高三英语总复习 Unit15 Writing course

Unit15Writingcourse.Imitate

thesentencestructure

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1.…

eachcontribution—nomatterhowsmall---canhelpmakeadifference.nomatter与what/who/when/where/how/whether连用，表示无论，不管，引导让步状语从句。

e.g.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’t believehim.

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2.Iamdiscoveringthat

beingavolunteerbringsmanypersonalbenefits.

e.g.

Doingmorereadingcanimproveyourreadingcomprehension.Listeningtomusicmakesyourelax..

3.LuHaohasalsofoundtheirrelationship

beneficial.

find+n./pron.+adj/v-ing/v-ed/prepph…

e.g.1)Ithinkit(un)necessarytotalkfacetoface.2)Ifindithelpful

tostudyingroups.3)Hemadehimheard

byraisinghervoice.4.)Wefoundhimsleepingintheclass..4.EveryTuesdayandFridayhevisitsanelderlygentlemanwholivesalone.

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5.ThisishowAmericanjeanswereintroducedtotheworld.

This/Thatishow/why/when/where….e.g.ThisiswhyChinesepreferridingbicycles.ThatishowIfailedtopasstheexamination..

Guideforwriting

TransitionalWordIX连接词

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TransitionalWordConsequence结果类让步类ConcessionCause原因类Time顺序类Conclusion结论类therefore,so,otherwise,asaresult,thus,asaconsequenceafterall,but,evenif,although,butevenso,inspiteof

because,forthisreason,becauseof,duetoonaccountof,thanksof,asfirstofall,inthefirstplace,tobeginwith,butlateron,first,second,atfirst,butsoon,

tosumup,tosummarize,inaword,inbrief,Onthewhole,.5.

TransitionalWordExample

Emphasis(强调类）

Addition(递进）

Forexample,forinstance,foronething,foranother,namely,suchas,thatis

indeed,aboveall,inanycase,infact,Mostimportantofall,what’smoreinadditionbesides,againalso,moreoverfurthermoreWhat’smore,Worsestill,

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连接词IXContrast(对比类）

Jeansarethefirstchoicefor72%ofthoseinthe15-19agegroup,whereaslessthanhalfoftheteenagersintheUKwearothertypesofcasualtrousers.unlike,incontrast(相反）however,but,yet,onthecontrary（正相反）still,whereas,while,instead,.Unlikehermother;sheistallandhermotherisveryshort.2.Chinaisadevelopingcountry,incontrast,Japanisadevelopedcountry.Guangzhouhasverygoodvegetables.Dalian,however,hasmuchbetterseafood.4.HewantstogototheWestLake,buthedoesnothaveenoughmoney..

Hlovedswimming.Yethehadneverbeentotheseashore.Youmustbetired.Onthecontrary,Ifeelwideawake.7.Hehadfailedmanytimes,stillhekeptontheexperiment.8.Thehusbandwantedaboy,whereasthewifewantedagirl.9.Somepeoplelikecoffee,whileothersliketea..

1.Unlikehermother;sheistallandhermotherisveryshort.2.Chinaisadevelopingcountry,incontrast,Japanisadevelopedcountry.Guangzhouhasverygoodvegetables.Dalian,however,hasmuchbetterseafood.4.HewantstogototheWestLake,buthedoesnothaveenoughmoney.Helovedswimming.Yethehadneverbeentotheseashore.Youmustbetired.Onthecontrary,Ifeelwideawake.7.Hehadfailedmanytimes,stillhekeptontheexperiment.8.Thehusbandwantedaboy,whereasthewifewantedagirl.9.Somepeoplelikecoffee,whileothersliketea.Learntosay.Appreciate

Differentpeoplelike differentmusic.Amusiciansaid,“Musicisathingthatcanmakeyoucalm.”Actually,musicisathingthatcanchangeone’smood.Generallyspeaking,youthlikethemusicwithaquickrhythmlikerockmusicandjazz,whiletheoldlikecalmmusiclikeclassicmusic..

Appreciate

Iwillneverforgetthelesson MissWanggaveme.Because Icamefromavillageschool,myEnglishwasverypoor.WhenIwasaskedsomequestionsinthefirstEnglishcourse,Icouldn’tanswerthem.ItoldMissWangitwasdifficultformetolearnEnglishwell.MissWangwasn’tangrywithme.Instead,shetoldmenottobediscouraged.

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Practicewriting.假如你叫李平，你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论，讨论的主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼?请你根据下面所提供的信息,给某英浯报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况．55％的学生认为45％的学生认为1．应该每天进行体育锻炼。2．可以做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球，但不要时间太长3.锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病4．运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好1.锻炼浪费时间2.锻炼使人疲劳3.运动以后很兴奋，较长时间,不能复习功课4运动中可能会受伤

composition.写作步骤:第一步审题,做到四确定1.体裁格式,2.主题时态3.中心人称4.内容要点:55％的学生认为应该每天进行体育锻炼例如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球，但不要时间太长。锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病而且，运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好。45％的学生认为锻炼浪费时间，锻炼使人疲劳，运动以后很兴奋．较长时间不能复习功课。运动中可能会受伤。书信格式议论文一般现在时第三人称讨论的主题是:高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼?

