高考英语写作点拨苏炳添中国航天人等热点话题作文六篇

高考英语写作点拨苏炳添中国航天人等热点话题作文六篇1.神州十二（2021·辽宁丹东·高一期末）前不久，你校学生一同观看了我国神州十二号飞船发射直播，大家很受鼓舞。为使学生了解更多的航天知识，你校决定举行一次关于航天科学（SpaceScience）的讲座，假设你是国际学校的学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则书面通知，内容包括：1.讲座的时间、地点；2.讲座的目的及内容；3.希望同学们踊跃参加。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Notice___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents’Union【参考范文】NoticeInordertoletstudentslearnmoreaboutSpaceScience,alectureaboutitwillbeheldintheschoolhallat2o’clockthisFridayafternoonandwilllasttwohours.Thelecturemainlyinvolves2parts,thefirstofwhichisabriefintroductionofourrecentlaunch.Thesecondpartwillbegivenbythesameexpertsandwillbeaboutthescientificbenefitsofspaceflight.Itwillbegiveninsuchawaythatyouwilleasilyunderstandit.Youwilllearnalotandhaveabetterunderstandingofspace.Everyonewhoisinterestedinthelectureiswelcome.TheStudents’Union【详解】1.词汇积累演讲：speech=lecture了解：learnabout=knowabout最近的：recent=latest感兴趣：beinterestedin=takeaninterestin2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Itwillbegiveninsuchawaythatyouwilleasilyunderstandit.Youwilllearnalotfromthelectureandhaveabetterunderstandingofspace.拓展句：Sinceitwillbegiveninsuchawaythatyouwilleasilyunderstandit,youwilllearnalotfromthelectureandhaveabetterunderstandingofspace.【点睛】高分句型1：InordertoletstudentslearnmoreaboutSpaceScience,alectureaboutitwillbeheldintheschoolhallat2o’clockthisFridayafternoonandwilllasttwohours.(运用了不定式作目的状语)高分句型2：Thelecturemainlyinvolves2parts,thefirstofwhichisabriefintroductionofourrecentlaunch.(运用了“介词+关系代词”非限制性定语从句)2.苏炳添，最钦佩的运动员（2021·四川省成都市新都一中·高二期末）假定你是某中学学生李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国运动员苏炳添在东京奥运会上的表现印象深刻，特来信与你分享对他的钦佩之情，并询问谁是你最钦佩的运动员。请你根据以下要点给Tom写封回信：1.赞同Tom的看法；2.介绍自己钦佩的运动员；3.钦佩的理由。参考词汇：东京奥运会TokyoOlympics注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearTom,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearTom,Howareyou?FromyourletterIgettoknowSuBingtiancharmsyou.Yes,Icouldn’tagreemorewithyouthatheisanexcellentathleteworthadmiring.Andindeed,hisperformanceinTokyoOlympicsisextraordinary.Asamatteroffact,besidesSuBingtian,therearemanyotheroutstandingathletesinChinatoo,amongwhomIadmireQuanHongchanmost.Shewasbornintoapoorfamily.However,withhertalentand,moreimportantly,herpersistentefforts,shechangesherlife.Herstoryreallyinspiresmetopursuemyowndreambravely.SuBingtianandQuanHongchansetagoodexampleforus.Webothshouldholdontoourdream,right?Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【详解】1.词汇积累事实上：asamatteroffact=infact优秀的：outstanding=excellent欣赏：admire=appreciate鼓励：inspire=encourage2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Andindeed,hisperformanceinTokyoOlympicsisextraordinary.拓展句：Andindeed,hisperformanceinTokyoOlympicsisextraordinary,whichisimpressive.【点睛】高分句型1：Asamatteroffact,besidesSuBingtian,therearemanyotheroutstandingathletesinChinatoo,amongwhomIadmireQuanHongchanmost.(运用了“介词+whom”引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2：Yes,Icouldn’tagreemorewithyouthatheisanexcellentathleteworthadmiring.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)3.苏炳添，自豪（2021·甘肃兰州市第二十七中学·高三阶段练习）假如你是高三学生李华。你的英国网友Jack看到中国运动员苏炳添在东京奥运会百米赛跑半决赛（semi-final）中刷新了亚洲记录，非常敬佩，想了解苏炳添的有关情况。请根据以下提示用英语给他回一封电子邮件。主要内容：1.为苏炳添的成绩感到自豪；2.简单介绍有关情况，肯定他的付出和努力；3.谈谈自己的感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearJack,KnowingthatyouadmireSuBingtianverymuchbecausehebroketheAsianrecordinthesemi-finalofthe100mraceintheTokyoOlympicGames,I’mproudofhisachievementaswell.SuBingtian,32-year-old,isaChineserunner.HewasborninZhongshanCity,GuangdongProvinceonAugust20th,1989.HetookpartintheregularmatchinNovember,2004forthefirsttime.Afterthat,hewonmanyfirstprizesinallkindsofmatches.Becauseofhisdedicationandefforts,in2021,SuBingtiandidwhatnoChineserunnerhaddonebefore,ashesprintedtosecureaplaceinthe100mmen’sfinalattheOlympicGamesinTokyo.Ibelievehedeservesthismedal,andhereallyisaflyingmanofChina,andofAsia.