读后续写专练七

读后续写精读精炼（七）一：原文重现In1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch（胸针）inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wastoohighforReubenEarle.Fivedollarswouldbuyalmostaweek'sfoodforhisfamily.Reubencouldn’taskhisfatherforthemoney.Everythinghisfathermadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Dora.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.Nevertheless,heopenedtheshop'sdoorandwentinside.Standingproudlyandstraightinhisflour-sack（面粉袋改做的）shirtandwashed-outtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon'thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”"I'lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled."Peoplearoundheredon'tusuallyhavethatkindofmoneytospendonthings.Itshouldkeepforawhile."Reubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethemoneyandnottellanybody,forhethoughtMumwouldgetsurprisedwhenshesawthatbrooch.Onhearingthesoundofhammering（捶打）fromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanideathathecouldraisemoneybysellingtheusednailbags.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnailsboughtinbagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswerethrownawayattheconstructionsite,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhesoldtwonailbagsandhidthemoneyinarustysodatin.注意：1,续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan..Paragraph2:Finally,thetimecame!_______________________________________________________________________________.二：文本解析情节分析：本文主要讲述了一个小故事：12岁男孩Reuben想为自己的母亲买一枚胸针，可手头没有足够的钱，他找到店主，店主答应为他保留一段时间，而Reuben开始捡钉子来筹钱购买胸针。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：每天放学后，Reuben就开始他的计划。本段开头提到Reuben已经开始进行筹钱计划，后文可以讲述他的筹钱过程以及最终结果，可以具体描写一下筹钱过程中Reuben付出的努力。第二段开头是：终于，是时候了！本段开头暗示Reuben己经筹到了足够的钱，后文就可以描写他买下胸针的激动心情以及将胸针送给母亲Dora的过程。另外，母亲收到胸针后开心、感动的反应也可以是描写的重点.文章的主人公无疑是小男孩Reuben,但次要人物Dora是不能忽略的，需要通过妈妈来衬托儿子。那么看看文章对妈妈的描述：Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.如果结尾只是说妈妈很开心，就非常遗憾了，还必须和这个描写照应：对生活的乐观和对孩子的热爱。妈妈的开心：Wearingthebeautifulbroochandknowingthestorybehindit,Dorawastoooverjoyedtoutteraword.妈妈的疼爱：Shejustthrewherarmstightlyaroundherbelovedson.对话：“MerryChristmas,mom"，thesonannouncedproudly."Youtoo."theproudmotherechoed.主题升华：Well,nodreamisoutofreachforawillingheart.三：续写单句训练每天放学后，鲁本都开始了他的计划。又冷又饿，鲁本四处闲逛，小心地从一条街到另一条街寻找指甲袋。为了节省更多的钱，这个下定决心的男孩甚至决定在一大早就送文件。他赢的每枚硬币都去了苏打罐，他珍贵的“银行”，然后所有的疲倦都神奇地消失了每次他经过商店橱窗里的胸针时，都会提醒他，他做了什么是值得的。一天比一天地，他的苏打水锡变得越来越重了。六个星期过去了，他才知道。然后走到了平安夜。终于，时间到了！鲁本偷偷走进他的房间，小心翼翼地拿出苏打罐，把所有的硬币都倒出来，开始数。5美元二十美分！他第二次数了一遍，毫无差错。他的努力工作最终得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地拿着苏打锡，立刻冲进了商店。朵拉戴着漂亮的胸针，知道背后的故事，欣喜若狂，一句话也说出来。她只是伸出双臂紧紧地搂住了她心爱的儿子。“圣诞快乐，妈妈，”儿子骄傲地宣布。“你自己也是如此。”骄傲的母亲也着。嗯，没有梦想是无法不到的。四：佳作展现Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,thetimecame!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：课后练笔AlexwasveryexcitedbecausetheNewYearEvewasapproaching.Suddenly,hesawhisgrandfathersittingalonelookingveryunhappy.Alexwenttohimandasked,“Grandpa,whyareyousittingalone?Isthereanythingwrongwithyou?”Hisgrandfatherreplied,“No,Iamfine.Ijustfeellikesittingalone.”“Grandpa,youknowtheNewYearisnear,soareyoupreparingforit?”askedAlexexcitedly.“Nodear,Iamnot.Withthepassageoftime,theworldhascompletelychangedandIdon’tseeanypointincelebratingtheworldIseetoday,”answeredhisgrandfatherdisappointedly.“Iknowsomethingiswrongwithyouandyouarenottellingme.Pleasetellmewhattheproblemis.”Alexsaid.“IfeelIamastrangerintheworldIamlivingin.ItisnotthesameasIhaveknown.Noweveryoneisbusywiththeirownwork.Yourfatherisbusywithbusiness,yourbrotherisbusyonthecomputer,yoursisterisbusystudyingabroadandyourmumisbusywithhouseholdwork.Idon’tknowhowtopassmydays,”saidhisgrandfathersadly.