大学英语四级作文部分分析解析公开课一等奖省优质课大赛获奖课件

大学英语四级写作四级考试作文评分标准基本评分标准：１.作文满分为15分2.阅卷标准为5等：2---5---8---11---153.各分数段可依据考生写作质量上下浮动1分，无半分之说。四级考试作文评分标准详细评分标准：2分---条理不清，思想不清，语言破碎，多有严重语法错误；5分---基本切题。思想不清，连贯性差，较多严重语言错误；8分---基本切题。个别地方思想不清，文字勉强连贯，有一定语法错误；11分—切题。思想清楚，表示连贯，少许语法错误；14分—思想清楚，文字通畅，连贯很好，语法有个别错误。四级作文写作方法---议论文综观历年四级作文,写作类型可分为四种1.现象分析型2.问题处理型3.对比选择型4.观点论证型1.现象分析型四级作文写作方法---议论文现象分析型第一段:提出问题,描述现象第二段:分析问题,阐述原因第三段:处理问题,表明观点例:12月—议论文:关于新年晚会1.许多人在除夕观看春节晚会2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会3.我看法四级作文写作方法---议论文现象分析型作文格式:第一段:Accordingto…,wefindclearlythatnowadays…whichshouldbeengivenconcern,…hasalreadyarousedourattention,whatmakesusamazed/impressesus/inspiresusisthat….四级作文写作方法---议论文现象分析型举例(模拟题作文1)第一段写作方法:StudyAbroad当前很多中国学生出国留学留学热原因我观点四级作文写作方法---议论文StudyAbroad第一段:当前很多中国学生出国留学

1.Accordingtonewly-madesurvey,moreandmorestudentsinuniversitiesandcollegesareplanningtogoabroadforstudy.2.Wefindclearthatnowadaysstudentsinuniversitiesandcollegeswhoaimatgoingabroadforstudyareincreasinggreatly.3.Tooursurprise,studentsinuniversitiesandcollegeswhoplantogoabroadforstudyareincreasinggreatly.4.Whatmakesusamazedisthatmany…四级作文写作方法---议论文现象分析型第二段写法你能够写这么句子开头:原因1:Firstofall/firstly/tobeginwith/inthefirstplace.原因2:what’smore/secondly/moreover/原因3:Inadditionto/besides原因4:therefore/asaresult/Consequently.总结最终造成结果.四级作文写作方法---议论文StudyAbroad第二段:留学热原因Thetrendisattributedtoadvantagesofstudyingoverseas.Inthefirstplace,studentscanhaveaccesstoadvancedscienceandtechnologyaswellasdesirableworkingconditionswhichmightnotbeavailableathome.Inthesecondplace,theyareexposedtoentirelynewideasandtrends.What’smore,overseasexperienceisthebestopportunityforthereal-lifeuseofforeignlanguages四级作文写作方法---议论文现象分析型第三段写法你能够写这么句子开头:Inmyopinion,/asfarasIamconcerned/astome/inmypointofview,来概括自己观点.Firstly/foronething/Ononehand,理由1besides/inadditionto/foranother/ontheotherhand,理由2Toconclude/tosumup/inaword/inconcusion,总结句四级作文写作方法---议论文StudyAbroad第三段:我观点Yet,weshouldavoidgoingabroadblindly.Ononehand,itisexpensive.Ontheotherhand,itisprobablypainfulbecauseacompletelynewenvironmentwithdifferentcustomsandhabitsmayalsobeabarriertooverseasstudents,andyoumayfindyourselfinastrangeworldandmayfeelhelpless.Sowemustbesurethatwecangetbettereducationandexperienceoverseasbeforemakingthefinaldecision.2.问题处理型四级作文——问题处理型这类作文普通为提要式作文，多为说明文。通常首先提出一个有待处理问题，然后要求考生就该问题提出处理方法、路径，有时还要求考生最终谈论适合自己方法。这类题型基本模式是：第一段：提出问题或阐述某件事情主要性或意义；第二段：列举说明处理某事方式或处理某个问题路径；第三段：针对第二段所阐述方法给予简明评论，也可提出个人提议或选择，并阐述理由。此题型写作重点在How，即处理问题方法。问题处理型作文

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1.Withtheof，.①问题出现背景

2.Soitisofgreatimportanceforusto.②提出问题

3.Ontheonehand,.③问题后果一

4.Ontheotherhand,.④问题后果二

5.However,wehavefiguredoutmanywaysto.⑤提出处理这一问题方法四级作文——问题处理型作文模板

6.Firstly,.⑥处理方法一

7.Solongas.⑦深入说明方法一

8.Secondly,.⑧方法二

9.Thirdly,.⑨方法三

10.Infact,.⑩提出处理问题根本路径11.

