part+v+writing+问题解决型作文写法课件

11问题解决型（problemsolution）

一、英语作文语言的形成过程二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结三、习作实例讲解和句式总结22022/12/21问题解决型（problemsolution）一、英一、英语作文语言的形成过程SimpleChineseSimpleEnglishCompoundandcomplexEnglish32022/12/21一、英语作文语言的形成过程SimpleChineseSim［写作实例］如果我们每个人都减少一次性塑料袋的使用，这对环境保护非常重要。

Ifeachofuscanreducetheusageofdisposalplasticbags,itisveryimportanttoenvironmentalprotection.42022/12/21［写作实例］Ifeachofuscanredu第一步优化：句子结构优化（使用主语从句合成句子）

Itisveryimportanttoenvironmentalprotectionthateachofusreducetheusageofdisposalplasticbagsinourdailylife.52022/12/21第一步优化：句子结构优化（使用主语从句合成句子）52022/第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）

Itis

veryimportant

toenvironmentalprotectionthat

eachofusreducetheusageofdisposalplasticbagsinourdailylife.

significantessentialofvitalimportance

meanalot62022/12/21第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）Itis

Itmeansalottoenvironmentalprotectionthat

eachofus

reduce

theusageofdisposalplasticbagsinourdailylife.

minimize72022/12/21Itmeansalottoenvironm二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结

TheWritingMethodofthePassage1:AProblem–Response–EvaluationStructureThisisverycommonlyusedstructureinEnglish.Normally,somepartofasituationisintroducedbeforetheproblem.Then,solutionsaretakentosolvetheproblem.Afterwards,someevaluationmightoccurintheactionstaken.82022/12/21二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结TheWritiJimmy,wasbornwithbraindamageduetoalackofoxygenathisbirth.

MymothertaughtJimmypracticalthings.MyliferevolvedaroundJimmy’s.Myfatherheldthefamilytogetherwithhispatienceandunderstanding.IprotectedJimmywhenthekidspickedonhim.MyfatherandJimmywereinseparableanddideverythingtogether.ProblemResponseEvaluationWriting—StructureWritingSample1—Part1oftheText92022/12/21Jimmy,wasbornwithbraindamNHCEWritingPatternBack预习课文导入小结写作实践随笔[Example2fromtheText]Problem:Jimmywasawreckwhenmyfatherdiedofaheartattackin1991.Hewassimplyindisbelief.Henowquitspeakingalltogether.NomatterhowhardItried,Jimmycouldnotacceptthehardfact.(Para.4)MymotherdiedoflungcancersixmonthslaterandIalonewaslefttolookafterJimmy.(Para.5)102022/12/21NHCEWritingPatternBack预习课文问题解决型作文写作思路亦可称为：解决问题型作文。一般在首段现象描述，之后进行问题分析（原因或危害），最后提出建议措施,112022/12/21问题解决型作文写作思路亦可称为：解决问题型作文。112022问题解决型试题回顾08年12月英语四级作文真题

LimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBags

1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2.造成的问题3.限制使用的意义

122022/12/21问题解决型试题回顾122022/12/162010年6月Topic：DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling.1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

2.出现这种情况的原因

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为…132022/12/212010年6月Topic：DueAttentionSho现象描述段（正反）2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样2011-06：现在网上购物已成为一种时尚引出话题—具体描述—总结142022/12/21现象描述段（正反）2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样14202000年1月四级作文真题

HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation1、上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决2、哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）152022/12/212000年1月四级作文真题152022/12/16特点总结

1、目前存在某个问题

2、这种问题的危害或产生的原因

3、给出解决的方法

162022/12/21特点总结 1、目前存在某个问题162022/12/16三、习作实例讲解和句式总结Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic

GlobalShortageofFreshWater

ontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的3、我们应该怎么办172022/12/21三、习作实例讲解和句式总结Directions:For

STEPONE:

ContentAnalysis（内容扩展）1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的freshwaterVariouskindsoffreshwaterrainriverwelllake182022/12/21STEPONE:ContentAnalysis（内容2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的

Shortoffreshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondrought？？原因？192022/12/212、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的Shortofindustr3、我们应该怎么办

