（京津鲁琼专用）2023版高考英语二轮复习专题五书面表达层级二第一讲靓化词汇-学会运用高级表达教案

〔京津鲁琼专用〕2022版高考英语二轮复习专题五书面表达层级二第一讲靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达教案PAGE22-层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语；2.句式单一，单句较多；3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子；4.不会使用从句；5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语；6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。因此，平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场〞。第一讲靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略eq\a\vs4\al([策略1])“语〞众不同，防止人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。①(2022·北京卷书面表达)I’mverygladtoknowthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.→I’mmorethandelightedtoknowthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.②(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Ihopeyoucanconsidermyapplicationandallowmetobeavolunteer.→Ihopeyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsiderationandallowmetobeavolunteer.③(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)SoIcanserveasavolunteertoshowthevisitorsaroundthegalleryandIamsurethatIamfitforthejob.→SoIcanserveasavolunteertoshowthevisitorsaroundthegalleryandIamconvincedthatIamqualifiedforthejob.④(2022·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Asaresult,enoughpreparationisurgentlyneeded,includingpractice,nutritionandaperfectplan.→Asaconsequence,adequatepreparationisurgentlyneeded,includingpractice,nutritionandaperfectplan.⑤(2022·天津卷书面表达)Iwanttomakemyvoiceheard.→Ifeelanurgetomakemyvoiceheard.⑥OnlywhenyoudomorereadingandwritingcanyousucceedinimprovingyourEnglish.→OnlywhenyoudomorereadingandwritingcanyoumakeitinimprovingyourEnglish.⑦Toourgreatjoy,notonlyareourclasseslivelyandappealing,butourschoollifeisalsorichandcolorful.→Toourgreatjoy,notonlyareourclasseslivelyandattractive,butourschoollifeisalsorichandcolorful.⑧(2022·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolinthelastfewyears.Andthenewscamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.→Ourschoolhaswitnessedgreatchangesinthelastfewyears.Andwordcamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.eq\a\vs4\al([策略2])更新换代，防止重复写作时应尽量防止重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。①(2022·天津卷书面表达)Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouoncetookpartinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.→Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouonceparticipatedinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.②(2022·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Moreover，wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumbuilt，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.→Moreover，wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumsetup，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.③(2022·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Theteamwillholdmanyactivities，someofwhichwillappealtoyou，includingmanymatches.→Theteamwillholdarangeofactivities，someofwhichwillappealtoyou，includingmanymatches.eq\a\vs4\al([策略3])词汇运用，短语优先当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。①(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Besides,IknowEnglishandIcanexpressmyselffluentlyandclearly,whichhelpsmecommunicatewithourdistinguishedguestsefficiently.→Moreover,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandIcanexpressmyselffluentlyandclearly,whichhelpsmecommunicatewithourdistinguishedguestsefficiently.②(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Foronething,IknowChinesepaintingwell,formyfatherisaChinesepainter.→Foronething,IamquitefamiliarwithChinesepainting,formyfatherisaChinesepainter.③(2022·天津卷书面表达)Wedesperatelyneedyourhelp.→Wearedesperatelyinneedofyourhelp.④(2022·北京卷书面表达)Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentsinourschooltoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,whichprovedtobeextremelyrewarding.→Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentsinourschooltoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,whichturnedouttobeextremelyrewarding.eq\a\vs4\al([策略4])用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应防止反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。①(2022·北京卷书面表达)IfyoutakemyadviceyouaresuretohavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.→SolongasyoutakemyadviceyouareboundtohavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.②(2022·天津卷书面表达)Second，Iamtryingmybesttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.→Second，Iamsparingnoefforttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.③(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)IshouldsaysorryforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.→IshouldmakeanapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.二、写作的秘密武器——24个高级词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearputupwithunderstandmakesenseofdeveloppromoteconsidertakeintoaccount形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyinaflashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandaswellas①(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Itisofimportanceforyoutounderstandthecontent，Tangpoetry.→Itisofimportanceforyoutomakesenseofthecontent，Tangpoetry.→Itisofimportanceforyoutobeawareofthecontent，Tangpoetry.②(2022·北京卷书面表达)That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.→That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetteralternative.③Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbedifficult.→Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbechallenging.三、写作的顶级装备——27个加分词汇表达关注的名词attention,focus,concern表达争论的名词discussion,debate,argument表达现象的名词phenomenon表达优缺点的名词advantage,disadvantage,strength，weakness表达增长或下降的动词increase,accumulate,decrease,decline表达导致后果的动词短语resultin,leadto,bringabout,contributeto,giveriseto表达支持、反对的动词短语approveof,beinfavorof,objectto表达可能性的形容词likely表达有好处的形容词beneficial表达强调的副词particularly,especially①Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenonthesedays.这幅图显示了这些日子的一个常见现象。②TheInternethasbroughtaboutmanychangesintheworkplace.网络给工作场所带来了很多变化。③Ourteacherislikelytogetangrywhensheseesthedirtyfloor.我们的老师看到地面这么脏时，可能会发火。eq\a\vs4\al(Ⅰ)请用高级词汇替换以下句子中的加黑局部1．(2022·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)NowIwillinformyouofsomedetailedinformationtohelpyoufullyprepareforit.答案：make__full__preparations__for2．(2022·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Youarewelcometogiveperformancestoo.答案：as__well3．(2022·天津卷书面表达)Weweresointerestedinthecompetitionthatweformedagrouptotakepartinit.答案：keen__on4．(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.答案：more__than5．(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So，pleasespendsometimetakingabrieflookatthehistoryoftheTangDynasty，whichwillhelpyouprepareforyourclass.答案：Therefore;__make__preparations__for6．(2022·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)InordertogetabetterunderstandingofTangpoetry，IadviseyoutolearnsomebriefhistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.答案：acquire7．(2022·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Thecraftsmenwillshowvisitorshowtocutpaperintodifferentshapesonthespot.答案：various/a__range__of8．(2022·天津卷书面表达)Firstly，thefinalexamofthistermiscomingsoIambusypreparingforit.答案：To__begin__with;__around__the__corner9．(全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)MyjobapplicationformandpersonalresumehavebeenpreparedandIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmecorrectthem.答案：polish10．Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.答案：challengingeq\a\vs4\al(Ⅱ)习作升级练习假定你是李华，你想邀请你的朋友John在周六晚上去看科幻电影TheWanderingEarth，请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．发出邀请；2．介绍电影(主题：保护人类共同的地球家园；观众评价等)；3．请求回复。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[考生作文]DearJohn，Iknowthatyouareinterestedinsciencefiction,soI’dliketoinviteyoutoseeafilmthisweekend.TheWanderingEarthisbeingshownthesedays.Itspurposeistosavetheearthandprotectourcommonhome.ViewersdescribeitasabreakthroughoftheChinesefilmindustryandithasreceivedmanypositivereviewssofar.Shallwegotowatchthefilmifyouarefree?HowaboutthisSaturdayevening?PleasecontactmewhenyouarefreesothatIcanbooktheticketsaheadoftime.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua[我来提升]1．将文中加黑词汇升级(1)purpose→aim(2)many→a__wide__range__of(3)free→available(4)whenyouarefree→at__your__earliest__convenience(5)aheadoftime→in__advance2．将文中加黑句式升级(1)Knowing__that__you__are__interested__in__science__fiction,__I’d__like__to__invite__you__to__see__a__film__this__weekend.(分词作状语)(2)The__Wandering__Earth__is__being__shown__these__days,__whose__aim__is__to__save__the__earth__and__protect__our__common__home.(定语从句)[参考范文]_____________________