初中英语九年级主题作文【知识框架+佳作赏析+能力提升】成长与变化

主题：成长与变化导读本综合训练的主题是成长与变化.这一主题贴近同学们的学习和生活,能让同学们有话可说、有感而发.因此,同学们可从自身的角度用英语描述一下自己在生活、学习、人际交往等方面所取得的进步等,体现自己的成长与变化；也可谈谈自身成长过程中经验、知识、价值观等的形成,或者他人的成长变化、家乡的变化等.题目回放一同学们在初中三年的生活和学习中都见证了自己的成长.请以ThegreatestchangeIhaveevermade为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的最大变化.写作要点：1.你的最大变化是什么?2.发生这个变化的原因是什么?3.变化后你有什么感想?写作要求：1.文中不要出现你的真实姓名和校名；2.词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁：介绍自己的成长变化,属于记叙文.2审内容：紧扣写作要点：你的变化、原因、感受.3审时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：开篇点题,简单介绍自己成长过程中最大的变化是什么.中间：主体段落可以通过自己的亲身经历详细叙述这一变化的内容、过程、原因和结果.结尾：总结这一变化对自己的影响及自己的感悟.段落素描1.Firstparagraph:Aswegrowup,wemakechanges.Asforme,thegreatestchangeIhaveevermadeis...(...)2.Thebody:WhenIwasalittlechild,I...Astimewentby,Icameto...Atpresent,...(...)3.Lastparagraph:Asthesayinggoes,...Ihavebenefitedalotfrom...(...)范本淬炼ThegreatestchangeIhaveevermadeAswegrowup,wemakechanges.①Formyownpart,thegreatestchangeIhaveevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.WhenIwasalittlechild,Ihadnointerestinreadingbecauseitwasboringinmymind.Mymother,however,oftenreadstoriestome,andboughtbooksforme.Astimewentby,I②cametolikespendingsometimeinreading.Atpresent,readingisoneofmyfavorites.Whilereading,I③feelasiftalkingwithawiseperson.Also,readingisafantasticwayformetospendmysparetime.Asthesayinggoes,“Booksaretheladderofhumanprogress.”④Themoreweread,themoreprogresswewillmake.Ihave⑤benefitedalotfromreading,andIwillkeepthehabitofreading.①formyownpart,就我自己而言.②cometodosth.逐渐开始做某事.③feelasif...,感觉好像·....④Themore...,themore...,越···...就越··..·⑤benefitalotfrom...,从···..·中受益颇多.亮点点评1.文章开头引入主题即“我”的最大变化,中间段落展开论述,尾段总结并发表感想.全文内容完整,结构清晰.2.文中WhenIwasalittlechild,Astimewentby,Asthesayinggoes等使用得体,使文章衔接自然,表达流畅.3.文中使用了状语从句,while加现在分词充当时间状语以及副词和形容词的比较级等丰富句式,使文章句式灵活多变.4.文中用语丰富,如使用了fallinlovewith,havenointerestin,asif,benefitalot等短语,增强了文章的感染力.题目回放二在人的成长过程中,或许一句话就会改变一个人的一生,尤其是一些广泛流传的名言警句.你最喜欢的谚语、格言、名言警句是什么?它对你的成长有什么深刻的影响?请以你最喜欢的一条谚语、格言或名言警句为题,写一篇英语作文.写作要点：1.你最喜欢的一条谚语、格言或名言警句；2.你对这条谚语、格言或名言警句的理解；3.能体现这条谚语、格言或名言警句的个人经历；4.你的个人感悟.写作要求：1.以一条谚语、格言或名言警句为题目；2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等相关信息；3.词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁：这是一篇对谚语、格言或名言警句的理解及感悟的文章,属于议论文,可以夹叙夹议.2审内容：首先要写出一条谚语、格言或名言警句,然后写出对它的理解,以及能体现它的个人经历,最后谈谈个人的感悟.3审时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：用一句谚语、格言或名言警句开头,引出主题.中间：主体段落具体叙述对这条谚语、格言或名言警句的理解,并叙述能体现它的个人经历.结尾：叙述自己的感悟.段落素描1.Firstparagraph:Myfavoritesayingis...(...)2.Thebody:Thissayingshowsaperson'sattitudetowards...Everyonewantsto...,butto...,heorshemust...Once,I...Atfirst,I...Later,I...(...)3.Lastparagraph:NowIhavelearnedalotfromthesaying.Iamawarethat...(...)范本淬炼Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.Myfavoritesayingis①thatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.Thissayingshowsaperson's②attitudetowardschallengesordifficulties.Everyonewantstosucceed,butto③achievesuccess,heorshemustfacethedifficultiesbravelyand④overcomethemwisely.Once,Iwastoldtogiveaspeech.Atfirst,Iwasnervous,andwantedto⑤giveup.Later,Iwasencouragedbythissaying,⑥whichremindedmetohaveastrongwillandfacethechallengebravely.NowIhavelearnedalotfromthesaying.Iam⑦awarethatnothingisimpossibleifwehaveastrongwill.①that引导表语从句.②attitudetowardschallengesordifficulties,对挑战或困难的态度.③achievesuccess,取得成功.④overcome,克服.⑤giveup,放弃.⑥which引导非限制性定语从句.⑦aware,意识到.亮点点评1.开篇直接点出自己最喜欢的谚语,中间主体段落对该谚语加以解释并结合自己的事例佐证它对自己的影响,尾段总结了自己的深刻感悟.整篇文章内容充实,结构合理.2.文中灵活运用被动语态、非限制性定语从句、状语从句等丰富句式,为文章添彩.3.文中once,atfirst,later,now等用语使上下文内容连贯,前后连接紧密.4.文中用词丰富,如使用了attitudetowards,challenge,achievesuccess,overcome,nervous,giveup,remind等用语,而bravely,wisely等副词更精准表达了思想情感.素材宝库1.好词妙语learntotakeresponsibilities学会负责任dependonsb.'sstudyhabits取决于某人的学习习惯makegreatchanges发生很大变化inthepastthreeyears在过去三年里becomemoreindependent变得更独立anattitudetowardschallengesordifficulties对挑战或困难的态度achievesuccess取得成功beawarethat...意识到··....feelasif...感觉好像··....2.提分佳句Jimhasmadeagreaterchangethanbefore,andhasbecomeoutgoingandactive.