高三作文讲评

高三复习作文讲评

Assessment&practiceofWritingWhichisyourpreference?neatandtidywell-shapedrichincontentBasicelements(元素)ofagoodcompositionconclusionneathandwritingproperstructurerichcontentDon’tleaveoutmaincontentsYou’dbetteruse3-4advancedsentencepatterns.Begoodatusingconjunctionwords.Writing:假设你是育才中学学生王林，寒假期间在当地一家KFC店当了一周服务员，请你用英语给你的英国笔友Jack写一封信，谈谈你打工的经历，收获和感想。注意：信的开头和结尾已给出（不计入词数）DearJack,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoBestwishes.Yours,

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Didyouwritedownallofthemaincontents?nothoughts&gainslittleworkingexperienceWhatmaincontentsshouldbeincluded?Iamwritingtotellyoumyexperienceaboutmypart-timejobinKFC.Itisaverymeaningfulwork?jobIamwritingtotellyoumyexperienceaboutmypart-timejobataKFC,whichisameaningfuljob.ataNon-attributiveclause非限制性定语从句Didyouusesomeadvancedsentencepatterns?Withaweektimewentby,myworkingweekcametoanend.goingWith复合结构

Withtheworkbegan,Ihavetoworksevenhoursaday,whichmademeverytiring.beginning,hadtired.Inotonlyknewhowdifficultitwastomakemoneybutalsohasimprovedmyabilityofgettingalonewithothers.knowisalongNotonlydoIknowhowdifficultitistomakemoneybutalsomyabilityofgettingalongwithothershasimproved.Inversion倒装AllIhadtodowasaskcustomerswhatwouldtheywanttoeat.whatimpressesmemostisIfinditisnoteasytogainmoney.

Thenounclause名词性从句toasktheywould︿thatFinally,Ifinishedthework.Irealizedthatearnmoneywasnoteasy.Havingfinishedtheworkfinally,Irealizedthatearningmoneywasnoteasy.Thepresentparticiple(doing)

现在分词earningLet’sappreciatesomebeautifulsentences.Describethejob:1.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadbeenawaiter.

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2.ItwasthemoneythatIgotbymakingefforts.

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3.OnlywhentheeveningcamecouldIgohome.

鲁芳5班7.NotonlydidIgetupearlyinthemorningbutalsoIwenthomelateintheevening.

刘佳敏5班5.TiredasIwas,Istillkeptonworking.

牟政寰8班6.Asyouknow,makingmoneyisadifficultthing,butworkingasawaitressismuchharder.

董罗申5班4.Imetavarietyofpeople,fromwhomIknewhowtogetalongwithotherpeoplebetter.

管灵莹8班8.NeverhadIhadanyexperiencelikethat.

尤丹莎5班Describethethoughts&gains:

1.Nomatterwhathappens,Imustrelyonmyselftodealwithit.

郑雨茜5班2.Thereisnodoubtthatworkingcanhelpusimproveourabilityofcommunication.

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3.WhatIwanttosayisthatthisexperiencereallyhashelpedmealot

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.7.IthinkthisisthebestholidaythatIwillalwaysremember.

阮路贻8班5.ItseemedthatIwasnotsuitableforthejob.

周泱5班6.Themorewelearntoday,thebetterwewillbetomorrow.

杨谨5班4.Onlyinthiswaycanweknowmakingmoneyisverydifficult.

曹冰妮8班5班苏宇跃8班孟思思8班管灵莹DearJack,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyunforgettableandmeaningfulwinterholiday.

Duringthevacation,Imanagedtotakeapart-timejobasawaiterataKFC,soIledabusylifeinthosedays,butIbenefitalotfromthisexperience.BeingawaiterwasmoredifficultthanIfirstexpected.Suchalargeamountofworkdrovemenearlycrazy,especiallyduringtherushhours.Ididn’tevenhavetimetofeeltired.Inearlygaveupinthefirstfewdays,ButIfinallyovercameallthedifficulties.Itwasmyfriendswhogavemethepowertokeepworking.Thiswintervacationisanimportantlessontome,fromwhichIlearnthewaytogetalongwithothersandtherightwaytodealwithmoney.Practice假如你是育才中学学生李华。在4月15日参加了以控制全球气候变暖为主题的“低碳日”（LowCarbonDay)活动。请你用英语给你的笔友Mary写一封100－120个词的信，描述此次活动内容和感想。DearMary,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingto…

Bestwishes,Yours,LiHua

ActivitiesonLowCarbonDayGotoschoolonfootorbybiketurnoffthetapwhilebrushingyourteethBeaneducatorUsefewerplasticbagsAvoidusingtheairconditionerMakefulluseofbothsidesofapieceofpaperSwitchoffthelights…Stateyourideasbyusingoneoftheseways:1.Doing/done;2.名词性从句;3.状语从句;4.with;5.定语从句6.倒装7…Whatcanyoulearnfromthisactivity?2.

Eventhesimplesteverydayactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.1.Everybodyhashisdutytoprotecttheworld.

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...HomeworkWritethecompositionusingthe wayswehavetalkedabouttoday.体裁（夹叙夹议）人称（thefirstperson）时态（thesimplepasttenseandthesimplepresenttense）内容要点（describethejobanddescribethethoughts&gains)DearJack,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyunforgettableandmeaningfulwinterholiday.

Duringthevacation,Ifoundapart-timejobasawaiterinKFC.Ididitforthefirsttime,soIwasbusyinthosedays.BeingawaiterwasmoredifficultthanIfirstexpected.BecauseEverydayImustdoalotofwork,Ididn’tevenhavetimetofeeltired.Inearlygaveupinthefirstfewdays,ButIfinallyovercameallthedifficulties.Iwanttosaythattheexperienceisimportanttome.Ibenefitalotfromit.Ifeelit’sreallyhardtomakemoneyonmyown,whichteachesmetova