读后续写练习指导 讲义（附试题分析及范文3篇）-2023高考英语二轮复习写作备考

读后续写练习指导原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ifthere'sonethingIcan'tstandpeoplesaying,itis“I'mnogoodatanything"or"Idon'thaveanytalent”,andIjustdon'tbuythatatall.Tome,everyonehasatleastonetalent,whichitsometimestakesyoualifetimetofind,anditdoesexist.TherewasatimewhenIdidn'tbelievethat.Whatchangedmymindwasseeminglysmalleventthattookplacein1953.AtthattimeIwasahighschoolstudent.Iwasafunny-lookingskinnyboynamedEugeneMauriceOrowitz,whoweighedbarely100pounds,andIwasagoodstudent,butasfarasIwasconcerned,injustabouteveryotherdepartmentIwasaloser.Iwantedtofitin,tobesomeoneanddosomethingwell.ButIhadn'tfoundanythingIwasgoodat.Onesunnyafternoon,ourgymclasswentouttotheschooTsrunningtrack.Theteachertaughtusallvarioustrackandfieldevents.Iwasaloserinallofthem.Thencamethejavelin（标枪）.Suddenlysomethinginsidemebegansaying,“Tryit!Tryit!”Ihadtowaitmyturn,though,tryingnottolooktooeager.Finally,wheneveryonehadhadachancetothrowthejavelinwiththebestthrowgoingabout30yards,Ilookedattheteacher.“Hey,Orowitz,doyouwanttotry?”heasked.Embarrassed,Ilookeddown,butmanagedtonodmyhead.“Well,comeonthen,“hesaidimpatiently,andhandedmethejavelin.BehindmeIcouldhearsomeofmyclassmateslaughing.AsIgraspedthejavelininmyhand,Iwasseizedwithastrangefeeling—anew-foundexcitement.Forsomecrazyreason,IwasrelaxedoverwhatIwasabouttodo,eventhoughI'dneverdoneitbefore.Iraisedthejavelinovermyhead,tooksixquickstepsandletthethinggo.Thesamevoicethathadurgedmetothrowitnowtoldmeitwasagoodthrow.注意：.续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式作答。Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.试题分析1.人物：theteacher:“Well,comeonthen」hesaidimpatiently,andhandedmethejavelin.classmates:BehindmeIcouldhearsomeofmyclassmateslaughing.:AtthattimeIwasahighschoolstudent.Iwasafunny-lookingskinnyboynamedEugeneMauriceOrowitz,whoweighedbarely100pounds,andIwasagoodstudent,butasfarasIwasconcerned,injustabouteveryotherdepartmentIwasaloser.Iwantedtofitin,tobesomeoneanddosomethingwell.ButIhadn'tfoundanythingIwasgoodat.Embarrassed,Ilookeddown,butmanagedtonodmyhead.AsIgraspedthejavelininmyhand,Iwasseizedwithastrangefeeling-anew-foundexcitement.Forsomecrazyreason,IwasrelaxedoverwhatIwasabouttodo,eventhoughrdneverdoneitbefore.Thesamevoicethathadurgedmetothrowitnowtoldmeitwasagoodthrow..前文主要情节：虽然是个好学生，但因为相貌长的滑稽瘦骨嶙峋，我经常被同学们笑话，自己对自己也没什么信心。但也一直想找到自己擅长之处，无奈未果。有一天，体育老师带我们到田径场上教了我们各种各样田径项目，我都没什么好的表现，终于在标枪项目的时候，所有的人都投掷了以后，发觉最远也就30yards（约27米左右），于是，我不太自信地看了看老师，在老师询问后，我拿起标枪准备投掷。虽从未投掷过标枪，但感觉上非常放松，内心有一个声音激励我投掷出去并告诉我投的相当不错。…….主题：“人与社会”“人与自我”如何发现自己的“潜能”，突破自我Tome,everyonehasatleastonetalent,whichitsometimestakesyoualifetimetofind,anditdoesexist..续写安排：第一段：Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.①（与前一句衔接）标枪飞出去后，最终结果如何？②出乎意料的结果让老师和同学们都感到惊讶，纷纷跑上来祝贺③我的感想？第二段：ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.①为什么要把标枪带回家？（与前一句衔接）②把今天发生的事情告诉了父母。父母又给我怎样的鼓励？③我对今天所发生的事情的内省？