人教版中考英语【知识精讲+备课精研】作文课件

初中英语写作培训培训讲师：XX老师“米晓琼目录CONTENTS01.明确写作要求02.写作思路探究03.美文佳作赏析明确写作要求0101.明确写作要求评分标准少于80字的作文要酌情扣分。语法和拼写错误,每个扣0.5,重复错误不计标点错误每4个扣0.5内容完整书写规范语句流畅语法正确分值作文内容12-15内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误,书写规范9-11内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无语法错误,书写较规范5-8内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错误较多,书写较规范0-4只写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠规范,只有个别句子可读或不知所云赏析观察有哪些问题01.明确写作要求最基本的书写工整标点准确段落清晰格式正确写作思路探究0202.写作思路1》审好题定方向2》列框架拓思维/扩要点3》巧衔接成佳作02.写作思路-1》审题

定方向时态定主题定文体定人称定要点(2021新疆中考)三年将尽，未来已来,我们如何成为更好的自己?请以“ToBeaBetterMan"为题写-篇英文短文，从学习方法,生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行描述。写作要求:1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥；2.条理清晰,语句通顺；3.文中不得出现姓名、学校名等个人真实信息；4.短文词数在80至120词之间。典例定主题:如何成为更好的自己定文体:说明文定人称:第一人称复数we定时态:一般现在时定要点:①学习方法②生活习惯③交友沟通每当考试来临,同学们都会有不同程度的紧张和焦虑。我们应该如何放松自己呢?请以"TheWaytoRelaxOurselves"为题,写一篇英语短文,从焦虑的原因、放松自己的方法、自己的倡议等方面着手。写作要求:1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥;2.条理清晰,语句通顺;3.文中不得出现姓名、学校名等个人真实信息；4.短文词数在80至120词之间。练习定主题:放松自己的方式定文体:说明文定人称:第一人称复数we定时态:一般现在时定要点:①焦虑的原因②放松方法③个人建议02.写作思路探究-2》列框架01提纲式02要点式03全命题式结合所提示的内容角度,自行设计要点拓展的内容将要点转化成英语表达,围绕主旨进行合理化扩充自主发挥词总开头引出并阐述主题关键词分中间围绕主题,分点罗列，逻辑清晰，细节补充。|结构有层次,每点先总述提出的建议和做法再补充具体意义。或陈述事件的人物、地点,事情的经过、结果等。关键词总结尾再次点明主题,并发出号召02.写作思路探究-2》列框架02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点方法1:扩写原因相关词汇:because,since,as,for等。扩:Becarefulwiththeelectricityandfire,because/since/as/fortheycancauseterribleaccidents.eg1.我受到了表扬。译:Iwaspraised.扩:Iwaspraisedbecause/since/as/forIdidsomethingmeaningfulwithmypocketmoney.eg2.小心用火用电。译:Becarefulwiththeelectricityandfire.02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点方法1:扩写原因相关词汇:because,since,as,for等。扩:Weshouldhelpothers,because/since/as/for

everyoneneedshelpsometimes.1.你应该保持良好的心情。译:Youshouldkeepagoodmood.扩:Youshouldkeepagoodmood,because/since/as/forit’sgoodforyourhealth.2.我们应该帮助他人。译:Weshouldhelpothers.练02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点方法2:扩写具体事例相关词汇:like,suchas,forexample扩:I'mgoodatEnglish.Forexample,IcanexpressmyselfclearlyandcommunicatewithotherssmoothlyinEnglish.eg1.我了解很多关于我的家乡的事情。译:Iknowalotaboutmyhometown.扩:Iknowalotaboutmyhometown,suchasits

history,cultureandfood.eg2.我擅长英语。译:I'mgoodatEnglish.02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点方法3:扩写条件扩:

Weshouldmakesurethedoorsandwindowsareshutwellifweplantogoout.eg1.使用图纸、图片或肢体语言。译:Usedrawings,picturesorbodylanguages.扩:IfyoufinditreallyhardtoexpressyourselfinChinese,youcanusedrawings,picturesorbodylanguages.eg2.出门时,关上门窗。译:Shutthedoorsandwindowswhengoingout.相关词汇:if,unless,aslongas02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点扩:Ourteacherisverystrictwithus.Forexample,sherequiresustofinishhomeworkontimeeveryday.1.家庭成员应该分享。译:Familymembersshouldsharewitheachother.扩:Familymembersshouldsharewitheachother,suchashappinessand

worries.2.我们的老师对我们很严格。

译:Ourteacherisverystrictwithus.练方法3:扩写条件相关词汇:if,unless,aslongalso02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点方法4:扩写结果或目的扩:

