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Unit2Writing话题:

今昔比较：描述变化，表达看法

书面表达（2022-11）

进入初三后，你在日常生活、学习、兴趣爱好以及性格等方面都有了一些变化。请你选择两个方面谈谈你的变化和你对初三生活的看法。

可供参考的词汇：playsports,studyby,moreoutgoing,busy审题：文体____________

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Inthegread9,mylifehaschangedalot.

First,aboutfreetime.Inthelastyear,mylifeisbusy.ButIalsohavealotfreetime.Now,Iamnotonlybusybutalsotired,sonowIdonthavefreetimeanymore.Ionlyhavealittletimeplaysports.

Then,allofoursubjectaredifficult.Ifeelstudyhardandmygradeisverybad.

IhopeIcandealwiththatchanges.

修改建议：

Beginninng:Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Thisyear,Ihavesomechanges,becausenextyearIwillhavetofaceabigtestthatmaychangemylife.Astimegoesby,IhavechangedalotandIamhappytotellyouthechangesIhave.

Body:

Asforstudy,Iusedtostudybymyself.ButnowIoftenstudybyworkingwithfriendsandtheyoftenhelpmelearnEnglish.IthinkitcanhelpmestudyEnglishbetter.

ByCaiCuiInthepast,Iwasashygirlwhodidntliketalkingwiththeotherpeople.Butnow,Iammoreoutgoingandfriendly.

ByJingxueLiAsforthepersonality,becauseofthetimidityofthestrangeenvironment,Iusedtobeveryquietintheschool.ButnowIhavesomanyfriendsthatIamnolongershy.Myoutgoingpersonalitymakesmemoreandmorepopular.

ByHaoyuGuoFirstofall,inthepastIusuallywatchedTVintheevening.ButnowIaminterestedinplayingtennis.Iplaywithmyfriendseveryevening.Doingsportsasmuchaspossibleisnotonlygoodformyhealthbutalsocanhelpmerelax.

ByRuiChong

Asformyhobby,Iusedtobeinterestedinplayinggames.Butnow,Ipreferstudyinginmyfreetimeinsteadofplayinggames.IjustfindreadingbooksthathavegreatwordscangivemeenergywhenIamtired.SoIalwaysdosomereadingnow,whichnotonlyhelpsmegetknowledgebutalsomakemyparentshappy.

ByZihaoZhao

Inthepast,IonlyplayedsportsthatIlikedandIwouldratherwatchthematchesathomethanplaysportsoutside.Butnow,ImakemyowndecisionstospendmoretimeplayingsportstoimprovemyskillsbecauseIrealizedtheimportanceofsports.AndIbecomemoreoutgoingbecauseofit.Inmyopinion,sportsbecomeanimportantpartofmylife.

ByJianingCui

Ending:WhatgreatchangesIhave!Tobehonest,thisyearisverybusyforme,butIknowIcanhaveacolorfulfuture.Theharderwework,wemoreprogresswewillmake.Hopeourdreamcancometrue.

Opinions

Inmyopinion,JuniorThreeisthemostimportantyear.Itisworthstudyinghardtostudyinagoodhighschool.IhopeIcanhaveabeautifulfuturebystudyinghardthisyear.

ByRuishengLi

AlthoughIreallymisstheolddays,Ihavetostudyharderandharder.Thisisoneofthemostimportantchallengesinmylife.IbelievethatIwillsucceed.

ByEnkangZhang

WhatbigchangesIhad.Eventhoughtherearealotoftroublesinthisyear,Istillregardthemaschallenges.Ihopemydreamcancometrueinthefuture.

ByJinjinHanThesearethechangesIhaveasIbecameastudentinGrade9.Iamtryingtodomorethingsinalimitedtime.AndIamhappytoseethatIamgrowing.IthinkIdbettersaythankstoallthechangesIhave.

ByYuzhenZhang

Theseyears,Ihavechangedmydailylife,study,hobbiesandmypersonalitieswiththetimegoesby,butIthinkIamwalkingonawaythatleadsmetosuccessfulallthetime.WhatgreatchangesIhave!

ByJianingCui

Thisyearisnotonlyabusyyearforustofightforagreathighschoolwelike,butalsoanimportantwayleadingtomaturity.Iwilltrymybesttostudyhardtoachievemydream.Iamreallylookingforwardtobecominganoutstandingpersoninthefuture.