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第二步列提纲

Sample(fromonestudent)Remark

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadwhether_____

Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.

55%ofthestudentsapproveoftheideathat_____,

Theybelieve______Inaddition,______Theysuggestthat_______.

However,45%ofthestudentsareopposedtotheideaof______.Besides,______maybe______therefore______what’smore,________.①写信常见开头句，点题。②全文综述句。③55％的同学的意见综述句。④意见一。⑤意见二。⑥意见三。

7)45%的同学的同学的意见综述句。

反面意见一(8）反面意见二(9）反面意见三.Composition

FromWangYaNanDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherthestudentsofSenior3shouldbetakephysicalexercise.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.About55%ofthestudentsareinfavorofthis.Theybelievestudentsmusttakeexerciseeveryday.,suchasplayPing-pongball,basketballanddomorningexercise.Butnotforalongtime.Takesomeexercisecankeepourbodyhealth,meanwhileitcankeepourbodyawayfromillness.What’smore,dosomesportsalsocanrelaxourbrains.Becauseofthis,wecanstudybetter.However,about45%ofstudentsareapprovedtotheidea.Theythinkitwillwasteourtimeanddosomesportsalwaysmakepeopletired.Thenitisveryeasytobecomeexcitedafterdoit,andwecan’tstudycarefullyinthissituation.Worsestill,wemaygetininjuredwhenwedosomesport..CorrectingCompositionFromWangYaNanDearEditor,

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherthestudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.About55%ofthestudentsareinfavorofthis.Theybelievestudentsshouldtakeexerciseeveryday,suchasplayingPing-pongball,basketballanddoingmorningexercises.Butitwon’ttaketoomuchtime.Takingsomeexercisecankeepourbodyhealthy,meanwhileitcankeepourbodyawayfromillness.What’smore,doingsomesportalsocanrelaxourbrains.Becauseofthis,wecanstudybetter.However,about45%ofstudentsareopposedtotheidea.Theythinkitwillwastetheirtimeanddoingsportalwaysmakespeopletired.Thenitisveryeasytobecomeexcitedafterdoingit,andwecan’tstudycarefullyinthissituation.Worsestill,wemaygetinjured..

Appreciate55%ofthestudentsinvestigatedagreewiththeideathatweshouldtakephysicalexerciseseveryday ---fromRenlulu55%ofthestudentsthinkitnecessarytotakeexerciseseveryday,Icankeepourbodyhealthyinaddition,itcanreducedisease. ---fromChenYanHavingsportscanmakeourbodystronger,sothatwecangetlessdisease.Also,havingsportscangiveourbrainarestandmaketheresultofreviewbetter. ---fromZoXiang4.Asaconsequence,studentswillhavemoreenergytostudy.

---fromLiuchiyuan.

5.Theythinkitunnecessarytoletthestudentstakeexercise. (LiuYan)6.Inthisway,wewillreviewoursubjectsbetter.Theythinktakingexerciseisawasteoftime,(ZhangJingxing)7.Soyouaretoo

excitedtoreviewyourlessonswell. (YangFei)8.Theyconsideritalsocanmakethemmoreexcited,whichisbadforourreview.(Cuiweile)9.Worsestill,wemaygetinjuredwhenwedosomesport.

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Correctyourmistakes1.Wedohavedifferentopiniononthismatter.2.Butitisn’tabletocostsomuchtime.3.Wecan’ttaketoomuchtimeonit.4.Havingsportsshouldletusbecomeexcitingforlongtimes.5.Thenitiseasytobecomeexcitedafterdosomesport..

DearEditor,l'mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.

Wedohavedifferentopinions.55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeexerciseeveryday,suchas

doingmorningexercises,playingpingpongandplayingbasketball,butshouldn'ttaketoomuchtime.Exercisebuildstheirbodiesandreducesdiseases.Sportscanlettheirbrainshavearestsothattheirreviewingwillbemoreeffective.

Ontheotherhand45%believetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeandit'stiring.Afterhavingsports,theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons.Besides,theymightgetinjuredinsports.Sample.

写法点评1.开门见山，点名主题。2.要点齐全，议论有条理。3.文章中使用了多个复合句（宾语从句，状语从句，虚拟语气，还是用了现在分词和动词不定式，体现了作者较高的语言素养。4.连接词suchas,besides,but,sothat的使用，使得本文意义连贯，全篇浑然一体。5.能较好地使用一些较高级的词汇和结构（如buildourbody,payattentionto,too…to,getinjured).

DearEditor,l'mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.

Wedohavedifferentopinions.55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeexerciseeveryday,suchas

doingmorningexercises,playingpingpongandplayingbasketball,butshouldn'ttaketoomuchtime.Exercisebuildstheirbodiesandreducesdiseases.Sportscanlettheirbrainshavearestsothattheirreviewingwillbemoreeffective.

Ontheotherhand45%believetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeandit'stiring.Afterhavingsports,theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons.Besides,theymightgetinjuredinsports.Sample.

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