【讲座】高考写作中的文化意识

CulturalConsciousness

inWriting

－－近期英语作文回顾（1）省检市检2018年市质检省质检作文分析目录2.

Chinese

traditonalculture?1.culture?高考英语作文会考什么？typesletterinvitationinformation…suggestionappreciationLihuaJohnrepresentativecommunicationlanguage&culturebarriersculturalconsciousnessculturalconsciousness得体？写作意图混乱结构不平衡文化细节有待推敲未能圆满地完成写作任务句型堆砌Writeproperly.TaskResponse?

weaksenseLihuaJohncommunication推己及人？如何审题Why?What

activities?important

details…(when,where,who,how...)politenessneedtoreply?WhatinformationwouldJohnliketoreceive?culturalconsciousness草草收尾culturalconsciousnessHowiseverythinggoing?I’mmorethanhappytohearthatyoushowconsiderableinterestinteaculture.SoI’msendingasincereinvitationtoyou.AsfarasIknow,,the9thChinaNingboInternationalTeaCultureFestivalisscheduledtobeheldfromMay3rdto6th,2018.Theeventisdesignedforalltealovers.Itprovidesaplatformforustoappreciateandbuytea.Wecanalsoseetheproducingprocessoftea.Asisknowntoall,thehistoryofteainChinadatesbacktothousandsofyearsago.ItwasLuYuwhowrotethefirstbookconcerningtea–theBibleofTea.Teadrinkingalsohelpsusbuildalightdiet,whichkeepsourphysicalconditionbalanced.Therefore,it’sguaranteedthatyouwon’tbedisappointedaboutthefestival.Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Lookingforwardtoyourpresence.再次呼应写作目的，得体有礼文化细节准确到位审题精准文化融入得宜LihuaJohnson代理人写信对象影响文化反应LihuaJohnson代理人

假定你是李华，请用英文写一封申请，申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校参加中华文化之旅的英国中学生Johnson，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.家庭条件及个人优势；3.安排英国朋友参加的活动注意：1、词数100左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、参考词汇：hostfamily（接待家庭）WhatinformationwouldJohnsonliketoreceive?Why?What

activities?important

details…(when,where,who,how...)politenessneedtoreply?

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假定你是李华，请用英文写一封申请，申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校参加中华文化之旅的英国中学生Johnson，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.家庭条件及个人优势；3.安排英国朋友参加的活动注意：1、词数100左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、参考词汇：hostfamily（接待家庭）Task

responseWhyme?Whywriting?Details:strengths&activitiesreplyculturalconsciousnesspolitenessPARA01Whyme?Whywriting?创设无效信息，whywriting?

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表述不恰当（logicalthinking）Whyme?Whywriting?LiHua,astudentfromJohnson’sexchangeschoolmyfamilybethehostfamilyChallenge:

rewritepara.1in3

lines？申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校参加中华文化之旅的英国中学生Johnson，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.家庭条件及个人优势；3.安排英国朋友参加的活动I’mLiHua,astudentfromJohnson’sexchangeschool.IsincerelyhopethatmyfamilycanhavethehonortohosthimduringhisstayforthetripofChineseculture.I’mLiHua,astudentfromJohnson’sexchangeschool.Isincerelyhopethatmyfamilycanhavethehonortobeahostfamily.Whyme?Whywriting?开头应当简要、恰当PARA02StrengthsActivitiesLihuaJohnson代理人WhatinformationwouldJohnsonliketoreceive?WhatinformationwouldJohnsonliketoreceive?culturalconsciousness推己及人？living

conditions(spare/sharedroom?)family

atmospherecommunicationbarrierspecial

activitiesWhatwouldyoucareifyouwereJohnson?Taskresponse“hostfamily”主体部分应当饱满、得体，长短句结合PARA03ProperendingCulturalconsciousnessPoliteness(呼应话题)ProperendingCulturalconsciousnessPoliteness(呼应话题)WhywasLiHuawriting?DoesLiHuaneedareply?Politeness!草草收场申请信口吻？Ifgiventhechance,duringhisstay,we’llarrange…If…拓展为2-3句(短句)？interest;hope替换？；convince;host;consideration...Challenge:rewriteitin2-3lines!

Inaword,IshowakeeninterestinprovidinganimpressivetripforJohnson.Hopefullyyoutakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Thankyouinadvance.Inaword,I’mconvincedthatIwillbeaqualified/trustworthyhost.Hopefullyyoutakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Thank