读后续写练习写作指导讲义-2023届高考英语写作备考

读后续写练习写作指导讲义题目展示WhenIwasaboutsix,myfamilyandIwenttoDisneylandoneweekendandhadawonderfuldayfullofexcitement.LittledidIknowthattherealexcitementwasn'ttobeginuntillastnight.Whilewewatchedthefireworks,Ibegantogetanurgetogototherestroom,butIdidn'twanttomisstheshow.IoverheardmysisterIsabeltalkingtomymom,andIgotclosertothemtohearwhattheyweretalkingabout.〃Mom,I'mgoingtothebathroomwithLizette,okay?"saidIsabel/'Okay/'mymomreplied,/zbutstaytogether.Idon/twantanyofyougettinglost."ThesecondIsawmysistersleaving,Ididn'tthinktwicebeforerunningafterthemwithouttellingmyparents.AsIfollowedthemthroughthehugecrowdofpeople,Istartedtolosesightofthem.IbegantopanicasIscannedthecrowdforthem.Crazythoughtsranthroughmyheadlike"WhatifIneverseemyfamilyagain??,lgaveuptryingtofindmysistersandtriedtogetbacktomyfamily,butIwascompletelymixedup.Aftersearchingforwhatseemedlikeforever,Icouldn'tholdbackmytears,andIstartedcryinglikeIhadnevercriedbefore.〃Mommy!〃Icriedout.Buteveryonearoundmewastoocaughtupbythefireworkstopayanyattentiontome.ItriedtostopthescarythoughtsthatweregoingthroughmyheadandstartedrunningasfastasIcould...anywhere...everywhere.Iwasgoingcrazy.Kmonlysix,andI'vegottenlost."WhathaveIdone?HowcouldIhavebeensodumbtorunoffwithouttellinganyone?”Ithought.Withmyfacewetfromtears,Ikeptrunning,pullingatpeople'spantsandcrying."Mommy!”Iwashoping,wishing,thatoneoftheseadultswouldbeoneofmyparents.注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Luckily,Ifeltapatonmyshoulderandagentlevoicecame,“Areyoulost?"

Finally,throughthecrowdofpeople,Irecognizedaface.【读后续写前小测】回答下面儿个问题，检测一下你是否读懂了材料，?Howtounderthetwo''excitements"sinthefirstparagraph?Whatarethemaincharacters?WhydidIgetlost?【故事脉络】OpeningOpeningOpening在我六岁的时候•Opening在我六岁的时候•第一次和家人们去了迪士尼玩。Build-up困妹三人都想上厕所，我在没有告知父母的情;兄下追着帕帕们一起丢了。Climax我跟丢了,然后迷路7•Build-up困妹三人都想上厕所，我在没有告知父母的情;兄下追着帕帕们一起丢了。Climax我跟丢了,然后迷路7•15到害怕和无助,拼命唱着妈妈但是没得人帮助和回应我•Resolution此时出现了转机,有一个陌生人较拍我的房腌井问我是否迷路T,那么我是否能脱离困境呢……Ending{Ending{最终我找到妈妈了吗【谋篇布局】Ending{最终我找到妈妈了吗续写第一段提示句为Luckily,Ifeltapatonmyshoulderandagentlevoicecame,"Areyoulost?〃幸运的是，我感到有人拍了我的肩膀并且传来一阵温柔的声音，询问我是否迷路了。根据读后续写一般落脚于正能量的结局，下文应该写这个陌生人对我的帮助，帮助我如何找到下面那张熟悉的面孔，由此可以借助情绪转变，如年仅六岁的我面对迷路时的麻木、惊慌等转变为收到帮助后我宽慰与开心。此外要注意和第二段的衔接,续写第二段提示句Finally,throughthecrowdofpeople,Irecognizedaface,最终，通过人群，我认出了一张脸。由此，第一段的末尾可以写她牵着我的手，带我从茫茫人海中寻找我的家人。其次，要续的是第二段的内容，可以从我找到了那张熟悉面容之后的动作神情入手，以及我和家人们对这位热心的陌生人的感激。最后可以思考，通过这样一件事，我的所感所思，以及思考如何回应点题文章开头的excitementoParagraphl:Luckily,Ifeltapatonmyshoulderandagentlevoicecame,“Areyoulost?"QI：Hearingit,whataboutmyreaction?Q2：Whopetonmyshoulder?Howheorshehelpedmeout?Paragraph2:Finally,throughthecrowdofpeople,Irecognizedaface.Q3：WhosefacedidIrecognize?Q4：WhataboutmyfeelingsandactionswhenIrecognizedtheface?Q5：WhatistheendofmyexperienceinDisneyland?【语言准备】【文本精彩语块积累】问题素材QlTakenabackbyasuddenpat,IwassospeechlessthatIjustnoddedmyheadupanddown.Onhearingit,Icouldn'thelpmunnuringinasorrowfilltone,"Yes,I...Iam.”Q2Iturnedback,andinfrontofmewasakindlady.Whatcameintomysightwasabenignoldman.Hescoopedmeupandgent1askedmashvIwouldgetlost.Q3Isabel/Lizette/MomQ4Iwavedatherfrantically,exclaiming,"Isabel,I'mhereI'mhere.”Slightlyquiveringinexcitement,Itookunsteadystepsforwardandhuggedhertightly.Q5Whatanexcitingexperience!Sincethen,Ihaveneverleftforsomeplace^without-tellingothers,andsuchanunforgettableexperiencestillcreasesmeupwhenever1recalleditgetanurgetodo：有想做某事的冲动notthinktwice：不假思索crazythoughtsrunthroughone'smind：疯狂的想法闪过在某人的脑海whatif：要是……会怎么样holdback：抑制，控制（感情等）becaughtupby：引申为被……迷住【语言赏析】betakenaback：（被…）吓了一跳scoopsb.up：抱起某人fightone'sway：努力开辟出一条路挤进去allinasplitsecond：突然surpassingwarmth：出自电影《沙丘》，可以翻译为超然的温暖withallmymight：用尽全力throwone'sarmsaroundsb.：拥抱某人wordsfailsbtodo：言语无法表达…one/slipscurveintoareassuringsmile：咧嘴露出宽慰的微笑【参考范文】Luckily,Ifeltapatonmyshoulderandagentlevoicecame,“Areyoulost?”"yeses!"Icried.ItwasaladyworkingatDisney.Shepickedmeupandcarriedmethroughthecrowdasshekeptaskingmewheremyparentshadbeenstanding.AsIbegantofeelsafeinthelady'sarms,Icalmeddownandthoughtforafewminutes.Irememberedwehadbeenleaningagainstawoodenfence.Shecarriedmearoundthewoodenfence,askingrandompeople,/zlsthisyourchild?""No.Sorry//everyonekeptsaying.You'resorry?Lookatme.I'mlookingformymommy,Ithought.Finally,throughthecrowdofpeople,Irecognizedaface.Iwassohappy."Mommy!"shoutedasIpointedtowardhersotheladycouldcarrymetoher.Whentheladyputmedown,rantomymomandgaveherahugehug.Icouldn'tletgoofher.Ididn/twanttoloseheragain.AsIcriedinmymother'sarms,myfamilythankedtheniceladyforeverythingshehaddoneforme.Fortherestoftheeveningandtheentirenextd