高考英语基础写作人物介绍辅导课件

Listentoadialogueandfillintheblankswiththewordsyouhear.11/17/20221M:WouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutMr.OlympicBudGreenspan?W:Sure.Heis__________Mr.Olympic.Heis_________,afamousjournalistwho________________________greateventsoftheOlympicGames.He_________editgreateventsoftheOlympicgamesin1948.He____________________bothSummerOlympicandtheWinterOlympic.M:Iwastoldhealsomadefilms.Canyounamesomeofthem?W:Yes.He______somemasterpieces巨著aboutsports.Thefirstoneis______________________.Thisfilmisabouttheweightlifter举重员,11/17/20222JohnDavis.HewonthegoldmedalinHelsinki芬兰首都赫尔辛基in1952OlympicGames.M:Doeshehaveanyotherworks?W:TheOlympiadandtheGoldenAgeofSport.TheybothcovertheOlympicGames.M:Whatdoeshebelievein?W:He______________________.He____“OlympicGamesarejustlike__________.They______muchmorethantradeandprice.”M:Thankyousomuchfortellingmesomuchabouthim.11/17/20223JohnDavis.HewonthegoldmedalinHelsinki芬兰首都赫尔辛基in1952OlympicGames.M:Doeshehaveanyotherworks?W:TheOlympiadandtheGoldenAgeofSport.TheybothcovertheOlympicGames.M:Whatdoeshebelievein?W:He______________________.He____“OlympicGamesarejustlike__________.They______muchmorethantradeandprice.”M:Thankyousomuchfortellingmesomuchabouthim.believesinthespiritofsportChristmassaidmean11/17/20225W:Sure.HeisthefamousMr.Olympic.HeisAmerican,afamousjournalistwhohascollectedandreportedgreateventsoftheOlympicGames.HestartedtoeditgreateventsoftheOlympicgamesin1948.HewasveryinterestedinbothSummerOlympicandtheWinterOlympic.……W:Yes.Hemadesomemasterpieces巨著aboutsports.ThefirstoneisTheStrongestManintheWorld.Thisfilmisabouttheweightlifter…W:Hebelievesinthespiritofsport.Hesaid“OlympicGamesarejustlikeChristmas.Theymeanmuchmorethantradeandprice.”11/17/20226基础写作系列之

11/17/20227如何写人物介绍Howtowritebiography

11/17/20228DearBruce,IwasgladtoknowyoubegantostudyChineseliterature.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutLuxun.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.SinceyouarelearningChineseliteratures,IthinkreadingLuXun’snovelswillhelpyoutoknowmoreaboutit.Yours,LiMing11/17/202210人物简介的一般步骤：

Givetherightorder()教育：education()外貌／性格appearance,character()生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)()评估evaluation()概况age,sex,birth-place,background１２３４５概,貌,育,平,估

11/17/202212人物简介的一般步骤：

Givetherightorder()教育：education()外貌／性格appearance,character()生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)()评估evaluation()概况age,sex,birth-place,background１２３４５概,貌,育,平,估

11/17/2022141.Birthdayandbirthplace

概—was/werebornon…in…,ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867.（她于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。）AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.（亚伯拉汗·林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于1809年2月12日出生于肯他基州。）Borninarichfamily,KingKongreceivedagoodeducationwhenhewasyoung.出生在一个有钱人家中，KingKong小时候接受了很好的教育。11/17/2022152,

appearance,character貌

near/short-sighted（近视眼的）tall（个高的）short（个矮的）pretty（漂亮的）naughty（淘气)lovely（可爱的）easy-going（温和宽容的）smart（精明的）wise（明智的） bright（聪明的）diligent（勤奋的） healthy（健康的）humorous（幽默的)funny（滑稽的）silent（沉默的） attractive（有吸引力的）talkative（多话的）Hethinksheissoattractivethathelikesstaringatthemirrorformanytimeseveryday,whichisfunnytous.他认为自己非常有吸引力以至于每日都凝视着镜子很多次，（which）我们觉得很滑稽。11/17/2022163.Education——育 1)graduatefrom……departmentof……university, 2)Whenatcollege,hemajoredin……, 3)receiveadoctor’sdegree. 4)gethighereducation 5)goabroadforfurtherstudiesWhenatcollege,MuBangmajoredinFootballTeaching,thenhewentabroadforfurtherstudies,hopingtoleadNationalFootballteamwinintheFIFAWorldCup.

