读后续写 练习写作指导 讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项

读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。EmilyWhite

wasbornseventeenyearsagowithsomanybirth

problemsinherbody.Someofherorgans,bonesandmuscleswereoutofshape.Nooneexpectedhertosurvive.Shedidmakeitbutwithherstrangebodyfigure,everyonecouldrecognizeher,evenfromadistance.InEmilyWhite’shometown,therewasayearlyoutdoor

performance

intheschoolauditorium(大礼堂).IthadbeenperformedforsomanyyearsandactuallyhadbecomeoneofthemostimportanteventsoftheChristmasseasonformanyofthetown’speople.Manypeopletriedouteachyearforit,butsomanywereturnedaway.Itcanonlyincludethemostexcellentpeopleinthefield.Emilyhadabeautifulsinging

voice.LastyearshewenttoMrs.Owens–hermusicteachertoasktojoinintheperformance.Withoutlettingher

sing,Mrs.OwenstookalookatAmy’sbodyandsaid,“Child,youjustdon’tfit.Everyonewouldstareatyouandthatwouldmakeyouuncomfortable.Itwouldmakethemuncomfortable,too.”Withoutsingingasinglenote,Emilywassentbackthroughthedoorofthechoralroom.Hurtandupset,shedecidednevertotryoutagain.ButMrs.Owensthenretired.Thisyear,therecameanewmusicteacher,

Mr.Buttler.HeheardaboutEmilyandsuggestedthatshehaveatry.Emilydidn’twanttobe

rejected

again,soshehesitatedalittleaboutit.AsEmilystruggled,thedoorwaspushedopenandMr.Buttlercalled,“Emily,you’renext.”Althoughkindof

nervous,EmilydidasMr.Buttlertoldhertodo.Mr.ButtlersatbythepianotokeepEmilycompany.WhenEmilyfinishedhertestingperformance,shethankedMr.Buttlerandknewtheresultwouldbe

posted

onthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.Emilycouldn’tsleepthatnight.Shewassufferingfromthefeelingsthatshedidn’tfitandthegreatneedtobeaccepted.Bythenextmorning,herstomachwaseveninpainbecauseofstress.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph1:Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.__________

Paragraph2:

Finally,thedayofperformancecame.______

试题分析█前文分析●主要人物♥EmilyWhite:

-bornseventeenyearsagowithsomanybirthproblemsinherbody.-

hadabeautifulsingingvoice♥Mr.Buttler:-anewmusicteacher-heardaboutEmilyandsuggestedthatshehaveatry●主要情节Emily是一个一出生身体就有很多问题的孩子，不过，她竟然奇迹般地生活了下来。她的家乡每年都有一场圣诞季在学校大礼堂的节目表演，要能上台表演是件非常难的事情。Emily的嗓音非常不错。去年她也想上台表演，但被看都没看一眼她的音乐老师Mrs.Owens拒绝了，理由是她的长相。她很受打击，表示再也不愿去尝试了。好在，Mrs.Owens不久就退休了。来了一位叫Mr.Buttler的音乐老师。他极力鼓励Emily去试试。最终，在老师的鼓励下，她报了名，参加了面唱，在忐忑不安中，等待结果的出来。......●主题要义人与人的关系Emily主动尝试被拒到新音乐老师鼓励去参与，凸显鼓励的重要性█下文安排●续写内容建议：Paragraph1:Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom....①（与开头句衔接）简单描述忐忑的心情②主要写看到的结果及对Mr.Buttler的感谢③努力排练，为了更出色的表现Paragraph2:

Finally,thedayofperformancecame....①表演前，简单回顾困难和描述她的身心表现②表演的情况③后续（如何升华主题）下水作文Paragraph1:

Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.So

nervous

wasshethatherheartbeatwildly.Butthefactwasthatatthetopofthe

posted

listwashername“EmilyWhite”.Shewasn’t

rejected,whichmadeherhappy.Shewentbackthroughthedoorofthe

choralroom

andgavesincerethanksto

Mr.Buttler.ItwashisappreciationandencouragementthatEmilyhadsuchlucktohavethechancetoshareherbeautifulsinging

voice.Inthefollowingdays,shepracticedashardasshecouldtoshowthebestofherself.(88words)Paragraph2:

Finally,thedayofperformancecame.Itwastimeforhertoproveherselfthoughthe

problemsinherbody

reallybroughthermuchtroubleinlife.Waitingforherturntocome,shefeltabitanxious,palmssweating,butshetriedtodevelophermoodsof

performance.Sooncameherchance.Shegatheredherenergyto

sing

thesongbyheart.Herclearandmelodiousvoiceconqueredtheaudiencewiththeirgenerousandthunderousapplauses.ConfidencecametoEmilyandshewasevenchosenastheambassadorfortheannualgreatevent.(88words)参考范文Paragraph1：

Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.Shewasnot

rejected

thistime.Hernamewas

posted

atthetopofthelist.She,

EmilyWhite,

waschosentobetheleadingsinger!Shewould

sing

aloneinthe

performance.Emilycouldn’tbelievehereyes.Theremustbesomemistake.But

Mr.Buttler

saidtoherwithdeterminedeyes.“Emily,Ichooseyoubecauseyoushouldperformthepart-your

voice

isunusual.Believeinyourself.”Greatlyencouraged,Emilypracticedreallyhard.Paragraph2：

Finally,thedayofperformancecame.Standinginfrontoftheline,Emilyfeltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.Whenthecurtainopenedup,theeyesofthewholeaudiencefelluponEmily.“EmilyWhite!”Someonewhispered.Thenalon