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Shoppinginstoresvs.shoppingonlineNowadays,withthehighdevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingonlineisbecomingmoreandmorepopular,especiallyamongyoungpeople.AsfarasIcansee,therearesomeadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.Ontheonehand,ithassomegreatadvantages.Firstly,itismoreconvenientforthereasonthatyoucanbuyanythingyouwantwithinsomeclicksinsteadofsteppingintostores,anditreallysavestoomuchtime.Secondly,onlineshoppingisonlydeterminedbyyourmood,thereisnoneedtothinkabouttheweather,openingandclosingtimeorevenplaces.Thirdly,sometimesonlineshoppingisreallycheapandsavesmoney.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppinghassomedisadvantages.Firstofall,youcan'ttouchthethingsoyoudon'tknowhowitfeels,whichcanbeavoidedinstores.Then,youcan'ttryitonifyoushoponline,butyoucanseetheeffectofclothingwornonyourbodyinstores.Aboveall,eithershoppinginstoresorshoppingonlinehasadvantagesanddisadvantages,soyoucanchooseawayaccordingtodifferentneeds.However,inmyopinion,onlineshoppingwillbecomeatrendinthenearfuture.

[学习提示]易混词汇:among,between,amid,amongst均含“在……之间，在……之中”之among:指三者或三者以上的同类事物之间。between:多指两者之间，但现代英语中也可指三者或三者以上，表示彼此间清楚的独立的个体amid:正式用词，侧重指在某个地方的中间或被某个东西包围着或在非同类人中间。amongst报错

[批改提示]people表示“人，民族”。注意与person的区别。详情点击报错AsfarasIcansee,therearesomeadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.

[学习提示]易混词汇:advantage,benefit,interest,favour,profit,gain均有“利益，好”advantage:指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。benefit:普通用词，指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。interest作“利益”解时，多用复数形式，既可指集团、群体的利益，又可指个人的利益。favour:指在竞争中获得的advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。profit:着重收益，尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。gain指获得的物质利益，也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。报错Ontheonehand,ithassomegreatadvantages.

[搭配统计]动名搭配have...advantage在教材中出现过8778次SeeAlso:takeadvantage22513,havereward253,acceptadvantage4报错

[学习提示]易混词汇:big,large,great,grand均含“大的”之意。:”large:普通用词，含义广，指体积、面积、容量、数量以及程度等方面的大，具体或抽象意义均great“大”情色彩。grand:侧重指盛大、绝大，有气派。报错Firstly,itismoreconvenientforthereasonthatyoucanbuyanythingyouwantwithinsomeclicksinsteadofsteppingintostores,anditreallysavestoomuchtime. [搭配统计]动名搭配save...time在教材中出现过841次SeeAlso:keeptime221,sparetime79,delivertime57,relievetime16,preservetime12,redeemtime5,salvagetime3报错

[学习提示]易混词汇:buy,purchase均含“购买”之意。buy:普通日常用词，既可指日常随意购物也可指大的购买。purchase正式用词，指大宗购货或购买重要东西。无感情色彩，强调物品的购得。报错 [批改提示]save近义表达有rescue/release/liberate/salvage报错

[批改提示]reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击报错

[推荐词汇]toomuch在写作中使用的太多，在某些语境下可考虑换为excessive。Excessivedrinkinginducesalcoholism.过度会引起酒精中毒。报错Secondly,onlineshoppingisonlydeterminedbyyourmood,thereisnoneedtothinkabouttheweather,openingandclosingtimeorevenplaces.

[学习提示]易混词汇:decide,determine,resolve,settle都含“决定”之意。decide侧重指经过思考、比较、讨论或询问之后做出的决定。determine:指经过深思熟虑，决心去做某事并坚持施行。resolve语气较强，强调以坚定不移的信念去做或不做某事，暗含有远大抱负和坚强决心。settle:指排除犹豫、怀疑和争论之后作出明确的最终结论。报错Thirdly,sometimesonlineshoppingisreallycheapandsavesmoney.

[搭配统计]动名搭配save...money在教材中出现过7374次SeeAlso:keepmoney1244,delivermoney147,preservemoney29,redeemmoney22,sparemoney14,salvagemoney8,save_upmoney6报错

[学习提示]易混词汇:inexpensive,cheap均含“便宜的，价廉的”之意。inexpensive:指商品价格公道，数量和价格相当。cheap:普通用词，既可指物美价廉，又可指价格低但质量却不怎么样。报错Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppinghassomedisadvantages.

[搭配统计]动名搭配have...disadvantage在教材中出现过280次SeeAlso:takedisadvantage9报错Firstofall,youcan'ttouchthethingsoyoudon'tknowhowitfeels,whichcanbeavoidedines.

[搭配统计]动名搭配touch...thing在教材中出现过104次SeeAlso:affectthing88,impactthing12报错

[学习提示]易混词汇:escape,avoid都有“躲避危险”之意。escape:多指避开实际的威胁，暗示威胁或危险正在迫近。avoid侧重有意识地躲避开要冒险或有危险的事物或情况。报错 [批改提示]know近义表达有cognize/recognize/realize/foreknow报错Then,youcan'ttryitonifyoushoponline,butyoucanseetheeffectofclothingwornonyourbodyinstores.

[搭配统计]动名搭配see...effect在教材中出现过924次SeeAlso:seeresult1762,seeissue462,seeevent341,seeconsequence144,determineeffect140,seeoutcome129,seeforce123,watcheffect26,seeessence23,seeburden19报错

[学习提示]易混词汇:clothes,clothing,coat,dress,garment,robe,gown,uniform,costume,suit均有“衣服，服装”之意。clothes:普通用词，多指包括上衣、内衣或裤子等具体的一件件衣服。clothing:常用词，集合名词，是衣服的总称。coatdress:多指正式场合或为某些特定用途而穿的服装，也指童装或女性穿的连衣裙。garment:语气庄重，正式用词，复数形式可与clothes换用，指身上全部穿着。单数形式指单，尤指长袍、外套等外面的衣服。robe:指长袍，也指浴衣、晨衣。gown指女人穿的长服，尤指教士、法官、教授等的礼服或妇女的睡衣等，也指长袍。uniform指某团体或组织统一做的制服，如军服、校服等。costume指流行某一地区或某一时代的服装，也指演员的戏装。suit:指一套服装，一般有几件配成一套的套装。报错

[批改提示]clothing表示“衣服的总称”。注意与clothes的区别。详情点击报错Aboveall,eithershoppinginstoresorshoppingonlinehasadvantagesanddisadvantages,soyoucanchooseawayaccordingtodifferentneeds.

[学习提示]易混词汇:agree,accord,coincide,conform,correspond均含“符合，一致”agree侧重指经过比较后的所有主要部分均和谐一致，无冲突和矛盾。accord:着重指性格、精神、语气或质量等方面的完全一致。coincide:多用于指观点、判断、愿望、利益或兴趣的一致或相符。偶尔用于人，强调意见或观全相同。conform:强调在形状、性格以及主要特点等方面的相似或一致。correspond指在进行比较时，两个事物在某一个重要方面或细节上互相匹配、一致。报错

[批改提示]注意accordto和accordas的区别。报错

[批改提示]accordingto在做“根据”讲时，近义表达有inaccordancewith。报错

[批改提示]choose不强调经过周密考虑之后的选择。注意与select区别。报错However,inmyopinion,onlineshoppingwillbecomeatrendinthenearfuture.

[学习提示]易混词汇:advice,opinion,progposal,suggestion,recommendation,view均含意见