初中英语九年级主题作文【知识框架+佳作赏析+能力提升】谈论规则

主题：谈论规则导读本单元的主题是用英语谈论规则,可使用含情态动词的被动语态.通过对校规、家规等规则的讨论,同学们会对规则产生敬畏感,从而做一个懂规则、守规矩的公民.介绍规则以让人了解,属于说明文范畴；议论和评价规则,属于议论文范畴；以书信形式谈论规则,属于应用文范畴.可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如Schoolrules,Familyrules,Libraryrules,Cinemarules,Laboratoryrules等等.题目回放假如你是李明,你的美国朋友Mike向你询问你校的校规.请你根据以下要点和要求,用英语给他回复一封邮件.写作要求：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；2.自拟标题,词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁：本文要求通过回复邮件的形式介绍校规,属于应用文.2审内容：着重写有关着装、考勤、行为安全等的规则.3审时态：主体时态为一般现在时.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：回复邮件的问候语及点题.中间：至少从三个方面介绍校规.结尾：谈谈自己对校规的感受.段落素描1.Firstparagraph:Howarethingsgoingthesedays?Letme...(...)2.Thebody:Firstofall,wemust...Thishelpsus...Second,...(...)3.Lastparagraph:Eventhough...Ibenefitalot...(...)Yours,LiMing范本淬炼AOurschoolrulesDearMike,Howarethingsgoingthesedays?Iamgladthatyou①areinterestedinourschoolrules.Letmeintroducesomeofthem.First,weshouldgettoschoolontimeandtakea②30-minutereadingoftextbooksbeforeclassinthemorning.③Whatismore,weneedtocleantheclassroomeverydayandkeepitclean.Inaddition,we④aresupposedtolistencarefullyinclassandfinishourhomeworkafterschool.Ithinkthattheseschoolruleshelpus⑤developourgoodhabits.Doyouthinkso?Yours,LiMing①beinterestedin,对······感兴趣.②30-minute,三十分钟的,这是个复合形容词.③whatismore,此为衔接语,能使文章过渡自然.④besupposedtodosth.,应当做某事.⑤developourgoodhabits,养成我们的好习惯.亮点点评1.整体框架设计和段落布局合理,思路清晰,层次感较强.2.衔接自然顺畅,使用了first,whatismore,inaddition等衔接语.3.运用了较多近义词,如should,need,besupposedto,以避免词汇重复.BOurschoolrulesDearMike,Howareyougettingalongthesedays?Iamgladtoknowthatyou①showagreatinterestinourschoolrules.Letmeintroducesomeofthemtoyou.Firstofall,wemustwearschooluniformseveryday.Thishelpsus②focusourattentiononourstudies.Anotherpointworthmentioningisthatwemustgettoschoolontime.③Thankstothisrule,Ihavedevelopedagoodhabitofgettingupearly.Besides,wearesupposedtogreetourteacherswhenwemeetthem.Inaddition,we④arerequiredtodoourhomeworkcarefullyandhanditinontime.Indeed,someoftheseschoolrulesarestrict,but⑤Ibelievethatifweobeytheserules,wewillmakeprogresseverydayinourschoolwork.Iamlookingforward⑥toknowingsomeofyourschoolrules.Yours,LiMing①showagreatinterestin,对······显示出很大兴趣.②focusourattentionon,集中我们的注意力于.③thanksto...,多亏④berequiredto,被要求,此为被动结构.⑤Ibelieve后接宾语从句,表明自己的观点.⑥to为介词,其后knowing为动名词.亮点点评1.本文与上篇文章相比,除能紧扣主题外,内容更加饱满,不仅描述校规,还能表达自己的感受及遵守校规给自己带来的变化.2.衔接自然,衔接语firstofall,anotherpointworthmentioning,thanksto...,besides,inaddition等运用自如,行文流畅.3.句式多变,多处使用从句,如宾语从句、表语从句、状语从句.4.词汇丰富,如使用introduce...to,focussb.'sattentionon,thanksto,developagoodhabitof,berequiredto,lookforwardto等亮点词汇.佳作赏析AMyfamilyrulesThereare①anumberofrulesinmyfamily.Letmetellyouaboutthem.First,myparentsdonotallowmetogooutatnight;②otherwise,theywillgetangrywithme.Second,onmyschooldays,IcannotwatchTVafterschoolbecausemymotherthinksitmayaffectmystudies.Third,myparentsdonot③allowmetogetmyearspierced.Whatismore,Ineedtodosomehouseworkinmyfreetime.However,Iamallowedtochoosemyownclothes,andIcantakepartinsomeactivities④organizedbymyschool.Inmymind,thefamilyrules⑤reflectmyparents'loveforme.Iwilltrymybesttofollowtheserules.①anumberof,许多.②otherwise,否则.③allowsb.todosth.允许某人做某事.④organized...是过去分词短语充当后置定语,修饰activities.⑤reflect,反映.亮点点评1.本文整体结构清晰,段落分明,叙事有条理,内容充实.2.一些简洁衔接语的使用,如first,otherwise,whatismore,however等,使文章过渡自然,行文流畅.3.词汇丰富,使用了anumberof,otherwise,getangrywithsb.,affect,allowsb.todo,pierce,choose,takepartin,organize,reflect,follow等用语,增强了文章的生动性和表现力.BRulesforthezoo①Ifyouarereadytovisitazoo,youneedtoknowsomeoftherulesforthezoo.Firstly,you②arenotallowedtotalkloudlyinthezoobecauseitmayfrightentheanimals.Secondly,takingphotosislikelytodoharmtotheanimals,③especiallyusingtheflash,sopleasedonotdothat.Thirdly,youmustnotfeedtheanimalswithyourownfood.Mostimportantly,youmustnottouchtheanimals,fortheymayhurtyou.Ibelievethatitisourdutytoobeytheserules,④whichareveryimportantinkeepingussafe.