上海市各校2020-2021学年上学期高一英语期中试题精选汇编：书面表达专题

上海市2020-2021学年上学期高一英语期中试题精选汇编书面表达专题上海师范大学附属中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题VI.GuidedWriting（25%）69.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin100-120-wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李华，去年暑假你和你的家人去了朋友Jim所在的城市罗马旅游，回来后你想对他表达自己的感谢之情。请根据以下要点给Jim写一封信，词数不少于120——150。1.罗马的风景和美食令人印象深刻，你玩的很开心。2.谈谈你对旅游的看法并推荐一个地方邀请Jim一家来旅游。【答案】DearJim,Howareyoudoingthesedays?ThankyouforyourhelpandkindnesswhileweweretravelinginRome.Itwasverykindofyoutotreatustogoodmeals，andshowusaround.Romeisreallyaverygoodplacetovisit.Weweregreatlyimpressedbyitsbeautifulsceneryanddeliciousfood.IhadagreattimethereandlearnedalotaboutRome.AndIwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitBeijing.I'llshowyouaroundtheplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWallandthePalaceMuseum.Thanksagainforallyourefforts!Idohopeyou'llcometoChinaandletmeshowyouaroundBeijing.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给Jim写一封信，表达自己对他的感谢之情。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.罗马的风景和美食令人印象深刻，你玩的很开心。2.谈谈你对旅游的看法并推荐一个地方邀请Jim一家来旅游。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）showsb.around;beimpressedby；haveagreattime；placesofinterest；lookforwardto第三步：连词成句1.Howareyoudoingthesedays?2.ThankyouforyourhelpandkindnesswhileweweretravelinginRome.3.Itwasverykindofyoutotreatustogoodmeals，andshowusaround.4.Romeisreallyaverygoodplacetovisit.Weweregreatlyimpressedbyitsbeautifulsceneryanddeliciousfood.5.IhadagreattimethereandlearnedalotaboutRome.6.AndIwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitBeijing.7.I'llshowyouaroundtheplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWallandthePalaceMuseum.8.Thanksagainforallyourefforts!9.Idohopeyou'llcometoChinaandletmeshowyouaroundBeijing.10.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including（供参考）3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…（供参考）4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1]ThankyouforyourhelpandkindnesswhileweweretravelinginRome.(while引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Itwasverykindofyoutotreatustogoodmeals，andshowusaround.（it作形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式）上海市南洋模范中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题V.GuidedWriting57.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.学校公众号正在征集同学们的英文作文，请你写一篇文章，描述一次难忘的旅行经历，积极投稿，字数100-120左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ihaveexperiencedmanyfirsts,butthemostunforgettableoneisthatIsawtheTianchiofChangbaiMountainforthefirsttime.LastJuly,myfamilyandItookatourtoChangbaiMountain.Weclimbedupfromthewestslope,wherethescenerybasicallyremainsthemostprimitivestate.Afterclimbing1440steps,wefinallyreachedthetopofthemountain.Althoughwewereverytired,thetemperatureonthetopofthemountainwasverysuitable,makingusfeelextremelycomfortable.What'smore,wewereluckyenoughtoseetheTianchi,whichislikeahugemirrorinlaidamongthepeaks.It'ssaidthat70%ofthepeoplewhocametoChangbaiMountainforthefirsttimecan'tseetheTianchibecausetheweatheronthetopofthemountainisunpredictable,andthefirsttimeIcametoChangbaiMountain,Isawtianchi,whichisreallyamazing.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求写一篇文章，描述一次难忘的旅行经历。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：记叙文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时为主。结构：第一段引入话题，第二段介绍难忘的经历。要求：要点明确，重点突出。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）takeatourto；onthetopof；forthefirsttime；climbup第三步：连词成句1.Ihaveexperiencedmanyfirsts,butthemostunforgettableoneisthatIsawtheTianchiofChangbaiMountainforthefirsttime.2.LastJuly,myfamilyandItookatourtoChangbaiMountain.3.Weclimbedupfromthewestslope,wherethescenerybasicallyremainsthemostprimitivestate.4.Afterclimbing1440steps,wefinallyreachedthetopofthemountain.5.Althoughwewereverytired,thetemperatureonthetopofthemountainwasverysuitable,makingusfeelextremelycomfortable.6.What'smore,wewereluckyenoughtoseetheTianchi,whichislikeahugemirrorinlaidamongthepeaks.7.It'ssaidthat70%ofthepeoplewhocametoChangbaiMountainforthefirsttimecan'tseetheTianchibecausetheweatheronthetopofthemountainisunpredictable,andthefirsttimeIcametoChangbaiMountain,Isawtianchi,whichisreallyamazing.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.本文使用了表并列补充关系的连词：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition2.连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Weclimbedupfromthewestslope,wherethescenerybasicallyremainsthemostprimitivestate.(where引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Althoughwewereverytired,thetemperatureonthetopofthemountainwasverysuitable,makingusfeelextremelycomfortable.(although引导让步状语从句，现在分词making作状语)[高分句型3]What’smore,wewereluckyenoughtoseetheTianchi,whichislikeahugemirrorinlaidamongthepeaks.(which引导非限制性定语从句)上海市松江二中2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题III.GuidedWriting75.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120－150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.1.Writesomethinginsomewayrelatedtotravel.