四级写作之漫画作文辅导

四级写作之漫画作文辅导第1页/共92页写作概述实际样例参考运用（模考分析+下发资料）写作语法黄金结构高分策略之词汇替换高分策略之句型多样化评分标准及建议第2页/共92页概述

第3页/共92页写听读译30mins15%30mins35%40mins35%30mins15%大学英语四级试卷的结构第4页/共92页你知道四级的答题顺序吗?作文段落翻译听力长篇阅读仔细阅读在答题纸1上作答,完成后交答题纸1.剩下题目在答卡2上作答.选词填空第5页/共92页全国大学英语四级考试答题卡1第6页/共92页全国大学英语四级考试答题卡2第7页/共92页1.审题（1-2mins)2.构思提纲(3-5mins，确定主题)3.写文章(20mins)4.修改检查(5mins)写作概述

第8页/共92页Stepspre-writing:仔细阅读题干，确定写作主题Para.1:describethepicture简要描述漫画（who,what,when,where…）开门见山TIPS:1.写作的directions部分虽然给出了大致的主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述，切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论！！！（模考作文问题一）第9页/共92页

TIPS:2.漫画的内容一定要符合图片，切忌无中生有！！！（模考作文问题二）

TheboythoughtdeeplyTheboyfeelashemedandsaysnothing.Theboystopsplayingandlearningalot.Theboyismakingaplanandthegrandpaisencourainghim

第10页/共92页para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message

揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。第11页/共92页Para3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建议，重申观点主题句(b)对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向第12页/共92页EXAMPLES主题句：youshouldconfirmeveryappointmentwhenyoudobusinessinUS.主题句复述：InbusinesscircleinUS,businessmanusuallymakessureeveryappointment.2.主题句：To

perceiveismoreimportantthantojudge.主题句复述句：Itis

ofgreatimportancetoperceivetojudge.ORToperceiveisnolessimportantthantojudge.第13页/共92页实例运用+模考分析第14页/共92页模考一第15页/共92页一、语法问题1.时态，人称，单复数的混用，不统一。eg:1.Theboyplaycomputergamesandhisgrandpawatchhim.2.Playcomputerisausualactivityforuniversitystudents.3.Lifeplanmusthasadestination4.Ifsomeonedon'thavealifeplan...2.词性的使用错误

eg:1.ifyouhaveaplan,youshouldworkhardly.2.sosheissucceedatlast/ayoungpeoplecan'tbesuccess3.weshouldfacedifficultbravely4.wehavemanychooses第16页/共92页3.Therebe句型使用错误eg:1.Therearemanyyoungpeoplewastetimetodosomeboringthings.2.Therehaveaprobleminthefutureifwedon'thavelifeplan.4.被动语态的使用错误eg:1.asshowsinthepicture,theboyis...2.everyonehasalifeplan,maybenotwrite...3.ThefirstConfuciusInstitutebuildin20044.confuciusinstitutessettospreadchineseculture.

第17页/共92页4.run-onsentences串句无法理解的句子EG:1.Therearemanythisphenomenons2.ifeverythingisalie,wearen'tneedalifeplan.3.Otherpeoplemakingalifeplanfromsth.4.Asayoungpeople,weshouldhave....

第18页/共92页二、佳句欣赏1.Therefore,wearesupposedtomakealifeplanfromnowontomakeourlifemoremeangingfulandcolorful(章笑盈)2.AsfarasIamconcerned,makingalifeplanisveryimportantforyoungpeople.(李程鹏)3.Itisobviousthatthedrawerofthepicturewantstodrawourattentiontowardsthatweshouldmakealifeplanfromanearlyage.Makingalifeplanshouldbeattachedgreatsignificancetobyourselves.(赵建宏)4.Onlyyoumakealifeplananddevoteyourselfintoit,canyouhavenoregretwhenyouareold.(卞涵)5.Weareeasytobocomeconfusedwithourlife.Makethelifeplanrightnowandfocusonthethingsyouwanttodobecausetimedoesn'twaitforanyone.(钱林豪)第19页/共92页三、看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：

漫画信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”确定写作主题：年轻人应该做好人生规划以及人生规划的重要性的原因第20页/共92页2.作文提纲（结构）第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…）:爷爷教导孙子：如果年老的时候写自传，你会看到自己去过哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年轻时候写，你就会知道你将去哪里(willseewhereyouaregoing)。第21页/共92页Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate第22页/共92页第二段：解释图画深刻含义（揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第23页/共92页第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。

Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearly

soastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinthisway,

canouruniversitytimeisrewardinginthelongrun.