We/studentsscientistsgovernmentSavetechnologyinstitutelaws202022/12/213、我们应该怎么办We/studentsscientistSTEPTWO:

WritingProcessAnalysis（写作分析）GeneralRequirementforEveryParagraph:

TopicsentenceSupportsentence1Supportsentence2Supportsentence3212022/12/21STEPTWO:WritingProcessAnal1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的FreshwaterVariouskindsrainriverwelllakeTherearemanyindividualswhoholdtheopinionthattheworld’ssupplyoffreshwaterisneverusedup.topicsentenceAccordingtothem,therearesomanykindsofsourcesastherain,riveandlake,thatitisalwayssufficientforuse,whichcontributestoashockingwasteofwater.Supportsentence222022/12/211、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的FreshVariouskin2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的

ShortoffreshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondroughtAsamatteroffact,humanbeings

areconfrontedwith

thecrisisofinsufficientfreshwater,whichcan

beattributedto

thefollowingreasons.topicsentence232022/12/212、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的ShortofindustrShortoffreshwaterpopulationpollutionItisknownthattheworldpopulationisgrowingrapidlydaybyday.Soenoughfreshwaterisneededtofeedsuchabigpopulation.

support

sentence

1What’smore,withthedevelopmentofindustry,factoriesandvehiclesproducepoisonousgasesorwastes,whichconsequentlyresultsinthepollutionofwater.supportsentence2242022/12/21ShortofpopulationpollutionIt3、我们应该怎么办

We/studentsscientistsgovernmentsavetechnologyinstitutelawsAsfarasIamconcerned,

itisanurgenttaskforusstudentsto

doourparttosavewaterinourdailylife.

252022/12/213、我们应该怎么办We/studentsscientist3、我们应该怎么办scientiststechnologySecond,scientists

areexpectedto

workevenhardertopurifyseawaterandpollutedwater,andtrytofindsubstitutestoreducetheuseoffreshwater.262022/12/213、我们应该怎么办scientiststechnologyS3、我们应该怎么办governmentinstitutelawsThirdly,governmentsareexpectedtolaunchcampaignsagainstwaterpollution272022/12/213、我们应该怎么办governmentinstituteTh问题解决型写作句式总结

☆首句引出现象1.Nobody/Noonecouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatkids’lackofindependencehasbecomeagraveprobleminmanyfamilies.负面：agraveproblem练习：一次性塑料袋、水资源282022/12/21问题解决型写作句式总结

☆首句引出现象282022/12/1§2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用

Nobody/Noonecouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatwhitepollutionhasbecomeagraveprobleminthecontemporarysociety.current292022/12/21§2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用

Nobody

正面acommon/popular

phenomenon/practice30正面acommon/popula首句2.Inthecontemporarysociety,thereisnodenyingthefactthat+客观事实（提纲1）.练习：住房需求紧张问题312022/12/21首句2.Inthecontemporarysocie首句3.

Onmanycampuses/Inthecontemporarysociety/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,theshortageofhousingisoneofthemostseriousproblemswithwhichpeopleareconfronted.322022/12/21首句3.Onmanycampuses/Inthe首句4(正反均可)Nowadays/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,itcanbenoticedthatchildrendependmoreontheirparentsthaneverbefore.(比较级引出问题)332022/12/21首句4(正反均可)Nowadays/Intheprese练习：用比较级引出问题网上购物Nowadays/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,itcanbenoticedthatmorepeoplepurchaseitemsonlinethaneverbefore.342022/12/21练习：用比较级引出问题网上购物342022/12/16首句5(正反均可)：

Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentyears,ithasbecomeaprevalent/prevailingtendency/trend/practicefor__人_to_动作__.352022/12/21首句5(正反均可)：Inthepresent-day首句6:（正面）Inrecentdecades,____has/havegainedgreatpopularityamong_____.popularitypublicattention/publicity(负面)362022/12/21首句6:（正面）Inrecentdecades,__首句7Thepastyears/decadeshaveseen/witnessedthehuge/speedyadvancement/developmentof_____.372022/12/21首句7Thepastyears/decadeshav