①开篇用if引导状语从句,简洁提出文章主题.②beallowedtodosth.,被允许做某事.③especially,尤其是.④which引导非限制性定语从句.亮点点评1.本文段落设计合理.开头和结尾紧扣主题,主体段落集中说明主题,逻辑性较强.2.运用了一些衔接语,如firstly,secondly,thirdly,mostimportantly等,使文章衔接自然.3.句式丰富,条件状语从句、原因状语从句、宾语从句等运用得当.COurschoolrulesEveryschoolhasitsownrulesforstudentstofollow,and①sodoesourschool.Firstofall,wemustgettoschoolbefore7:30inthemorningfromMondaytoFriday.Inaddition,wemustwearschooluniformseveryday,②whichhelpsusfocusourattentiononourstudies.Besides,wecannotrunafterandfightwitheachotherintheschool.Ibelievethatifallofusfollowtheschoolrules,wewilldevelopgoodhabits,and③createahighly-effectivelearningenvironment,①so引导倒装句.②which引导非限制性定语从句.③createahighly-effectivelearningenvironment.创建高效的学习环境.亮点点评1.本文框架结构合理,点题后介绍规则,发表看法.2.行文流畅,过渡自然,使用了firstofall,inaddition,besides等衔接语.3.句式丰富,灵活运用倒装句、定语从句、宾语从句、条件状语从句等句式,显示了作者较强的语言驾驭能力.4.用词考究,运用了一些亮点词汇和短语,如runafter,fightwith,developgoodhabits,effective等,为本文增添了亮点.素材宝库1.好词妙语hearfromsb.收到某人的来信introducesth.tosb.向某人介绍某事Whatimpressedmemostwas...让我印象最深的是·.....firstofall首先inaddition另外Anotherpointworthmentioningisthat...另外值得一提的是···.··beallowedtodosth.被允许做某事beexpectedtodosth.被期盼做某事concentrateon专注于makeprogress取得进步bestrictwithsb.对某人严格2.提分佳句Howarethingsgoingthesedays?最近情况怎么样?Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinourschoolrules.我很高兴地了解到你对我们的校规感兴趣.Letmeintroducesomeoftheschoolrulestoyou.让我给你介绍一些校规.Wehavebenefitedalotfromtheschoolrules,althoughsomeofthemarestrict.我们从这些校规中受益颇多,尽管有些规定很严苛.Wearesupposedtowearschooluniformsinsteadofourownclothesonschooldays.我们上学时应穿校服而非我们自己的服装.Thankstotheseschoolrules,Ihavemademuchprogressinmyschoolwork.多亏了这些校规,我在学业上取得了很大进步.Itcandriveustoconcentrateonourstudies.它可促使我们专注于我们的学习.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.我期盼不久就收到你的来信.写作预热1.句子改错1)Howareyouthisdays?____________________________________________________________________________________________2)Therearemanyrulesthatwemustfollowtheminourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________3)Keepschoolrulesisimportantforusstudents.____________________________________________________________________________________________4)Itmakeusdevelopgoodhabits.____________________________________________________________________________________________5)Wemustwearschooluniformseveryday.____________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1)this改为these2)去掉them3)Keep改为Keeping4)make改为makes5)everyday改为everyday2.句式变换1)Wehavemanystrictschoolrules.Wehavetofollowthem.(改成含定语从句的复合句)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2)Teenagersareallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.(用beallowedto仿写句子)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3)Ialwaysanswertheteachers'questionsactively.Idon'tkeepsilentinclass.(用insteadof连成一句话)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4)规则在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用.(用playanimportantrole翻译成英语)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5)Ithinkweshouldhelpourparentswiththehousework.(用holdtheviewthat改写句子)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1)Wehavemanystrictschoolrulesthatwehavetofollow.2)Thegirlswereallowedtowearskirts.3)Ialwaysanswertheteachers'questionsactivelyinsteadofkeepingsilentinclass.4)Rulesplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.5)Iholdtheviewthatweshouldhelpourparentswiththehousework.实战练笔父母是我们最亲近的人,但他们给我们制定了家规,其中有些规则还较为严格,以至于我们有时与他们沟通时会遇到困难.请根据以下提示,以Howtocommunicatewithourparents为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文写作要点：1.多与父母沟通；2.学会聆听；3.当与父母发生不同意见时,保持冷静.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________