Thatisbecause.11支持⑩句理由12.

Inaword,.12总结全文3.对比选择型对比选择型这类作文多为提要式作文，议论文体裁。通常首先叙述相反两个观点，或分析评论某一社会现象优缺点，然后给出自己看法和看法，是四级考试中最常见一个作文形式。这类作文基本模式是：分三个自然段来叙述。第一段：叙述一些人对某一事物或现象看法，或某一事物优点；第二段：叙述另一些人对此事物或现象看法，或某一事物缺点；第三段：表明自己观点。

在写这类作文时，尤其要注意在对比段落之间使用一些表示转折关系词汇或句子，如：however，ontheotherhand，incontrastwith/to等，使文章看起来流畅自然。惯用句式第一段:1.therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyabout…2.Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernon…3.Withthedevelopmentofsociety…4.Itiswellknownthat…5.Itiscertain/obvious/true/commonthat…6.Inaddition/additionally…7.Thereforehowtosolvethisproblemisworthourattention8.it’sgreatimportanceforustosolvethisproblem…9.Soit’shightimeforustosolvethisproblem…

四级作文写作方法---议论文第二段:Firstly/tobeginwith/Ontheonehand/firstofall…Secondly/Ontheotherhand/further/lastbutnotleast/moreover…四级作文写作方法---议论文第三段:1.Infact,therearestillmanysolutionstothisproblem…2.Asforme3.Inaword/allinall/therefore/onlyinthisway…4.观点论证型四级作文——观点论证型这一类作文多为提要式作文，议论文体裁，通常是围绕某一事物或观点进行论证，有时以格言或谚语为议论对象，要求考生提供论据加以说明。(近十年四级考试中观点论证型作文共出现一次

)第一段：提出论点第二段：例证论点第三段：得出结论或表明个人看法或做法注意表明自己观点时候要清楚明白，不能含含糊糊。例：、1Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicItPaystoBeHonest.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.当前社会上存在许多不老实现象2.老实利人利已，做人应该老实四级作文——观点论证型写作模板观点论证型模板一：Itiswellknownthat…(2)Thetruthofitisself-evident.(3)Noonecandeny.(4)Therefore.(5)Manyexamplescanbefoundtoprove.(6)Takeasatypicalexample.(7)People__________________.(8)Furthermore.(9)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.(10)Then.(11)Thereisnodoubtthat.(12)Inconclusion.四级作文——观点论证型写作模板

观点论证型模板二：(1)Itisbelievedthat.(2)Thetruthisdeepandprofound.(3)Asweknow.(4)Conse-quently.(5)Acaseinpointis.(6)Thisisclosetosuggest.(7)Itistruethat____.(8)Inaddition.(9)Allmentionedabovetellsus.(10)Asamatteroffact.(11)Thereisnodenyingthat英语四级作文八种惯用句型一.原因1.Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.3.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...4.Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...5.Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat...6.Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is...7.Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat…8.Butthefundamentalcauseisthat二.比较1.Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages.2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.3.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.4.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.5.AandBhaveseveralpointsincommon.6.AandBdifferinseveralways.7.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.8.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.三.批驳1)Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.2)Somepeoplesay...,butitdoesnotholdwater.3)Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat...4)Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousthestatementis.5)Itmakesnosensetoarguefor...6)Toomuchstressplacedon...mayleadto...7)Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat...8)Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat...四.后果1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis...3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon...4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat...五.举例1)Agoodcaseinpointis...2)Asanillustration,wemaytake...3)Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.4)...isoftencitedasanexample.

六.证实1)Noonecandenythefactthat...2)Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.3)Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows...4)Recentstudiesindicatethat...5)Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat...6)Accordingtostatisticsprovidedby...,itcanbeseenthat...七.开篇1)Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...2)Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.3)Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.4)Recen