【课件】高中英语读后续写课件

read-think-writeRead-structureHowisthepassageorganizd?flashback(倒叙)3、4、5--1、2--6、7Read-contentWho?How?Where?DevimotherAngelalittlekidslocalswimmingpoolUnderlineDevi'schangesinherfeelingsaboutswimmingconfidentltyinapanicparalyzedwithfearembarrassedupsetafuriousfrownRead-language1.variousadj./adv.2.vividv.confidentltyparalyzedwithfearembarrassedupsetfuriousslippedintoheldontothrewherarmgrab...Think1.WhydidDveithinkitisridiculous?age(littlekidsVS.15)2.Whatkindofnegativefeelingswouldshehave?fearembarrassmentproblem!3.Whatmightbethesolution?Angela'shelpWriteParagraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.

Paragraph2SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.

result(sat)feelings(negative)action(withoutAngela)AngelahelpedDeviDeviovercamefearlessonSampleSamplewithSampleSampleSampleParagraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Shedraggedherfeettothesideofthepoolandsatdown,indoubtwhetherlessonswouldbehelpful.Scanningaround,Devispottedherinstructoracrossthepool,togetherwiththelittlekidswhojumpedintothewaterlikefishleapingintotheocean.Shewatchedinamazement.EnviousasDeviwas,aflushofembarrassmentsooncrepttohercheekswhenalittlegirlpassedby,askinghernottobescared.Howembarrassing!Shehungherhead.（80words）Paragraph2SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.DeviwasastonishedtobemadeawarethatAngelahadneverlearnedswimminguntilshewas20.Greatlyinspired,Devinowregainedhope.SheenteredthepoolasecondtimeinthecompanyofAngela,severalcheerfulkidsfloatingneartocheerheron.Devibegantofeelmoreatease,herbreathmoreeven.Withagratefulheart,Devirealizedthatshemightnotbeafearlessswimmer,butshewouldsurehavefuntrying.(81words)

SampleParagraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Sheshuffledtowardsthesideofthepoolandfeltquiteoutofplaceamongalllittlekids.Seizedbyembarrassment,sheevendidn’tdaretoraiseherhead.ButtheregularsplashoflittlekidsleapingintothewateraswellasAngela’ssoftinstructionaltoneattractedhergradually.However,hardlyhadsheliftedherlegswhenaflashoffearcameuponher.Sheunconsciouslysteppedbackandsatbesidethepoolindepression.(76wards)Paragraph2SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.ItseemedthatshesawDevithroughandcomfortedherwithherownlearningstory.HearingthatAngeladidn’tpracticeswimminguntil20,Deviblinkedinsurprisebutwasencouragedgreatly.Angelastretchedoutherhand,invitingDevitotryagainwithher.Thistime,followingAngela’sinstruction,Devijumpedintot