“Grandpa,youhaveme!”saidAlex.Hisgrandfathersmiledandsaid,“Yeah,youarehere,butwhataboutothers?Inourdays,wehadafixedtimeeachdaywhenthewholefamilysattogetherandtalked,sharedproblemsandlaughedtogether.”ThatnightAlexthoughtaboutwhathisgrandfatherhadsaidandanideaflashedthroughhismind.HedecidedtohaveasurpriseNewYearpartyathisownhomeandmakeeveryonecometogetherthatday.AsNewYear’sEvegotnearer,Alexgotbusypreparingfortheparty.Hekeptitasecretfromhisgrandfatherandaskedeveryonenottolethimknowaboutitinordertosurprisehim.ItwasDecember31andeveryonewasbusywiththeirownwork.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Alexsawhisgrandfatherlookingveryhappywhiletalkingwiththefamilymembers.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六：单句训练那是12月31日，每个人都在忙着自己的工作。亚历克斯的祖父坐在他的房间里看书。晚上8点。每个人都开始聚集在客厅里，亚历克斯去给他的祖父打电话。他惊讶地发现所有人都在那里。“今天，我们不去，只是为你享受派对！”亚历克斯说。全家都为忙于生活而道歉。然后他们吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐，一起聊天，分享问题，一起大笑。亚历克斯在和家人交谈时看到他的祖父看起来很开心。他们回顾了过去，为未来做了计划。“我希望我们不会再被分开了。所有家庭成员在一起的地方永远不会改变。亚历克斯看着他年迈的祖父说。其他人也同意了，并确定了全家定期聚会的时间。爷爷感动了，希望和大家一起享受生活。尽管外面很冷，但全家还是暖和不过了。参考答案三：单句训练Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedaround,searchingfornailbagscarefullyfromonestreettoanother.Tosavemoremoney,thedeterminedboyevendecidedtodeliverpapersontheearlymorning.Everycoinhewonwenttoasodatin,histreasured“bank"，andthenallthetirednessdisappearedmagically.Eachtimehepassedbythebroochintheshopwindowwouldremindhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.Daybyday,hissodatinbecameheavierandheavier.Sixweekspassedbeforeheevenknewit.ThenapproachedtheChristmasEve.Finally,thetimecame!Reubenstoleintohisroomandcautiouslytookoutthesodatin,pouredallthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Fivedollarsandtwentycents!Hecounteditasecondtime,andnomistake.Hishardworkeventuallypaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshopwithoutasecond'sdelay.Wearingthebeautifulbroochandknowingthestorybehindit,Dorawastoooverjoyedtoutteraword.Shejustthrewherarmstightlyaroundherbelovedson.“MerryChristmas,mom"，thesonannouncedproudly."Youtoo."theproudmotherechoed.Well,nodreamisoutofreachforawillingheart.六：单句训练ItwasDecember31andeveryonewasbusywiththeirownwork.Alex’sgrandfatherwassittinginhisroom,readingabook.Whentheclockstruck8pm.everyonestartedgatheringinthelivingroomandAlexwenttocallhisgrandfather.Hewassurprisedtofindeveryonethere.“Today,wearenotgoinganywherebutenjoythepartyforyou!”Alexsaid.Thewholefamilyapologizedforbeingbusywiththeirlives.Thentheyhadawonderfuldinnertalking,sharingproblemsandlaughingtogether.Alexsawhisgrandfatherlookingveryhappywhiletalkingwiththefamilymembers.Theylookedbackontheolddaysandplannedforthefuture.“Ihopewewon’tbeseparatedagain.Itneverchangesthathomeiswhereallfamilymembersaretogether.”Alexsaid,lookingathisageinggrandfather.Othersagreedandfixedatimewhenthewholefamilywouldgettogetherregularly.Grandpawasmovedtotears,wishingtoenjoylifewitheveryone.Despitethecoldoutside,thewholefamilycouldn’tbewarmer.四：佳作展现（一）Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedaround,searchingfornailbagscarefullyfromonestreettoanother.Tosavemoremoney,thedeterminedboyevendecidedtodeliverpapersontheearlymorning.Everycoinhewonwenttoasodatin,histreasured“bank"，andthenallthetirednessdisappearedmagically.Eachtimehepassedbythebroochintheshopwindowwouldremindhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.Daybyday,hissodatinbecameheavierandheavier.Sixweekspassedbeforeheevenknewit.ThenapproachedtheChristmasEve.Finally,thetimecame!Reubenstoleintohisroomandcautiouslytookoutthesodatin,pouredallthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Fivedollarsandtwentycents!Hecounteditasecondtime,andnomistake.Hishardworkeventuallypaido