专业四级大作文

专业四级大作文英语专业四级作文（议论文）常见命题形式一.对立观点式二.单一观点式三.选择观点式一.对立观点式

1给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个面，要求考生支持一方并说明。(1)Somepeoplethinkthatparentsshouldplantheirchildren’sleisuretimecarefully.Otherpeoplebelievethatchildrenshoulddecideforthemselveshowtospendtheirfreetime,whichonedoyouagreewith?(2)Somepeoplethinkthatthefamilyisthemostimportantinfluenceonyoungadults.Otherpeoplethinkthatfriendsarethemostimportantinfluenceonyoungadults.Whichonedoyouagreewith?一.对立观点式2.给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个面，要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较他们的优缺点，并给出理由。(1)Somestudentsparticipateinschoolactivitiessuchasclubsandsports.Otherstudentsdonottakepartinsuchactivitiesbecausetheyspendmoretimeontheirstudies.Whichtypeofstudentsdoyouprefertobe?Explainwhy.(2)Somepeoplelikedifferentfriends.Otherslikesimilarfriends.Comparetheadvantagesofthesetwokindsoffriends.Whichkindoffriendsdoyouprefer?Explainwhy.二.单一观点式1.给出一个论点，此论点不包括两种事物的比较，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。(1)Peopleshouldneverbesatisfiedwithwhattheyhave,theyshouldalwayswantsomethingneworsomethingdifferent.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?(2)Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Astudent’smainpurposeingettinganeducationistoearnalotofmoney.Usespecificreasonsandexlestosupportyouropinion.2.给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。(1)Peopleshouldberealisticratherthanromanticinordertoliveabetterlife.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?Usespecificreasonstosupportyouranswer.(2)Livinginbigcitieshasmoreadvantagesthanlivinginsmalltownsorcountryside.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?三.选择观点式

1.给出一些选项，要求考生选择其中一个或几个并给予说明。(1)Inventionssuchaseyeglassesandthesewingmachine(装订机)havehadanimportanteffectonourlives.Chooseanotherinventionthatyouthinkisimportant.Givespecificreasonsforyourchoice.(2)Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor?Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthisissue.注意事项：1.是否切题；2.是否引言段、正文和结论都齐全；3.是否每一个段落都有主题句；4.主题句是否都有充分的论证、论据；5.连词、代词的运用是否正确；6.句子结构是否有一定变化；7.结论是否自然、清楚；8.用词是否准确、恰当；9.单词拼写是否有误；10.标点符号是否正确；11.平行结构的运用是否正确；12.有没有其它的明显的语法错误.关键点1.Para1----40词以内Para2----2个reasonsPara3----结尾千万不能提出新观点2.Topicsentence要写好，something是个比较模糊的词，不能用在主题句中。主题句写好后，最好用一段能展开，不能toonarrow或toowide.如：Istayedatmyaunt’slastweekend.(×)Ienjoyedmyselfalotat…(√)后者好于前者。3.写reasons时先列一个提纲，列几个观点，用关键词或汉语。再从中选择2个重要的。把其余的可以按照逻辑关系串起来作为一点在文中其他地方写。这2个理由之间必须要有连接词Firstly,Secondly/First,Second.且要搭配，不能Firstly与Second搭配。写第一个reason前一定要写好generalsentence(即第一个reason的第一句话)。每个理由都要有generalsentence.2个reason要差不多的“份量”.4.总结时一定要用另外的方式，不能重复。5.总是用“，”和and连接句子是错误的。6.几种错误：(1)Pronoun指代不明Themanremovedallthefurniturefromtheroomandcleanedit.改：Themancleanedallthefurniture/theroomafterremovingit/allthefurniturefromtheroom/it.(2)措辞修饰语Marysaid,duringthemeeting,Johnactedasafool.“duringthemeeting”有歧义，应放在Marysaid前。(3)平行结构不完整Amanisjudgednotonlybyhissaidbutalsobyhisdeeds.改：said→words或deeds→does(4)简洁concisement.(5)Unity，与中心不统一不行。如：Wehadapartyyesterday,andTomwasill.(×)改：Wehadapartyyesterday,itwasagreatsuccess.又如：Luxunwasoneofthegreatestwriters.不完整，无时间范围。(6)人称代词要一致。全文代词不要一段用You，一段用We，另一段用They.(7)句型要多变化，如asmuchas,morethan,Itis……(强调句型)等等。不要句式过于简单，Therebe,Itis句型不要一用用到底。(8)切忌句子太长；少用感叹号，问号(不赞成