第一部分 高分写作秘笈

第一部分高分写作秘笈书面表达高分标准1.写作内容：要点全，能根据要点适当发挥。2.语言表达：句式丰富且灵活，错误极少；能运用恰当的衔接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。3.逻辑结构：三段式，首尾点题，事例典型。语言流畅，意思清楚、连贯。4.卷面要求：书写工整，卷面整洁。勾画不超过三处，字体工整，大小合适。常考文体分类指导考情概述分析安徽中考的书面表达可知写作主要考查记叙文和说明文。考生在写作时，要依据不同的文体特点，搭建写作框架。技巧点拨三六三写作方法（总—分—总）1.开头三句：一句翻译提示（题目中已给出）；一句点题（对应题目）；一句解释观点。2.主体六句：记叙文：事情的起因两句、经过两句、结果两句；说明文：描述事物或解释原因的三个方面，用上顺序词First/Next/Finally等；议论文：论点1Firstofall,两句；论点2What’smore,两句；论点3Intheend,两句。3.结尾三句：一句谚语；一句再点题；一句喊口号。记叙文记叙文要求考生描述个人经历及感受。常见的写作模式为三段式。具体如下：第一段：点明主题（引出要介绍的人或事）①I’llneverforget…②ThepersonIlovemostis…③Istillrememberthedaywhen…④…isoneofmybestfriends,andwesharehappinessandsadnesstogether.⑤Lookingbacktothepastthreeyears,Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudy.⑥TherewerelotsofunforgettableexperiencesinmymemorywhenIwasinjuniorhighschool.第二段：描述事件（起因、经过和结果）起因：Ifoundithard/difficultformetodosth.Itwashard/difficultformetodosth.Ihadsometrouble/difficulty（in）doingsth.Ifelthopelessatsth.Ifeltdisappointedatsth.经过：findit/sth.+adj.+todosth.takepartin…takeone’sadvicespendtime/money（in）doingsth.haveagoodtalkwithsb.sb.advised/asked/helped/encouraged/taughtmetodosth.结果：Withone’shelp,Ihavemadegreatprogressin…Thankstosb.,Iworkedouttheproblemsuccessfully.Finally/Atlast/Intheend,Icameupwithgoodideas/waystosolvetheproblemof…第三段：表达感受（感情升华）I’mthankfulto…andI’lllearnfrom…I’mproudofmyselfbecause…I’velearnedalessonfrom……setsagoodexampleforme.ItwassuchaninterestingtripthatI’llneverforgetit.说明文说明文通常考查做法建议、计划安排和事物介绍。类别1做法建议第一段：点明主题（具体的事情）①It’simportantforusto…,buthow…Herearesomesuggestions.②It’snecessaryto…inourlife/study.Herearesomewaystodosth.③Therearesomethingsweneed/should/mustdoinordertodosth.④Howcanweprotecttheenvironment/keephealthy/…?Herearemysuggestions.第二段：分点陈述①Firstly/Tobeginwith,wecan/should/hadbetterdosth.②Secondly/What’smore/Besides,it’sourdutytodosth.③Finally/Lastbutnotleast,it’sagoodideatodosth.第三段：再次点题（表达期待）①Ifyoufollowmyadviceabove,you’lldosth.②Ihopetheadviceabovewillbehelpful/usefultoyou.③Onlyinthesewayscanweliveabetterandhealthierlife.④Inaword,aslongaswe…,wewilldosth.⑤Ifwekeepdoingthesesmallthings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stakeactionfromnowon.类别2计划安排第一段：点明具体活动①Asthesummervacationiscoming,I’vemadeaplanforit.②Whynotcometosp.?Ihaveagoodplan.③We’regoingonatripto…thisSunday.Hereismytripplan.第二段：具体活动安排①It/Theactivitywill/isgoingtobeheldin/on+时间/地点②Ourschoolwillhave/hold…on/at+时间/地点③Wewill/aregoingtohavealotofactivities,suchas+活动④Onthefirst/second/…day,wearegoingtodosth.第三段：表达希望①I’msureI’llhaveameaningfulsummerholiday.②Inaword,Ihopeallofuscouldenjoyahappyandmeaningfulholiday/weekend.③I’mlookingforwardtothetrip/summervacation/…..................常考话题分类背诵编者按：本栏目针对安徽中考的高频话题给出优质范文，建议学生背诵。文中黑体部分为写作中常用的高级词句；铺色部分为写作中常用的衔接词；划线部分可根据写作内容替换。范文后列出此类话题下适用的作文题目/话题。考生在写作时，可套用范文的框架和词句。类别1写人叙事（10年3考）第1篇（演讲稿）（110words）IamthebestHello,everyone.I’mgladtostandhereandmakeaspeechtoyou.TodaymytopicisIamthebest.Everyoneisbornwiththeirowntalentsandadvantages.Iamgoodatmakingfriends.ThatmakesmefeelIamthebest.①Firstofall,Ienjoytellingfunnyjokesandinterestingstoriestomakepeoplearoundmehappy.②Next,Ioftenoffertohelppeopleinneedandcareabouttheirfeelings.③What’smore,Icansharemyideasfreelywithmyclassmatesandlistentotheiropinionspatiently.Alltheseabovehelpmeunderstandothersbetterandgetonwellwiththem.Ibelieveifwemakegooduseofourgoodpointsandtreatotherswithhonestyandlove,wewillbethebestofourselves.Thanksforlistening!开头：开门见山，点明演讲的主题中间：阐述个人优点，并举例说明：①~③结尾：个人优点带来的好处【本文适用于以下作文题目】1.HowIChanged 3.MyBestFriend2.WhyAmISoPopularwithEveryone 4.IBecomeConfident第2篇（自荐信）（102words）DearSir/Madam,IamgladtoseeyournoticeVolunteersWanted,andIlearnaboutsomeforeignstudentswillvisitSansuTemplethisSundaymorning.I’mwillingtobeavolunteer.①Firstofall,letmeintroducemyselftoyou.②I’mamiddleschoolstudentaged15.③I’manoutgoinggirl/boywhocanalwaysgetonwellwithothers.④Asforthetime,IwillbeavailablethisSunday.⑤Besides,myoralEnglishissoexcellentthatIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithforeignfriends.⑥Moreimportantly,Iknowalotaboutthelocalculture.I’msureIcanhelpthemhaveabetterunderstandingofit.IbelieveIcanmanageitif