（点出主题）下水作文Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.Justastheinnervoiceforetold,itflewforwardbeautifully,drawinganelegantcurveintheair.Tomygreatsurprise,thejavelinlandedontheground20yardsmoreaheadofthebestthrow!Sounexpectedwastheresultthatitlefttheteacherandmyclassmateswildjoy.Theycameoverandhuggedmecrazilywithheartfeltcongratulationsandcheers.Afeelingofexcitementsweptoverme.NeverdidIknowthatIcouldprovemyselfinsuchanunintentionalway.（83words）ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.It'samarvelousawardthatmyteacherofferedme.Myparentsfeltpuzzledwhenseeingit.Isharedwhathadhappenedinthegymclasswiththem.Theypraisedmeformyexcellentperformance,sayingthatoneneverknewwherehistalentlaywithouttryingtograspthechance.Forthefirsttime,Ihadanewlookatmyself-Iwasn'taloserandIalsocoulddosomethingbetterthanothers.Thankstothatseeminglysmallevent,whichindeedchangedmylaterlife.(85words)参考范文参考范文1:Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.Myheartquickenedconstantlyasthejavelindrewabeautifulcurveinthebluesky.“31yards!”theteacherastonishedvoicehitmyeardrumdirectly,makingallthesoundsfadeintototalsilence.Contrarytotheirpreviouslaughs,myclassmateslookedatmewithadoration.Itwasthebestthrowthatputmetothetopofthelist.Theteacherannouncedexcitedly,€tIfithadn'tbeenforthejavelin,theskinnyboywhonamedOrowitzwouldneverhavefoundhistalent/9Whentheteacherdecidedtosendithomewithmeasagift,Igavehimabighug,screamingwithexcitement.(104words)ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.Lyinginmybed,Istaredatthemarvelousstuff,sleepless.NosoonerhadthesportsmeetendedthanIwaschosentobeamemberofthetrackteam.Butthefloodofexcitementwasstillsofresh,makingmesuddenlyrealizethetruth:one'stalentisalwaysthere,waitingforyoutotrywithcourage.Fromthatdayin1953,decadeshavepassedyetIstilltreasurethesewordsinmind.Itriedeverything,desiringtoexplorenewpossibilitiesofmylifetrack,andtheresultturnedouttobefruitful.Doremember:everyonehashisownjavelinjustgiveitathrow.(105words)参考范文2：Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.MyheartquickenedasIsawitcontinuetosail,drawingabeautifulcurveinthebluesky.30yards,then40yards.Asitwentpast50-yardmark,itwasstillgoing.Foramomentnothingwassaid.Thensomeonewhispered,“HolyCow!”andothersbegancheering.“51yards!”thencametheteacher'sastonishedvoice,makingallthesoundsfadeintototalsilence.NobodycouldbelievewhatlittleJackJoneshadjustdone.Underthegazeofmyclassmates,Itookthejavelinbacktotheteacher."Justkeepit."hesaid,stillshakinghisheadinwonder.Inodded,straighteningmyselfwithexcitement.(106words)ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.Holdingittightly,TstaredattheskinnyboyinthemirrorandtoldmyselfIwasdefinitelybornforit.ThenextdayIbeganpracticingwithit,andeverydaythatsummerIwouldthrowitonthetrackandeventuallymypracticepaidoff.NowIamaprofessionaljavelinthrower.Lookingback,Iwillneverforgetthatafternoon,whichenabledmetoapproachmyowntalentandgainmyconfidence.SoIwouldsaythereisnosuchpersonwithnotalent.Ifyouarestilltrappedintheworry,donotbedepressedbutletthethinggoandtrytochallengeyourselfrightnow,justlikemyfirstflyingjavelinintheazuresky.(121words)参考范文3：Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.MyheartquickenedasIsawitsailing,30yardsout,then40yar