现象描述写作范例1：UnhealthyLivingHabits1.现在很多大学生有不健康的生活习惯2.这些习惯的危害3.我的建议38现象描述写作范例1：Unhealthy

3939

4040你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面的方法写出多样的句型？

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:DatingIsPopularwithCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

大学生对校园恋爱并不陌生；对此方方面面态度不一；谈谈你的观点。

41你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面的方法写出多样的句型？DatingIsPopularwithCollegeStudents

Datingisaconceptnotfarawayfromcollegestudents.Oncampussomeloverswalkhandinhand,andsomekissorhuginpublic.Whenthemajorityofone’sclosefriendsareincommitted(有密切关系的)relationships,togetridofloneliness,somewilldatefellowclassmates,whileothersareinlong-distancerelationships.42DatingIsPopularwithCollegeDifferentpeopleshowdifferentattitudes.Youngloverssaytheyhaverightandfreedomtofallinlove.Someparentsthinkcollegestudentsmaturealitterfaster,butit’snotgoodtostartdatingtooearly,andtheyshouldtelldatingfrommarriage.Someteachersareworriedthatdatingmightbeagreatdistraction(分散)fromtheirschoolwork.Schoolauthorities(官方)neitherencouragenordiscourageit.43DifferentpeopleshowInmyopinion,strikingabalancebetweenlearninganddatingisscienceaswellasart.Studentsmaybenefitfromtheserelationships.Tobalanceworkandplay,theyencourageeachothertoworkhard.Theycanworkmoreefficiently(有效率地)thisway.Sotheygethighgradeswhilekeepingahappyrelationship.However,therearealsosomeconcerns:it’sabigdealforstudentstohaveaboyfriendoragirlfriend,andtheyshouldtaketheirrelationshipsseriously.Whentheyloveatfirstsight,theyshouldloveonsecondthought.44Inmyopinion,strikingI.[TOEFL作文题目1]Directions:Youwillhavethirtyminutestoplanandwriteanessayonthetopicgivenbelow.Usethefirstfewminutestoreadthetopiccarefullyandthinkaboutwhatkindofessayyouwillwrite.Youmayusethespaceimmediatelybelowtheessaytopictomakenotes.Writeyouressayonthelinedpagesthatfollow.Youwillhaveenoughspaceifyouwriteoneverylineandkeepyourhandwritingtoareasonablesize.Peopleshouldberealisticratherthanromanticinordertoliveabetterlife.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?Usespecificreasonstosupportyouranswer.45I.[TOEFL作文题目1]45[TOEFL作文题目2]Directions:Youwillhavethirtyminutestoplanandwriteanessayonthetopicgivenbelow.Usethefirstfewminutestoreadthetopiccarefullyandthinkaboutwhatkindofessayyouwillwrite.Youmayusethespaceimmediatelybelowtheessaytopictomakenotes.Writeyouressayonthelinedpagesthatfollow.Youwillhaveenoughspaceifyouwriteoneverylineandkeepyourhandwritingtoareasonablesize.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Boysandgirlsshouldattendseparateschools.46[TOEFL作文题目2]46ThankYouforYourAttention47ThankYouforYourAttention47

481问题解决型（problemsolution）

一、英语作文语言的形成过程二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结三、习作实例讲解和句式总结492022/12/21问题解决型（problemsolution）一、英一、英语作文语言的形成过程SimpleChineseSimpleEnglishCompoundandcomplexEnglish502022/12/21一、英语作文语言的形成过程SimpleChineseSim［写作实例］如果我们每个人都减少一次性塑料袋的使用，这对环境保护非常重要。

Ifeachofuscanreducetheusageofdisposalplasticbags,itisveryimportanttoenvironmentalprotection.512022/12/21［写作实例］Ifeachofuscanredu第一步优化：句子结构优化（使用主语从句合成句子）

Itisveryimportanttoenvironmentalprotectionthateachofusreducetheusageofdisposalplasticbagsinourdailylife.522022/12/21第一步优化：句子结构优化（使用主语从句合成句子）52022/第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）