【答案】Lastsummervacation,myfamilyandIwenttoQingdaobytrain.Theweathertherewasalwaysniceandtheairwasfresh,whichmadeussocomfortable.Wewenttotheseaside.Theseawasasblueasthesky,andbathinginthesunshineonthebeachwasreallyanenjoyablething.First,Ipickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesister.Second,weboughtmanyinterestingsouvenirsthatIwasplanningtosendtomyfriends.Then,weatemanydeliciousseafoodthere,suchasfish,prawnandsoon.Atlast,westayedinacleanandtidyhotelwhosepricewasnotsoexpensive.IlikeQingdaoverymuch.IfIgetasecondchance,Ihopetogothereagain.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就与旅游有关的话题写一篇120－150字左右的文章。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：记叙文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量过去进行时和一般现在时。结构：总分总要求：1.去哪儿旅行；2.旅游时做了哪些事第二步:列提纲（重点词组）makesb.adj.;as…as…;onthebeach;pickupsth.;plantodosth.第三步：连词成句1.Theweathertherewasalwaysniceandtheairwasfresh,whichmadeussocomfortable.2.Theseawasasblueasthesky,andbathinginthesunshineonthebeachwasreallyanenjoyablething.3.First,Ipickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesister.4.Second,weboughtmanyinterestingsouvenirsthatIwasplanningtosendtomyfriends.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First,Second…,Then,Atlast2.举例说明：suchas连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Theweathertherewasalwaysniceandtheairwasfresh,whichmadeussocomfortable.用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2]Second,weboughtmanyinterestingsouvenirsthatIwasplanningtosendtomyfriends.用了that引导的限制性定语从句。上海市浦东新区2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中联考试题V.GuidedWriting(15%)50.Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin100—120wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你校英文网站为倡导低碳生活（low-carbonlifestyle）而开设了论坛。同学们纷纷发帖，交流各自的低碳生活方式。你对此话题也深有感触，准备参与讨论。请在该论坛上发表一个帖子，包括以下内容：（1）介绍你所倡导的低碳生活方式（2）说明如此做的原因或优点。【答案】Ibelieveanylow-carbonactcanslowthepaceofglobalwarming.Mywaytoreducegreenhousegasemissionsissimplebuteffective—makingsomechangestomyrefrigerator.First,Iputalistonthefridgedoor.Itshowswhatkindoffoodisinsidewiththeactualnumberinstore.Withthatclearinformationinmind,thefrequencyofdoor-openingcanbereduced,andthuselectricityconsumptionisreduced.Second,Itidyupmyfridgeonceamonth.Discardingexpiredproductsisbothgoodforyourhealthandforyourfridge.Meanwhile,defrostingcanalsogreatlyreducetheenergywasted.Andonemorething,thefridgeisnotastoreroom.Readtheinstructionsonthewrappingsandyoumayfindyouhaveputtoomanyunnecessarythingsintotheice-box.Somefoodcanbeeasilyboughtfromnearbyconveniencestoresandtheerrandscanhelpyoustayhealthy.Theecologicalenvironmentistohumanbeingswhatwateristofish.Onesmalleffortmaynotstopsealevelsfromrising,butwithourjointeffort,wecanmakethedifference.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一个帖子，介绍自己所倡导的低碳生活方式以及原因或优点。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分总法   总分总法指先总说后分说，再总说，并以这种方式安排所写内容要求：1.介绍所倡导的低碳生活方式2.说明如此做的原因或优点3呼吁共同努力第二步:列提纲（重点词组）low-carbon;thepaceof;globalwarming;greenhousegasemissions;makingsomechanges;putaliston;kindof;inmind;electricityconsumption;tidyup;isgoodfor;onemorething;tayhealthy;…isto…what…isto;withourjointeffort第三步：连词成句1.Ibelieveanylow-carbonactcanslowthepaceofglobalwarming.2Mywaytoreducegreenhousegasemissionsissimplebuteffective—makingsomechangestomyrefrigerator.3.Iputalistonthefridgedoor.Itshowswhatkindoffoodisinsidewiththeactualnumberinstore.4.Withthatclearinformationinmind,thefrequencyofdoor-openingcanbereduced,andthuselectricityconsumptionisreduced.5.Itidyupmyfridgeonceamonth.6.Discardingexpiredproductsisbothgoodforyourhealthandforyourfridge.7.Andonemorething,thefridgeisnotastoreroom.8.Somefoodcanbeeasilyboughtfromnearbyconveniencestoresandtheerrandscanhelpyoustayhealthy.9.Theecologicalenvironmentistohumanbeingswhatwateristofish.10.Onesmalleffortmaynotstopsealevelsfromrising,butwithourjointeffort,wecanmakethedifference.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First,Second2.表并列补充关系：and,Meanwhile,onemorething3.表转折对比关系：but4.表因果关系：thus连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】【高分句型1】Ibelieveanylow-carbonactcanslowthepaceofglobalwarming.（省略连接词that的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Readtheinstructionsonthewrappingsandyoumayfindyouhaveputtoomanyunnecessarythingsintotheice-box.（省略连接词that的宾语从句）【高分句型3】Theecologicalenvironmentistohumanbeingswhatwateristofish.（…isto…what…isto句型，表示……之于……相当……之于……）上海市金山中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第三节写作（满分15分）假定你是李华，你校将于1月5号至7号举办体育节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:1.活动目的:丰富校园生活，增强学生体质、培养团队精神…2.活动内容:多种形式的体育活动、班级体育文化展示,比如制作海报等…3.欢迎他参加。注意:要求：1.词数70左右。2.作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearAllen,How’severythinggoing?Knowingthatyouareinterestedinsports,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheSportsFestival,whichwillbeheld

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