?disadvantages?Idaheadatailabodybeginningendmainbody主体Structure（结构）aheadatailabodybeginninge

1.Theworldislarge.Andmanypeoplewanttobuysomethingfromothercountries.Buttheycan’t.Howtobegin2.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingontheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.

1.TheworldislTopicsentence（

主题句）Atopicsentenceexpressesthemainideaofaparagraphandhelpsyouunderstand

apassage.

Atopicsentenceisusuallythefirstsentenceofaparagraph.Topicsentence（主题句）AtopicseTherearemanythingsontheInternet.

OntheInternet,peoplecanbuyfoods,clothes,booksandsoon.What’smore,manythingsarecheaperandnicer,andpeoplehavemoretimetochoose.Alsopeoplecandosomeshoppingwithoutleavingtheirhouses.Reviseatopicsentence修改主题句TherearemanythingsontheISupportingsentences(推展句)Supportingsentencessupportyourideaandgivesomedetailsaboutyouridea.Supportingsentences(推展句)S①Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.②First,shoppingonlineismoreconvenientthangoingtotheshop.③Second,thegoodsarecheaperthanthoseinthestores.④Manypeoplewhocan’tfindajobusuallychoosetorunashopon

line.

①Shoppingonlinehasmany

restateyouridea(重申观点)Shoppingonlinehelpsusalot,butweshoulddoitcarefully.

givesomeadvice(提出建议)Thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoimprovethesafetyofshoppingonline.Howtoendrestateyouridea(重申观点)HowWordsandSentences

遣词造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?A:Byusinglinkingwords

（连接词）WordsandSentencesQ:Howtoforexample,suchas,like,forinstanceBrainstorm

what’smore,what’sworse,besides,alsohowever,but,whilebecauseof,becauseso,so…that,asaresult

inorderto,inorderthat,sothatinshort,intotal,inaword举例递进转折原因结果目的总结forexample,suchas,like,fAsweknow,shoppingontheInternethasmanyadvantages.___________,wecannotonlysavelotsoftimebutalsobuycheaperthings.__________,

wecanshopatanytime.__________,

italsohasdisadvantages.Wecanonlyseethepictures,_____wedon’tknowaboutthequality._________,

it’snotsafetopayontheNet.____________,

weshouldshopontheNetcarefullysothatitcanserveusbetter.Forexample

What’smoreHoweversoWhat’sworseInshortForexampleWhat’smoreWordsandSentences遣词造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?B:Byusinggoodsentencepatterns句式WordsandSentences遣词造句Q:HowE.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.It’simportant.It’simportantforus

tokeephealthy.E.g.2:It’sbeautifulmusic.Whatbeautifulmusic(itis)!

Howbeautifulthemusicis!

E.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.Goodsentencepatterns1.Itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todosth.2.notonly…butalso…3.the+比较级，the+比较级4.从句(状语、宾语、定语从句等)Goodsentencepa1.Wecansavealotoftime.

WecanbuycheaperthingsontheNet.

WecannotonlysavealotoftimebutalsobuycheaperthingsontheNet.Wordsandsentences1.Wecansavealotoftime.

2.Ifwecanbemorecar