读后续写练习写作指导 讲义-高三英语二轮复习

读后续写练习写作指导讲义读后续写:阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwasanearlywintermorning.Joanwassleepingsoundlywhenthephoneranginthelivingroom.Sherolledover

andglancedattheclockonthewall—

itwasalreadynineo’clock.

Everyweekendmorning,hermotherhadtoworkpart-timeinthecafe.AlthoughJoanwasstillsleepy,sheknewshehadtogetup.Afterall,shedidn'texpectherbrotherMike,whowassleepinglikealog,tohearthephone.Shequietlywentovertothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthereceiver,ontheotherendcamethewarmheartedgreetings,

“Goodmorning,myDear!”

Recognizingthevoicefromherfather,Joanwasimmediatelysurroundedbyasenseofjoyandthesleepinesssweptaway.Joan'sfatherwasaseaman,whorarelycameback.Workingontheseawasreallyhard.

Borninanot-richfamily,JoanandMikefeltthestressoflifebuttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudents

throughouttheacademiccareerandactivelyinvolvedinschoolactivities.Theybecametheprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.“Goodmorning,Dad,what'sup?”

Joansaidinaneasytone.

“Ihavebeenverynicerecently,mybaby.Todayisyourmother'sbirthday,andIhaveorderedheracakeonlineanditshouldcometothehouseinoneandhalfanhour.Doremembertotakethecake.”Hearingherfather'swords,Joanfeltalittleashamed.HowshecouldforgetMum'sbirthday!

Shetookaglanceat

thedirtyclothespiledonthesofaandtheoilyfloorthathadn'tbeenmopped(拖地)forafewdays—Therewastwohoursbeforehermothercameback.Shecalculated(估计，预测)

theyhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforMum.Thinkingofthis,shefeltfullofexcitement.

“Well,Dad,nowI'mgoingtowakeMikeup.WewillgiveMumasurprise!”JoanhungupthephonewithDad,andhurriedlywenttoMike'sroomtosharehimherBigCleaningplan.AfterlisteningtoJoan,Mikereadilyacceptedheridea.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。TheBigCleaningplanbegan.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,

Mumcame

in.

“语言积累：1.翻身，翻滚(拓展)

rollover2.睡得很沉

sleeplikealog3.拿起话筒

pickupthereceiver4.全优A学生

straight-Astudents5.学校的骄傲和学生的羡慕对象theprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents6.用轻松的语调

inaneasytone7.把...堆积起来

pile...up堆满...

bepiledwith...参考范文：TheBigCleaningplanbegan.

Joancollected

theclothesfromsofaandthenputtheminthewaterofabasin.After

pouringin

somewashingliquids,shebegantowashthembyhand.

Realizingtheclotheswerecleanenough,

Joan

gentlysqueezedwateroutandhungthemtodry.Meanwhile,

Mikewasbusymoppingthefloor

backandforth

withallhisstrength,

reallyawareofwhathardworkhisMumhadathome!Theyhadjustfinishedthecleaningwhenthe

expressboy

cametothedoor.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,

Mumcame

in.

“Happybirthday,

Mum!”,

theygreeted

in

a

chorus.Confusedandsurprised,

Mumstoodfrozen.

WhenMumrealizedwhathadhappened,

awarmcurrentroseinherheart.Staringatthecleanfloorandthewashedclothes,

shecouldhardlycontainherexcitementandhuggedthem

tightly,

"ItisthebestbirthdaygiftIhaveeverhad!",

Mum

said

emotionally.

JustthenJoan

tookouthersmartphoneandtookahappyvideonamedMum'sBirthdayandsentittoDad.下水作文：TheBigCleaningplanbegan.

Tasksdivided,thetwoimmediatelygotdowntobusiness.Joancollectedallthedirtyclothespiledonthesofa,putthemintothesink,andleftthemsoakedinthewaterforawhile.Onebyone,shecleanedeverypiececarefullytomakesurethattheywerecleanenough,squeezedthewateroutandhungthemuptodry.Meanwhile,LittleMiketookgreatpains

tocleaneveryinchofthefloor,makingthefloorthoroughlyclean.Hopingthattheycouldfinishbeforemotherreturned,theydidthecleaningwithalltheirstrengthandenergy,whichmadethemextremelyexhausted.Despitethis,lookingatthedifferencetheyhadmade,theysmiled,imagininghowmotherwouldreacttoallthis.Andattheverymoment,thecakefatherhadorderedonlinearrived.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein.

“Happybirthday,mum!”

twovoicescamefrombehindthedoorandthenextmomenttwosmallfigurescamerunningintoherarms.Unpreparedandalittleconfused,motherstoodthere,frozen.Anotherlookathertwokids,thecleanedfloorandthewashedclothes,motherfinallyrealizedwhathadhappened,hereyeswatering.HoldingJoanandMiketightlyinherarms,motherfeltherheartfilledwithwarmth.Whenshewasshownthebirthdaycake,whichwasespeciallymeantforher,andwastoldthatitwasfather’sbirthdaygiftandwishes,shefeltshewastheluckiestpersonintheworld.Bathedinthemerrybirthdayatmosphereandherkids’

bestwishes,

shepickedupthephoneandcalledherhusband,whoassuredthemthathewouldreturnattheendofyear.类似素材巩固练：AMOTHER’S

DAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.

HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.

Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.

Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoff

thegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.参考范文Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.“Dad,sorry,itwassuchamess.”Jeffmurmured,lowering

hisheadinshame“Notimetomakemumabreakfastnow.”Jennacriedwithregretandguiltoverwhelmingherlikeendlesstides.

Pattingthemgentlyontheirshoulders,fathersaidinawarmvoice,“Darling,it'slovethatcounts.Let’sdothisagaintogether!”Totheirrelief,withtheg