睦邦在大学期间主修足球教育，然后留学深造获取博士学位，希望带领中国男足夺得世界杯冠军。11/17/2022174.Bigeventsinhislife——平1）beinterestedin…, 2)workhardat…,3)devotehislifetimeto…,4)doresearchabout/into…5)makeabigdecision.makeupone’smindtodosth.6)dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance.7)befondof…,8)bestrictinsth.9)havea…wayofdoingsth.10)tryone’sbesttodosth.DragonBrothermakesuphismindtodevotehislifetimetosport.龙哥下定决心为体育奉献毕生。11/17/2022181.A.概况:译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)BorninGuangzhouin1941,ZhongNanshanisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.2)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.B.外貌,性格:译：我的地理老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发*语法，句法高分tips尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺

Mygeographyteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.巧用with做定语11/17/202220C.教育经历：1）MajoringinScience,hegraduatedfromafamousUniversityinthenorthandafter4years,hewentabroadforfurtherstudies.2）GraduatingfromthedepartmentofEnglishofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctor'sdegree.D．生平：1）Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.2）Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章11/17/202221

Howtocorrect?1、是否恰好五句话？２、是否每句都含必要信息？３、可否自由发挥？４、PANTS纠错原则：1)pattern2)agreement一致3)number4)tense时态5)spelling拼写11/17/202223基础写作注意事项：1）能写几句就写几句不留空白2）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性(completeness)和连贯性(coherence)、句子结构的正确性(Correctness)和复杂性(Variety)。3）每句占2.5分，每0.5分为一档4）连贯性共占2.5分5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥。6）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给0.5分。7）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句不得分。8）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词。11/17/202224（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人（2）为了国家，弃医从文。Born….,…whose….giveup….because…..BorninShaoxing,ZhejiangProvince,LuXunwithrealnameZhouShurenabandonedthestudyofmedicinebecausehethoughthecouldchangesocietymorethroughwriting.

11/17/202226（3）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。Notonly…,butalsothefatherof….NotonlywasLuXunawell-KnownChinesewriter,athinker,andtranslator,butalsothefatherofmodernChineseliterature.11/17/202227（4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片。…havebeentranslatedinto….,suchas….Hisnovelshavebeentranslatedintomanylanguagesandsomeofnovelshavebeenmadeintofilms,suchas

TheTrueStoryofAHQandTheNewYear’sSacrifice.11/17/202228FindoutthegoodsentencesinthepossibleversionandrememberthemwithyourpartnerDearBruce,IwasgladtoknowyoubegantostudyChineseliterature.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutLuxun.

BorninShaoxing,ZhejiangProvince,LuXunwithrealnameZhouShurenabandonedthestudyofmedicinebecausehethoughthecouldchangesocietymorethroughwriting.NotonlywasLuXunawell-KnownChinesewriter,athinker,andtranslator,butalsothefatherofmodernChineseliterature.Hisnovelshavebeentranslatedintomanylanguagesandsomeofnovelshavebeenmadeintofilms,suchasTheTrueStoryofAHQandTheNewYear’sSacrifice.Someofhisnovelshavebeencollectedinhighschoolandcollegetextbooks.SinceyouarelearningChineseliteratures,IthinkreadingLuXun’snovelswillbenefitalot.Yours,11/17/2022302.仿写：假如你叫白云，从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。(1)姓名：白云，出生于广州市越秀区，年龄27岁。(2)2001年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学。(3)2005年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。(4)英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。(5)为了报效祖国，于2006年毅然回国。（6）有数学天赋。注意：1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出，不算字数。 [写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。[评分标准] 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。Nowcomesyourtern!11/17/202231DearSir,Howdoyoudo?Throughthead.I