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.词汇积累对……自豪：beproudof=takepridein参加：takepartin=participatein比赛：match=competition因为：becauseof=dueto/owingto2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：SuBingtian,32-year-oldman,isaChineserunner.HewasborninZhongshanCity,GuangdongProvinceonAugust20th,1989.拓展句：SuBingtian,32-year-old,isaChineserunner,whowasborninZhongshanCity,GuangdongProvinceonAugust20th,1989.【点睛】高分句型1：KnowingthatyouadmireSuBingtianverymuchbecausehebroketheAsianrecordinthesemi-finalofthe100mraceintheTokyoOlympicGames,I’mproudofhisachievementaswell.(运用了现在分词作状语、that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)高分句型2：Becauseofhisdedicationandefforts,in2021,SuBingtiandidwhatnoChineserunnerhaddonebefore,ashesprintedtosecureaplaceinthe100mmen’sfinalattheOlympicGamesinTokyo.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)4.宇航人（2022·江西沂水县第一中学·高三阶段练习）三位中国宇航员被成功送入太空，请你就此事写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.讲述感受；2.表达进取决心；3.发出倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：航天器spacecraft___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dearclassmates,WhenwatchingthehistoricmomentwhenthethreeChineseastronautsweresentupintospace,IfeltsoexcitedthatIcouldn’tholdbackmytears.ThisgreatachievementhasshowednotonlyouradvancedtechnologybutalsothegreatpowerofChina.Atthesametime,itmademerealizeourresponsibility.AndIhavemadeupmymindtogainagoodcommandofknowledge.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakegreatcontributionstoourcountry!Dearclassmates,let’sstudyharderforamorepowerfulChina!Thanksforyourlistening.【详解】1.词汇积累激动的：excited=thrilled抑制：holdback=control决定：makeupone’smind=decide强大的：powerful=strong2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Atthesametime,itmademerealizeourresponsibility.AndIhavemadeupmymindtogainagoodcommandofknowledge.拓展句：Atthesametime,notonlydiditmakemerealizeourresponsibility,butalsoIhavemadeupmymindtogainagoodcommandofknowledge.【点睛】高分句型1：WhenwatchingthehistoricmomentwhenthethreeChineseastronautsweresentupintospace,IfeltsoexcitedthatIcouldn’tholdbackmytears.(运用了when引导时间状语从句和so...that...句型)高分句型2：Onlyinthiswaycanwemakegreatcontributionstoourcountry!(运用了部分倒装)5.王亚平（2021·江苏徐州·高三期中）神州十三号顺利升空，王亚平成为我国第一个太空行走的女性航天员；她十几年如一日刻苦训练，从不言弃，终于实现了自己的航天梦。你校正组织向她学习的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍她的优秀品质，并谈谈作为青年人如何向她学习。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MySpaceHero___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】WangYaping,thefirstfemaleastronautwhoperformedspacewalkbyShenzhouXIII,deservesourhighestrespectforherpersistenceinthedecade-longarduoustraining.Neverdidshesayneverandultimatelyshelivedherspacedream.HowcanweyoungpeoplelearnfromWang,especiallyherperseverance,resilienceanddiligence?Firstly,whenfailinginexams,weneedtoreflectonourweakareasanddomoreexerciseratherthandrownourselvesinsorrowordisappointment.Regardingdifficultieswemeetinourdailylife,bouncingbackfromlowspiritsandquicklyregainingourcomposureasWangYapingdiddefinitelycount.【详解】1.词汇积累终于：ultimately=finally考虑：reflecton=thinkover艰苦的：arduous=hard恢复：bounceback=recover2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：HowcanweyoungpeoplelearnfromWang,especiallyherperseverance,resilienceanddiligence?拓展句：HowcanweyoungpeoplelearnfromWang,whenitcomestoherperseverance,resilienceanddiligence?【点睛】高分句型1：WangYaping,thefirstfemaleastronautwhoperformedspacewalkbyShenzhouXIII,deservesourhighestrespectforherpersistenceinthedecade-longarduoustraining.(运用了who引导的定语从句)高分句型2：Neverdidshesayneverandultimatelyshelivedherspacedream.(运用了倒装句式)6.神州十二航天人（2022·江苏姜堰中学·高二期末）假定你是李华，学校英文报向你约稿，写一篇关于我国2021年6月17日神州十二号航天员（聂海胜、刘伯明和汤洪波）进入太空并在太空执行为期3个月的飞行任务的英文报道。内容包括：1.新闻概要；2.太空生活和工作；3.意义。注意：1.词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加情节使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Shenzhou-12sentfirstcrewtonewspacestationChinalaunchedthreeastronautsintoorbitbyShenzhou-12tobegintheworkinthecountry’snewspacestation,whi