任务10月-书面表达

Writing2认真审题，观察图片理清要点，列出要点根据图片要点，遣词造句连句成文，丰富句式仔细检查，认真誊写解题技巧

审题材

审人称审要求审时态审题，看图片信息定文章结构审题书面表达审题假设你是红星中学的学生李华，最近，你校学生会对影响学生课外阅读的因素进行了调查，结果见下图。请根据图中所给的信息给某英文报纸写一封信，反映调查的实际情况，并寻求建议。书面表达审题注意：1.词数100—120；2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。DearEditor，Ourstudentunionhasrecentlyconductedasurveyonwhataffectsstudents'after­classreading.

Sincerelyyours，LiHua

审题--原文分析1.题材-书信2.时态--一般现在时态3.人称--第一人称4.要求--反映调查的实际情况，并寻求建议；词数100左右；段落一写信的原因段落二，三：反映的真实情况-即描写图片信息段落四：寻求建议

1．72%的同学是课业负担重造成的没时间课外阅读

2．16%家长不支持课外阅读

3．

8%认为图书馆开放时间短，藏书少4.4%认为书价高理要点列要点

注意使用高级词汇，用短语代词要点：1.72%：schoolworktakesupmostoftheirtime,leavingverylittletimeforafter­classreading.2.16%：complainthattheirparentsdonotsupportthemenough.3.8%：notsatisfiedwiththeopeninghourofthelibraryandthelimitedbookcollectionsthere.4.4%：booksaretooexpensivenowadays扩词成句遣词造句连句成文正确使用连词和过渡语，使用多种句式

造句成文DearEditor，Ourstudentunionhasrecentlyconductedasurveyonwhataffectsstudents'after­classreading.（写信原因）Theresultisasfollows：72%ofthestudentsthinkthatschoolworktakesupmostoftheirtime,leavingverylittletimeforafter­classreading.Meanwhile,16%complainthattheirparentsdonotsupportthemenough.Parentsareconcernedthattheirchildren'sattentionmaybetakenawaybythenon­schoolrelatedreading.Besides,8%ofthestudentsarenotsatisfiedwiththeopeninghourofthelibraryandthelimitedbookcollectionsthere.onepossibleversion

And4%ofthestudentsthinkbooksaretooexpensivenowadays,sotheycan'taffordtoreadasmuchastheywant.（分析图片现象）Weallknowthatreadingisbeneficial.However,giventhefactsabove,howcanwereadmore?Iwouldappreciateyouradviceverymuchonhowtoencourageourreading.（先表达自己观点‘接着寻求建议）Sincerelyyours，LiHua

onepossibleversion

尽量挑出错误查看要点是否齐全句法是否正确，语法有无问题修订誊写，字迹工整仔细检查

句式积累1：

Theresultisasfollows：在表达多个原因的时候可以用此句来引导，这样所要表达的内容条理性更强。（精彩之处：结构清晰：总-分）句式2：72%ofthestudentsthinkthatschoolworktakesupmostoftheirtime,leavingverylittletimeforafter­classreading.（

精彩之处：动名词短语做状语，表达引起的结果）

句式3：Parentsareconcernedthattheirchildren'sattentionmaybetakenawaybythenon­schoolrelatedreading.（精彩之处：被动句，情调对象更加明确）

句式4：Meanwhile,...;besides,...（精彩之处：条理清晰，表达清晰）好词好句积累

拓展：foronething；foranotherfirstly,...;secondly,...;finally,...first,...;second,...what'smore/morover,...thefirstthingis...;thesecondthingis...

短语积累1：takesupmostoftheirtime占据他们的时间短语2：takeaway带走；拿走短语3：readasmuchastheywant尽可能多地读书，可以把read换成别的动词好词好句积累

好词好句积累表达观点方法积累：某人认为...sb.thinkthat...sb.isconcernedthat...sb.believet