第24页/共92页实际样例参考运用（见资料）第25页/共92页Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.四级写作新题型--看图作文

2013.06真题第26页/共92页第27页/共92页看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：

漫画信息“expressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig”确定写作主题：做任何大事前都应该从小事做起（一屋不扫，何以扫天下。）第28页/共92页2.作文提纲（结构）第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…）:父子之间的对话，儿子关注核废料处理（disposalofnuclearwastes）,父亲认为要从小事做起（emptythedustbinfirst）；第29页/共92页DoingBigThingsStartsfromDoingSmallOnesSAMPLE1

Asisvividlyrevealedinthepictureabove,theboyexpresseshisworriesaboutthedisposalofnuclearwastes,whilethefathertellshimtoemptythedustbinintheroomfirst.Thepictureremindsusof

anoldChinesesaying—Ifyoudon’tliketodotrivialthingslikecleaningyourroom,it’simpossibleforyoutoundertakeanyimportanttask.第30页/共92页SAMPLE2Wecanseefromthecartoonthatthereisafathertalkingwithhisson.Havingheardhisson’swordsthat“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearweapon.”Thefatherrepliesthat“Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything”andpointsthegarbagecanbesidehim.

Funnyandcommonastheconversationsounds,itreflectsthatthefatherintendstoadvisehissontodosmallthingsbeforeundertakingbig.

第31页/共92页作文提纲（结构）第二段：解释图画深刻含义（揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。努力做好小事可以培养做大事所需要的优良品质（developgoodqualitiesneededundertakingimportanttasks）;第32页/共92页

Undoubtedly,thesymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedinthepictureshouldbethatitisvitalandnecessarytodealwithtrivialthings.Doingsmallthingswellmayhelpusdevelopthegoodqualitiesneededinundertakingimportanttasks,whichlaysasolidfoundationforourfuturedevelopment.Smallthingswouldoftenmakethedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Wesurelyknowthatthewantofahorseshoenailmaycauseakingdomtobelost.Therefore,whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,themostimportantthingliesindoingeverytrivialthingwell.第33页/共92页

Definitely,doingsmallthingsisthefirststepofsuccessandwilllayrootfordoingsomethingbig.Bydoingsomethingsmall,weareabletoaccumulateexperience,masterskillsandtrainourselvestobemorepatient.Inotherwords,wecanbewellpreparedforfurtherchallengesinthecourseoffulfillingsmallthings.Bycontrast,thosewhodesiretodosomethingbigatoncewillconstantlybehauntedbydisappointment,frustrationsorevenfailures,aswithopportunities-“somethingbig”-showingup,theycanhardlyseizethembecauseofthelackofexperienceandconfidencewhichstemsfromdoingsmallthings.第34页/共92页作文提纲（结构）第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。

实现做大事的目标，不仅需要有雄心壮志（thegreatambition）,还需要有从小事踏踏实实做起的实践精神（thepracticalspirit）.

Sample1：Inoneword,toachievegoalsneedsnotmerelythegreatambition,

but

thepracticalspiritofdealingwithtrivialthings.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakethehighesteminence.第35页/共92页

Sample2：

Inconclusion,undernocircumstancesshouldweundervaluethepowerofdoingsmallthings.Instead,weshouldregardsmallthingsasthesourceofexperience,skillsandtheprerequisiteofsuccess.“Greatachievementonlybelongstothosewhocandosmallthingsperfectly.”Aristotlealsousedtosay.第36页/共92页Let'shaveatry第37页/共92页Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.PRACTICE1第38页/共92页第39页/共92页看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：

漫画“expressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions”确定写作主题：Totakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.(未雨绸缪)第40页/共92页2.作文提纲（结构）第41页/共92页

Thepicturefocusesonapersonwhoisstandinginfrontofthesea,watchingthetiderising.Abovethepicture,thereisathought-provokingsentencewhichtellsusthatweshouldtakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示图画深刻含义（揭示主题）。第42页/共92页第二段：针对图画所表达的观点（主题）进行举例论证

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateshouldhebelaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第43页/共92页WritingTechniques:

AGeneralPointSupportedbyExamples

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateshouldhebelaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第44页/共92页第三段：总结全文。

Allinall,itisadvisableforanyonetomakeprecautionarypreparationsfortheunexpecteddifficultiesordisastersinlifeinadvance.第45页/共92页Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofanglewhenpeopleobservingsomething.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.PRACTICE2第46页/共92页第47页/共92页看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：

漫画信息“expressyourviewsontheimportanceofanglewhenpeopleobservingsomething”确定写作主题：应该从不同角度来观察事物。第48页/共92页2.作文提纲（结构）第49页/共92页

Thepictureshowsusthatintheeyesofthemanneartheapple,theappleisofgoodquality,whiletothemanwhoisfarfromtheapple,theappleisofbadqualitywithawormintheflesh.Itistheanglesratherthanthedistancethatdifferentiatethewitnessoftheapple’squality.Thepictureremindsusof

aphilosophicalview—Observingthesamefromdifferentanglesisamust.第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示图画深刻含义（揭示主题）。第50页/共92页第二段：进行解释和说明论证。

Itisimportantandverynecessarytoobserveorevaluateathingfromdifferentangles.Forexample,sometimeswhenyouthinkyouareunhappy,toothersitmaybethatyouaresurroundedbyhappiness.Therefore,differentconclusionswouldbearrivedatwhenweviewathingfromdifferentangles.第51页/共92页第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文）。