吉姆比以前有了更大变化,变得外向而活跃了.WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwassoshythatIdidnotdaretospeakEnglishinfrontofmyclassmates.NowIamnotshyanymore.当我在八年级的时候,我太害羞以至于不敢在同学们面前说英语.现在我不再害羞.Ihatedplayingthepiano,butnowIloveit.以前我讨厌弹钢琴,但现在我喜欢它.NowIworkmuchharderthanIusedto.现在我工作比以前努力得多.AnimportantchangeisthatIhavelearnedtotakeresponsibilities.一个重要的改变是,我已经学会了负责任.Whetherornotyoucandoitwelldependsonyourstudyhabits.你是否能做好它,取决于你的学习习惯.IamgladthatIhavemadegreatchangesinthepastthreeyears.我很高兴我在过去的三年里发生了很大变化.Themoreyouread,thefasteryouwillbe.你读得越多,就会越快.Ihavebecomemoreindependent,whichisthegreatestchangeformethisyear.我变得更独立,这是今年我最大的变化.写作预热1.句子改错1)Mysisterdidnotlikedrawingatallbefore,but,sheiscrazyaboutitthesedays.____________________________________________________________________________________________2)Onweekends,Iusuallyspendmuchtimereadbooksinsteadofplaycomputergames.____________________________________________________________________________________________3)Thanksforthevoluntaryactivity,Igainedmuchexperienceincaringforothers.____________________________________________________________________________________________4)IbelievethatIhavethepowertobeabetterpersoninthefuturebyincreasingmyknowledges.____________________________________________________________________________________________5)IsureIwillmakemydreamcometrue.____________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1)but后逗号去掉2)read改为reading;play改为playing3)Thanksfor改为Thanksto4)knowledges改为knowledge5)sure改为amsure2.句式变换1)Ilikethesechanges.Theyhavemademeabetterperson.(改为含非限制性定语从句的复合句)____________________________________________________________________________________________2)Iammuchhappiernow,andIworkevenharderthanIusedto.(句子仿写)____________________________________________________________________________________________3)Nothingisimpossibleifyouarewillingtodoit.Daybyday,Ihavebeguntobelieveit.(改为含宾语从句的复合句)____________________________________________________________________________________________4)ThegreatestchangethatIhavemadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.(用fallinlovewith仿写句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________5)Ihaveafriend.Shealwaysencouragesmetostudyhard.(改为含定语从句的复合句)____________________________________________________________________________________________6)IfailedintheEnglishexam.Ifailedinthemathexam.(用notonly...butalso...连接)Ifailed_________________intheEnglishexam____________________inthemathexam.7)Theboywastooyoungtogotoschool.(用so...that改写句子)Theboywas_____________________________hecould____________________gotoschool.8)Tomistallerthananyotherstudentinhisclass.(改为同义句)Tomis_________________studentinhisclass.9)Whenwilltheycome?Doyouknow?(合并为复合句)Doyouknow_____________________________come?10)Sheisbusywithherhomework.(改为同义句)Sheisbusy_________herhomework.答案：1)Ilikethesechanges,whichhavemademeabetterperson.2)Istudymuchhardernow,andIhavemadegreaterprogressthanIusedto.(开放性答案)3)Daybyday,Ihavebeguntobelievethatnothingisimpossibleifwearewillingtodoit.4)Iusedtohatemath,butnowIfallinlovewithitbecauseithelpsmealotinmydailylife.(开放性答案)5)Ihaveafriendwhoalwaysencouragesmetostudyhard.6)not;only;but;also7)so;young;that;not8)the;tallest9)when;they;will10)doing实战练笔I.改变才能有收获,才能成熟,才能成长；不断改变会让我们的人生更精彩和更充实.请你以ThechangeIwanttomakemost为题,根据以下写作要点写一篇90词左右的英语短文.写作要点：1.你最想如何改变；2.你为什么想这样改变；3.你对此改变的期待.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：ThechangeIwanttomakemostAtmyschool,Iwanttochangesomeofmystudyhabits.ThechangeIwanttomakemostistocutdownthetimeforwatchingTV.IalwaysspendmorethantwohoursadaywatchingTV.Infact,IturnontheTVwheneverIhavetime.Now,IwanttochangethishabitbecauseIamawarethatspendingtoomuchtimewatchingTVhasabadeffectonmystudies,andisbadformyeyes.Tochangethishabit,Iwillpayattentiontomoremeaningfulthings,suchasreadingandsports.IbelievethatIwillbeabletodothisinthenearfuture.II.现在同学们崇拜的偶像有所不同.你的观点是什么?你崇拜谁?你的偶像对你的成长有什么影响?请自拟标题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________