调查报告类作文训练 课件

调查报告类作文训练档次的衡量标准为：内容(content)、语言的准确性(accuracy)、流畅性(fluency)。项目要素给分表AA档B档C档D档内容6分切合题意，体现要点65.554.543.53210.50有所发挥准确性6分语法准确65.554.543.53210.50词汇丰富机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性3分结构合理32.521.510.50得体、连贯▲项目要素说明1）内容-------指是否切题；是否包括所有的要点，并有所发挥；2）准确性----指词汇的数量合适度与拼写、语言结构和书写格式的准确性等；3）流畅性-----指文章的结构、上下文的连贯性、用词造句的流畅度和表达的得体性等。4）如考生写出自己的真实姓名、学校名等个人信息，全文给0分。RecentlywedidasurveyinourclassinordertoseewhatstudentsmainlydoontheInternet.Here’ssomethingaboutmygroupmembers.Rogerspendsmostofthetimeonlinelookingfortheinformationheneeds.Hesaiditwasquickandconvenienttoknowtheworldinthisway.SusanusestheInternetmainlyforlearningEnglishandfindsitveryhelpful.ForNick,theInternetismainlyforrelaxing.Helistenstomusicorwatchesfilmsoniteveryday.AsfarasIamconcerned,ImostlyusetheInternettokeepintouchwithmyfamilyandfriends.It’sgreatthatthereisInternetwhenwe’refarfromeachother.Hopefully,everyonecanusetheInternetinagoodway.

调查报告要根据具体调查内容来写。调查报告的写作思路(3段法)

1、报告是关于什么的?

Recentlywedidasurveyabout….Here’stheresultofoursurvey.2、报告的内容：（数据/观点）A陈述观点+所基于的原因B陈述现状+所造成的结果3、作者的观点：inmyopinion;inaword;Ithink/hope/believethat….Thereisnodoubtthat….Summary比例喜欢的英语老师类型40%有创意(creative),授课生动,有趣28%年轻、友善且有幽默感(humorous)20%关心学生，平等对待学生7%细心、耐心，乐于帮助学生5%工作勤奋你的看法？写作自评表自评项目评价结果是 否1.我明白在写作中“我”是谁2.我非常清楚写作要点3.我的书写很工整，字没有超出规定的范围，标点符号清晰4.我一开始就确定文章的时态5.我每段的第一、第二句就写出了段落的主要内容，然后展开（段落中心句）6.写作时，我尽可能运用连接词7.写作时，我总是尝试运用多种表达方式，避免句式的单一8.写前我尽可能构思完整，尽量避免边写边涂改9.写完后，我能细心地检查文章一遍，检查内容要点是否有遗漏，词汇、时态、句法是否正确10.需要修改时，我一笔划过，确保修改清楚工整【解题思路】1.时态：_______________________________________

内容要点：_______________________________________2.词句准备：1）40%的学生_______________________________喜欢_______________________________________40%的学生喜欢有创意，授课生动、有趣的老师。_______________________________________________________________________________2）在我看来_______________________________________like/prefer/befondof/love/carefor六个内容要点40%students/40%ofthestudents以一般现在时为主40%studentspreferteacherswhoarecreativeandinteresting,andwhocangivelivelylessons.inmyopinion,asfarasIamconcerned,IbelieveRecentlywedidasurveyaboutthetypeofteachersthatstudentslikebest.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Recentlywedidasurveyaboutthetypeofteachersthatstudentslikebest.

40%ofthestudentswouldprefercreativeEnglishteacherswhocanmaketheirEnglishclasseslivelyandinteresting.28%thinkthattheyoung,kindandhumourousEnglishteachersarepopularwithstudents.And20%ofthestudentsbelievethatgoodEnglishteachersshouldcareaboutstudents’feelingsandtreateverystudentequally.7%ofthestudents

liketheEnglishteacherswhoarecareful,patientandready