ShetaughtmepatientlysothatIcouldunderstandeverysinglequestion.eg1.坚持做眼保健操。

译:Keepondoingeyeexercises.扩:Ikeepondoingeyeexercisesto/inordertomakemytiredeyesrelaxed.eg2.她耐心指导我。译:Shetaughtmepatiently.结果:so,therefore,asaresult目的:

to,inorderto/that,sothat,todo02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点扩:YoucantakepartintheEnglishCorner

inordertoimproveyourpronunciation.1.我们可以自由地进行小组讨论。译:Wecandiscussingroupsfreely.扩:Wecandiscussingroupsfreelysothatwehavechancetoexpressourdifferentthoughts.2.你可以参加英语角。译:YoucantakepartintheEnglishCorner.练方法4:扩写结果或目的结果:so,therefore,asaresult目的:

to,inorderto/that,sothat,todo02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点方法5:扩写感受、想法eg1.我避免使用电子产品。译:Iavoidusingelectronicproducts.扩:Iavoidusingelectronicproducts.Ithinkthelighttheygiveoffisharmfultomyeyes.02.写作思路探究-2》拓思维/扩要点1.我很快就要毕业了。译:I'mgoingtograduatesoon.扩:

I'mgoingtograduatesoon.Iwillneverforgetthegoodtimeinthisschool.练方法5:扩写感受、想法02.写作思路-3》巧衔接成佳作类别单词\短语并列转折顺序因果and;both...and...；notonly...butalso...；ontheonehand...ontheotherhand..but;however;while;otherwisefirst(ly)/atfirst/firstofall/tobeginwith首先;second(ly)/then/afterthat/next

其次；meanwhile/atthesametime同时;finally/intheend/atlast最后;lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是so;because/becauseof/for/since/as;therefore因此;sothat;as

aresult;inorderto;asaresultof由于02.写作思路-3》巧衔接成佳作类别单词\短语递进观点总结其他inotherwords/thatis(tosay)换句话;actually/infact/asamatteroffact事实上also;besides;what'smore更重要的是;what'sworse更糟糕的是inmyopinion/view/eyes/asforme观点

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mypointofview在我看来;personally个人看来;tobehonest坦诚地说onthewhole总的来说;inaword/allinall/inshort总而言之同义替换1likeadmire,befondofbeinterestedinbecrazyaboutfallinlove2happypleasedcheerfuljoyful3goodperfectexcellentenjoyablefantasticoutstanding4hopeexpectlookforwardto美文佳作赏析03（1）HowtolearnEnglishwell——如何学好英语

Englishisimportantandusefultous,Howcanwelearnitwell?Herearemysuggestions. First,weshouldoftenlistentothetapes,EnglishsongsandEnglishprograms.WatchingEnglishmoviesisalsohelpfultous.Second,weshouldspeakEnglishinclassasmuchaspossible.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Themoreyouspeak,thefewermistakesyouwillmake,we’dbetterjointheEnglishclubandpracticewithothers.Third,wecanreadmoreEnglishnewspapersandmagazines.It’sgoodforus.Atlast,weshouldrecite（背诵）somegoodpassagesandkeepdiaries. Inaword,aslongaswedomorelistening,speaking,readingandwriting,wewilllearnEnglishwell.（2）Keephealthy————保持健康之我见

Asweknow,itisimportantforustokeephealthyandhaveahealthylife.Howtokeepfit?First,weshouldeathealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesandsoon.Wemustn’teatjunkfood,whichisbadforourhealth.Second,doingsportsisnecessaryforus.Wecanrunandplayballgames.Last,itisusefulforustohaveagoodlivinghabit.Weshouldgotobedearlyandgetupearly.Wemustwashourhandsbeforemeals.What’smore,weshouldbrushourteethtwiceaday.

IfyoudoasIsayI’msureyouwillbehealthierandhealthier.（3）LessPressureMakeBetterLife————正确面对你的压力

Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Moststudentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexam.I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantedmetobethetopstudentinclass.Theymademestudyallday.Theyevensentmetoallkindsofclassesonweekends.IhadatalkwithmyparentsandtoldthemIhaddonemybest.Finallytheyunderstoodme.Inthisway,IfeellessstressedoutsothatIcanstudyharder.Lesspressure