ByHaoyuGuo

AlthoughlifeinGrade9isalittlebithardforeveryone,Ibelievethethingswelearnedwillhelpusgrowanditwillbeagreatmemoryinourwholelife.

Inthisyear,wearegoingtobebusier,butwewilllearnhowtomakefulluseofourtime.Wearegoingtohavesomeproblems,butwewilllearnhowtodealwiththemwiththehelpofourteachers.ThelifeinGradeThreeisachallengeaswellasanexperience.Soweshouldtryourbesttocherishitandenjoyit.

病句修改Iusedtobeafraidofspeakinfrontofmanypeople.ThelifeinJuniorThreeisreallytired.Iusedtoafraidofthillers.NowIdontafraidofsnakesanymore.Istudymorehard-working.Inthepastfewyears,Iusedtobeshy.Nowwebecomemoreandmorebusy.Idonthavetimeplayingcomputergames.Thesechangecanhelpmecometruemydream.Inthepast,Iusedtoquietandshy.

SampleWriting1Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Inthepast,Iusedtobeshy.Butnow,Iammoreoutgoing.IthinkIamhappyintheclass.Inthepast,Iusedtostayathome.Butnow,Ialwaysplaysportswithmymom.AndnowIlikeplayingsports.Ilikemychanges.Theymakemehealthierandenjoymylifemore.IhopeIcanbebetterinthefuture.

ByReZhaoSampleWriting2IhavechangedalotsincethebeginningofGradeNine,bothinmydailylifeandinmypersonality.Asformydailylife,Iammuchbusierthanbefore.Iusedtohavelotsoffreetime,soIspentmuchtimeplayingcomputergamesorchattingwithmyfriendsafterschool.However,nowIhavetogorighthomeanddomyhomework.Iamnotallowedtoplaygamesanymore.Asformypersonality,Iammoreconfidentandmoreoutgoingthanbefore.IusedtobeafraidofspeakinginfrontoftheclassbecauseIthoughtmyclassmatesmightlaughatme.NowIhavemadegreatprogress.NotonlydoIanswerquestionsactivelyinclass,butalsoItakepartinmanyactivities.LifeinGradeNineisstressful,butIenjoyitbecauseIhavegainedalotofexperience.Ihavelearnthowtoregardproblemsaschallengesandfacethembravely,whichwillpreparemeforthefuture.

SampleWriting3Timegoesby;IamstudyinginGrade3now.AndIhavemanychanges.

Firstofall,Iusedtobealittleshyinthepast.Andnow,Iammoreoutgoingthanbefore.SoImakemoreandmorefriends.Wecangetonwellwitheachotherandshareexperiencetohelpothers.Itisveryusefulformetohavethischange.Besides,Iamnotwildanymore.Ibecomecalminstead.Ithinkbeingcalmissuchanexcitingchangethatithelpsmewithnotonlystudybutalsolife.

Second,mylifeisverybusynow.IhavetostudyashardasIcan.Luckily,IfindsomethingusefultohelpmesuchasstudyingbylisteningtotapesandbywatchingEnglishmovies.Icanrelaxmyselfatthesametime.Inmyfreetime,Ialwaysreadsomehelpfulbooks.Althoughmylifeissobusy,Idontminditbecausebeingbusyisanotherwaytomakelifecolorful.

Inshort,changesaredifferent.Buttheyareallinadiarythatrecordsourgrowth.Weneedtoenjoythem,dontwe?

ByJiaLu

SampleWriting4

EveryonehaschangedalotsinceJunior3.SodoI.IfindIchangedinbothlifeandpersonality.

First,asformylife,thebiggestchangeisthatIbecomealotbusierthanbefore.Inthepast,IwastoolazytogetupearlytostudybutnowImakegooduseofmorningtimesothatIcandowellinmyexams.Andinthepast,IenjoyedplayingsportstorelaxmyselfbutnowIruntoexerciseinstead.IdontthinkbusylifeisbadformebecausenowIhaveastagetorealizemydreambymyself.

Second,mypersonalityhaschangedtoo.Tobehonest,IusedtobelazyandchildishbutnowIbecomemoreandmorematureandself-disciplined.Andinordertogotoagoodhighschool,Iamalsodedicated.IthinkallmypersonalitiesnowmarkthatIhavegrownup.

Aboveall,althoughIamabusyJunior3student,IstillfeelproudthatIhaveanopportunitytomakemydreamcometrueandIthinkallmychangesaremeaningful.Itsworthstudyinghardthisyear.WhatgreatchangesIhave.

ByLucyWang

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