Itisknowntoallthatacoinhastwosides.Ascollegestudent,weshouldtrytolearnfromsomeoneelse’spositions.Onlyinthiswaycanwebecomeamoreconsiderateandperfectperson.第52页/共92页ObservingtheSameThingfromDifferentAngles第53页/共92页

Thepictureshowsusthatintheeyesofthemanneartheapple,theappleisofgoodquality,whiletothemanwhoisfarfromtheapple,theappleisofbadqualitywithawormintheflesh.Itistheanglesratherthanthedistancethatdifferentiatethewitnessoftheapple’squality.Thepictureremindsusof

aphilosophicalview—Observingthesamefromdifferentanglesisamust.Itisimportantandverynecessarytoobserveorevaluateathingfromdifferentangles.Forexample,sometimeswhenyouthinkyouareunhappy,toothersitmaybethatyouaresurroundedbyhappiness.Therefore,differentconclusionswouldbearrivedatwhenweviewathingfromdifferentangles.

Itisknowntoallthatacoinhastwosides.Ascollegestudent,weshouldtrytolearnfromsomeoneelse’spositions.Onlyinthiswaycanwebecomeamoreconsiderateandperfectperson.第54页/共92页写作语法黄金结构1.notonly,butalso2.Itis+adjforsbtodosth3.Therebe句型4.强调句和倒装句的灵活使用5.被动语态（模考写作翻译出现大问题）6.状语从句7.定语从句8.插入语的灵活运用第55页/共92页

插入语可以是时间，地点，衔接词，同位语，强调语，修饰语，同义复指或从句。使句子更有跳跃感和地道。

Hefinallycame,inthelastminute,tofulfillhistask.Drought,inSouthwestChina,scorchedearth—ourmotherland.Tourism,however,givesrisetoanumberofproblems.Tsunami,adestructivenaturaldisaster,hitChilewithoutanywarning.Weare,ifnotgoingbackward,makingprogress.第56页/共92页词汇替换第57页/共92页1.常用词替换2.逻辑词替换第58页/共92页Firstgroup常用词第59页/共92页people,personsmakesensethingbuildindividuals,folks,mankind,humanbeing,citizenhaveapointaffair,business,matter,stuffshape,establish,construct,erect,fabricate第60页/共92页原词aspectcausewantrememberhavepopular替换为facet,feature,sidegiveriseto,resultin,leadto,incitedesire,setone’shearton,yearnforkeep...inmindenjoy,possess,ownprevalent,prevailing第61页/共92页原词替代词knowstrengthenexperiencemoreandmorerealize,beawareofenhance,intensify,deepensee,witness,livethrough,endure,undergoAnincreasingnumberof、Increasingly、Growing第62页/共92页原词tryone’sbestveryattractsamebuy

替换词doone’sutmost,exertoneselftodosth,devotetoextremely,greatly,vastly,severely,terribly,exceedinglycapture,enchant,entice,appealtoidenticalpurchase,acquire,afford第63页/共92页表明importantThinkofcomeupwith

sthoccurto/strikesbCometoremind/flashbackto/recollect/recallmomentous,considerable,distinctive,major,vital,capital,substantial,material,conspicuous,striking,prominent,eminent,noticeable,consequentialreveal,indicate,convey,reflect,confirm,demonstrate,imply第64页/共92页Ithink??Asweknow?inmyoponion?formypart?frommyperspective?第65页/共92页1.harbortheideathat2.taketheattitudethat3.itiswidelysharedthat4.Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat5.AsfarasIamconcerned6.I'mconvincedofsth/that

第66页/共92页beinterestedin

???1.sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb2.s.b.befascinatedwithsth3.s.b.befondofsth第67页/共92页

逻辑指示词第68页/共92页1.原因–由于，多亏第69页/共92页1.thanksto2.attributeto3.dueto4.bepartiallyresponsiblefor5.owingto6.rusultfrom第70页/共92页2.因果--结果，导致，产生第71页/共92页leadto导致resultin导致giveriseto产生stemfrom起源于asaresult/consequenceconsequently第72页/共92页2.递进第73页/共92页What’smoreInaddition/besidesFurthermoreMoreoverObviously/definitely/undoubtedlyThatistosayIndeedInparticular/especially第74页/共92页

3.假设SupposeAssumingImagineOnceIf第75页/共92页4.比较第76页/共92页同义比较1.Similarly/besimilarto2.Likewise3.Inthesameway4.As…as第77页/共92页反义比较1.Conversely2.Onthecontrary3.In/bycontrast5.Incomparison第78页/共92页句型多样化

第79页/共92页1.描述漫画句:

*Fromthecartoonwecanseethat_____.*Wecanseefromthecartoonthat_____.*Asisindicatedinthecartoon,_____.第80页/共92页2.引出暗含主题句*Wecandeducefromthesetwovividdrawingsthat_____.*Whathasbeendescribedinthecartooncarriesgreatmeanings/implicationsforourlife,esp.howto_____.*Whatitillustratesisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,anditexpresses/conveysthesymbolicmeaningof_____.第81页/共92页3.引出原因句

*Therearequiteafewpossiblereasonssuggestedhere.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.*Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthistendency.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.