Itis

veryimportant

toenvironmentalprotectionthat

eachofusreducetheusageofdisposalplasticbagsinourdailylife.

significantessentialofvitalimportance

meanalot532022/12/21第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）Itis

Itmeansalottoenvironmentalprotectionthat

eachofus

reduce

theusageofdisposalplasticbagsinourdailylife.

minimize542022/12/21Itmeansalottoenvironm二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结

TheWritingMethodofthePassage1:AProblem–Response–EvaluationStructureThisisverycommonlyusedstructureinEnglish.Normally,somepartofasituationisintroducedbeforetheproblem.Then,solutionsaretakentosolvetheproblem.Afterwards,someevaluationmightoccurintheactionstaken.552022/12/21二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结TheWritiJimmy,wasbornwithbraindamageduetoalackofoxygenathisbirth.

MymothertaughtJimmypracticalthings.MyliferevolvedaroundJimmy’s.Myfatherheldthefamilytogetherwithhispatienceandunderstanding.IprotectedJimmywhenthekidspickedonhim.MyfatherandJimmywereinseparableanddideverythingtogether.ProblemResponseEvaluationWriting—StructureWritingSample1—Part1oftheText562022/12/21Jimmy,wasbornwithbraindamNHCEWritingPatternBack预习课文导入小结写作实践随笔[Example2fromtheText]Problem:Jimmywasawreckwhenmyfatherdiedofaheartattackin1991.Hewassimplyindisbelief.Henowquitspeakingalltogether.NomatterhowhardItried,Jimmycouldnotacceptthehardfact.(Para.4)MymotherdiedoflungcancersixmonthslaterandIalonewaslefttolookafterJimmy.(Para.5)572022/12/21NHCEWritingPatternBack预习课文问题解决型作文写作思路亦可称为：解决问题型作文。一般在首段现象描述，之后进行问题分析（原因或危害），最后提出建议措施,582022/12/21问题解决型作文写作思路亦可称为：解决问题型作文。112022问题解决型试题回顾08年12月英语四级作文真题

LimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBags

1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2.造成的问题3.限制使用的意义

592022/12/21问题解决型试题回顾122022/12/162010年6月Topic：DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling.1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

2.出现这种情况的原因

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为…602022/12/212010年6月Topic：DueAttentionSho现象描述段（正反）2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样2011-06：现在网上购物已成为一种时尚引出话题—具体描述—总结612022/12/21现象描述段（正反）2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样14202000年1月四级作文真题

HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation1、上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决2、哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）622022/12/212000年1月四级作文真题152022/12/16特点总结

1、目前存在某个问题

2、这种问题的危害或产生的原因

3、给出解决的方法

632022/12/21特点总结 1、目前存在某个问题162022/12/16三、习作实例讲解和句式总结Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic

GlobalShortageofFreshWater

ontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的3、我们应该怎么办642022/12/21三、习作实例讲解和句式总结Directions:For

STEPONE:

ContentAnalysis（内容扩展）1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的freshwaterVariouskindsoffreshwaterrainriverwelllake652022/12/21STEPONE:ContentAnalysis（内容2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的

Shortoffreshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondrought？？原因？662022/12/212、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的Shortofindustr3、我们应该怎么办

We/studentsscientistsgovernmentSavetechnologyinstitutelaws672022/12/213、我们应该怎么办We/studentsscientistSTEPTWO:

WritingProcessAnalysis（写作分析）GeneralRequirementforEveryParagraph:

TopicsentenceSupportsentence1Supportsentence2Supportsentence3682022/12/21STEPTWO:WritingProcessAnal1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的FreshwaterVariouskindsrainriverwelllakeTherearemanyindividualswhoholdtheopinionthattheworld’ssupplyoffreshwaterisneverusedup.topicsentenceAccordingtothem,therearesomanykindsofsourcesastherain,riveandlake,thatitisalwayssufficientforuse,whichcontributestoashockingwasteofwater.Supportsentence692022/12/211、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的FreshVariouskin2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的

ShortoffreshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondroughtAsamatteroffact,humanbeings

areconfrontedwith

thecrisisofinsufficientfreshwater,whichcan

beattributedto

thefollowingreasons.topicsentence702022/12/212、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的ShortofindustrShortoffreshwaterpopulationpollutionItisknownthattheworldpopulationisgrowingrapidlydaybyday.Soenoughfreshwaterisneededtofeedsuchabigpopulation.

support

sentence

1What’smore,withthedevelopmentofindustry,factoriesandvehiclesproducepoisonousgasesorwastes,whichconsequentlyresultsinthepollutionofwater.supportsentence2712022/12/21ShortofpopulationpollutionIt3、我们应该怎么办

We/studentsscientistsgovernmentsavetechnologyinstitutelawsAsfarasIamconcerned,

itisanurgenttaskforusstudentsto

doourparttosavewaterinourdailylife.

722022/12/213、我们应该怎么办We/studentsscientist3、我们应该怎么办scientiststechnologySecond,scientists

areexpectedto

workevenhardertopurifyseawaterandpollutedwater,andtrytofindsubstitutestoreducetheuseoffreshwater.732022/12/213、我们应该怎么办scientiststechnologyS3、我们应该怎么办governmentinstitutelawsThirdly,governmentsareexpectedtolaunchcampaignsagainstwaterpollution742022/12/213、我们应该怎么办governmentinstituteTh问题解决型写作句式总结

☆首句引出现象1.Nobody/Noonecouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatkids’lackofindependencehasbecomeagraveprobleminmanyfamilies.负面：agraveproblem练习：一次性塑料袋、水资源752022/12/21问题解决型写作句式总结

☆首句引出现象282022/12/1§2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用

Nobody/Noonecouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatwhitepollutionhasbecomeagraveprobleminthecontemporarysociety.current762022/12/21§2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用

Nobody

正面acommon/popular

phenomenon/practice77正面acommon/popula首句2.Inthecontemporarysociety,thereisnodenyingthefactthat+客观事实（提纲1）.练习：住房需求紧张问题782022/12/21首句2.Inthecontemporarysocie首句3.

Onmanycampuses/Inthecontemporarysociety/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,theshortageofhousingisoneofthemostseriousproblemswithwhichpeopleareconfronted.792022/12/21首句3.Onmanycampuses/Inthe首句4(正反均可)Nowadays/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,itcanbenoticedthatchildrendependmoreontheirparentsthaneverbefore.(比较级引出问题)802022/12/21首句4(正反均可)Nowadays/Intheprese练习：用比较级引出问题网上购物Nowadays/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,itcanbenoticedthatmorepeoplepurchaseitemsonlinethaneverbefore.812022/12/21练习：用比较级引出问题网上购物342022/12/16首句5(正反均可)：

Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentyears,ithasbecomeaprevalent/prevailingtendency/trend/practicefor__人_to_动作__.822022/12/21首句5(正反均可)：Inthepresent-day首句6:（正面）Inrecentdecades,____has/havegainedgreatpopularityamong_____.popularitypublicattention/publicity(负面)832022/12/21首句6:（正面）Inrecentdecades,__首句7Thepastyears/decadeshaveseen/witnessedthehuge/speedyadvancement/developmentof_____.842022/12/21首句7Thepastyears/decadeshav

现象描述写作范例1：UnhealthyLivingHabits1.现在很多大学生有不健康的生活习惯2.这些习惯的危害3.我的建议85现象描述写作范例1：Unhealthy

8639

8740你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面的方法写出多样的句型？

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:DatingIsPopularwithCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

大学生对校园恋爱并不陌生；对此方方面面态度不一；谈谈你的观点。

88你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面的方法写出多样的句型？DatingIsPopularwithCollegeStudents

Datingisaconceptnotfarawayfromcollegestudents.Oncampussomeloverswalkhandinhand,andsomekissorhuginpublic.Whenthemajorityofone’sclosefriendsareincommitted(有密切关系的)relationships,togetridofloneliness,somewilldatefellowclassmates,whileothersareinlong-distancerelationships.89DatingIsPopularwithCollegeDifferentpeopleshowdifferentattitudes.Youngloverssaytheyhaverightandfreedomtofallinlove.Someparentsthinkcoll