2022-2023学年双语学习报综合能力检测六（读后续写）

2022-2023学年双语学习报-综合能力检测六（读后续写）试题原题第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。28-year-oldLukeWesleywasarestaurantsmanager.Andhewastall,energeticandkind-hearted.Oneevening,hesawanold,thinmaninawheelchairentertherestaurantandstopbythewindow.Afteralongtime,themanorderednothing.Lukeapproachedhimandasked,“Sir,wouldyoulikesomecoffeeandasandwich?”Theoldmanhadhiseyesfixedoutsidethewindow.Itseemedlikehewaslookingforsomeoneorsomethingtoappearoutofthedarknight.ThenhelookedatLukeandsaidhewasfine.Sincetherestaurantshouldhaveclosedanhourearlier,Lukeinformedthemanthatitwasbeyondclosingtime.“Oh,Fmsorry,“theoldmanapologized."It'sjustthatthisplaceremindsmeofmanymemories…mywifeand…"Lukewascluelessaboutwhatthemanwassaying.Hesawtheman'seyesfilledwithtears.“MynameisAndrewSmith.Iwasaregularvisitorhere40yearsago,“themancontinued."ItwasinthisrestaurantthatImetmybelovedPriscilla.Shelovedtowatchmountainsjustlikeme.”AbsorbedinAndrew,sstory,Lukekeptlistening.Asitturnedout,AndrewandPriscilla'sloveformountainsbroughtthemtogether."Istillrememberthemomentsheagreedtomarryme!”Andrewcried."Butthen,sheleftmeanddiedalone.”Lukecomfortedhimandcuriouslyasked,“SowhathappenedtoPriscilla?”“Wewerecelebratingourfirstweddinganniversaryandwereonourwaytoamountain,“Andrewbegan."Duringthejourney,aspeedingtruckhitus.”AndrewrevealedPriscilladiedafterthecrashwhilehesurvivedbutlosthisabilitytowalk.AndAndrewsaidtheyhadnochildren.Sad,LukepattedAndrewonhisshouldertocomforthim."MyonlywishistogoupthatmountainonelasttimewithPriscilla'sphoto.Shereallywantedtohikethatmountain,“Andrewpainfullysaid.Consideringhisphysicalconditions,Andrewknewwhathewantedwasimpossible.ButLukethoughtotherwise.Thatevening,LukedroppedAndrewathisaddressandpromisedtovisithimoncetheweathercleared.Paragraph1:Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.Paragraph2:LukegentlyloweredAndrewtoaflatrockonthe/nountaintop.试题分析1.人物：Luke:>28-year-oldLukeWesleywasarestaurantsmanager.Andhewastall,energeticandkind-hearted.Andrew：“MynameisAndrewSmith.Iwasaregularvisitorhere40yearsago,“themancontinued."ItwasinthisrestaurantthatImetmybelovedPriscilla.Shelovedtowatchmountainsjustlike，，me.“Istillrememberthemomentsheagreedtomarryme!”Andrewcried."Butthen,sheleftmeanddiedalone.”“Wewerecelebratingourfirstweddinganniversaryandwereonourwaytoamountain,“Andrewbegan.uDuringthejourney,aspeedingtruckhitus.”AndrewrevealedPriscilladiedafterthecrashwhilehesurvivedbutlosthisabilitytowalk.AndAndrewsaidtheyhadnochildren.“MyonlywishistogoupthatmountainonelasttimewithPriscilla'sphoto.Shereallywantedtohikethatmountain,“Andrewpainfullysaid..情节：Luke,28岁，是一个饭店的老板，个高精力充沛心地好。有一天，他看到有一位瘦瘦的老人坐着轮椅进了他的饭店，等了好久也不见老人点餐。于是，他好奇地走过去，与老人聊了起来。这位叫Andrew的老人，说在40年前，他是这家饭店的老客，正是在这家店里，他认识了也同样热爱大山的姑娘Priscilla并结了婚。但是，在一次前往登山的途中，发生了车祸，后面的那辆开的飞快的卡车直接撞了上来,Priscilla被撞死，而他虽活了下来，但失去了走路的能力。他无儿无女，唯一的愿望是有一天能带着心爱的Priscilla的照片去登上那座一直没能登上的大山。听完Andrew的故事，当天晚上Luke去了Andrew的住所，答应当天气转好的时候，他会再次去见他。.主题：“人与社会”如何帮助老人Andrew实现愿望.续写安排：第一段：Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.①（与前一句衔接）Andrew的反应②简单沟通登山计划，驱车前往山脚③（与下一段开头句衔接）成功登顶第二段：LukegentlyloweredAndrewtoaflatrockonthemountaintop.①（做好与开头句的衔接）安放好Andrew后，Luke的表现②Andrew接下去做了什么？（这是有心的Luke特意安排Andrew和Priscilla40周年纪念日这天登山）③从Andrew的身上，Luke学到了很多，从此他俩成了一生的朋友。下水作文Paragraph1:Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.Neverhadhethoughttheyoungman,Luke,wouldkeephispromise.Afterabriefdescriptionofthemarvelousplan,LukewentstraighttohelpAndrewintohisvehiclewithabackpackonhisback.Alltheway,theychattedasiftheywerelonglostfriends.Anhour'sdriveledthemtothefootofthemountain.Allwentsmoothlyasplanned.Energeticandkind-heartedLukecarriedAndrewon,goingupwithsteadyandfirmsteps.Nothingwasbetterthanmakingittothetop.(86words)Paragraph2:LukegentlyloweredAndrewtoaflatrockonthemountaintop.Stilloutofbreath,Lukefeltitwasallworthit,fascinatedbythebeautifulsceneryandthousandsofthanksfromAndrew.Amoment'ssilence,AndrewputthephotoofhisbilovedPriscillaonthetopofarock,tellingherhehadfulfilledtheirwonderfulwishandhowhesurvivedthosedarkyears,tearsinhiseyes.Indeed,itwastheir39weddinganniversarythatday!Andrew,sbitterbutthebeautifulmemorywasabookworthLuke'scarefulreading.Fromthenon,alifelongfriendshiplasted.(87words)参考范文Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.AfterLukeexplainedthereasonforhisvisit,Andrewwassotouched.Asthetwodrovetothemountain,AndrewsilentlyweptbecauseitwasthesameroutehehadtakenwherehelostPriscillaintheaccident.Whentheyarrivedatthefootofthemountain,LukecarriedAndrewonhisback.Theyarrivedatthetoptwohourslate.Thebirdsflyinghi