(京津鲁琼专用)2020版高考英语二轮复习专题五书面表达层级二第一讲靓化词汇-学会运用高级表达教案

层级二低档作文怎样升级为五档作文，策略告诉你书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特色：

1.只使用简单的词或短语；

2.句式单调，单句较多；3.缺少承前启后的词语和句子；

4.不会使用从句；

5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语；6.不会使用倒装和重申句型。高考书面表达重视考察考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法构造并能够娴熟运用句与句之间的连结成分以使行文流利。所以，平常的写作训练中，要学会适合地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场”。第一讲靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法构造或词汇方面有些许错误，但为全力使用较复杂构造或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，假如考生使用高级词汇或句型，即便犯了少许或稍微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章仍是属于最高品位。所以，为了让文章品位高，第一要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增加色彩和画面感。它会大大提高文章的品位，进而帮助考生获取高分。要做到正确使用高级词汇，应当注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略[策略1]“语”众不一样，防止亦步亦趋写作时适合得体地使用他人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。①(2019·北京卷书面表达

)I

’m

veryglad

toknowthatyou

’recomingtotourinChina.→I’mmorethandelightedtoknowthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Ihopeyoucanconsidermyapplicationandallowmetobeavolunteer.→Ihopeyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsiderationandallowmetobeavolunteer.(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)SoIcanserveasavolunteertoshowthevisitorsaroundthegalleryandIamsurethatIamfitforthejob.SoIcanserveasavolunteertoshowthevisitorsaroundthegalleryandIamconvincedthatIamqualifiedforthejob.④(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Asaresult,enoughpreparationisurgentlyneeded,includingpractice,nutritionandaperfectplan.→Asaconsequence,adequatepreparationisurgentlyneeded,includingpractice,nutritionandaperfectplan.⑤(2019·天津卷书面表达)Iwanttomakemyvoiceheard.→Ifeelanurgetomakemyvoiceheard.⑥Onlywhenyoudomorereadingandwritingcanyou

succeedinimprovingyourEnglish.→Onlywhenyoudomorereadingandwritingcanyou

makeit

inimprovingyourEnglish.⑦Toourgreatjoy,notonlyareourclasseslivelyandappealing,butourschoollifeisalsorichandcolorful.→Toourgreatjoy,notonlyareourclasseslivelyandattractive,butourschoollifeisalsorichandcolorful.⑧(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolinthelastfewyears.Andthenewscamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.→Ourschoolhaswitnessedgreatchangesinthelastfewyears.Andwordcamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.[策略2]更新换代，防止重复写作时应尽量防止重复使用同样的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展现自己的水平。用词不一样、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。(2018·天津卷书面表达)Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouoncetookpartinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.→Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouonceparticipatedinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Moreover，wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumbuilt，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.→Moreover，wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumofsportseventsareabletobeheld.③(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Theteamwillholdmanyactivities

setup，awiderange，someofwhichwillappealtoyou，includingmanymatches.→Theteamwillholdarangeof

activities

，someofwhichwillappealtoyou

，includingmanymatches.[策略3]词汇运用，短语优先当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。适合使用短语，一方面能使文章更为生动，另一方面也能展现出学生扎实的语言功底。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达

)Besides,Iknow

EnglishandIcanexpressmyselffluently

andclearly,

which

helps

mecommunicate

with

our

distinguished

guestsefficiently.→Moreover,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandIcanexpressmyselffluentlyandclearly,whichhelpsmecommunicatewithourdistinguishedguestsefficiently.②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Foronething,IknowChinesepaintingwell,formyfatherisaChinesepainter.→Foronething,I

amquitefamiliarwith

Chinesepainting,formyfatherisaChinesepainter.③(2018·天津卷书面表达→Wearedesperately

)Wedesperatelyneedyourhelp.inneedofyourhelp.(2018·北京卷书面表达)Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentsinourschooltoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,whichprovedtobeextremelyrewarding.→Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentsinourschooltoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,whichturnedouttobeextremelyrewarding.[策略4]用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应防止频频使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来取代。①(2018·北京卷书面表达)IfyoutakemyadviceyouaresuretohavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.→SolongasyoutakemyadviceyouareboundtohavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.②(2017·天津卷书面表达)Second，Iamtryingmybesttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.→Second，Iamsparingnoefforttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.③(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)IshouldsaysorryforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.→IshouldmakeanapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.二、写作的奥密武器——24个高级词汇一般词汇高级词汇一般词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternative名词ideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceeffectinfluencehavepossessreplacesubstitute动词bearputupwithunderstandmakesenseofdeveloppromoteconsidertakeintoaccountenoughadequaterichabundantvital/形容词properappropriateimportantsignificantinterestingabsorbing/difficultchallengiappealingng副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyinaflashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandaswellas(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Itisofimportanceforyoutounderstandthecontent，Tangpoetry.→Itisofimportanceforyouto→Itisofimportanceforyouto

makesenseofthecontentbeawareofthecontent

，Tangpoetry.，Tangpoetry.②(2017·北京卷书面表达

)That

’s

whyIthink

the

trip

along

the

YangtzeRiver

willbeabetterchoice.→That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiver③Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbe→Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbe三、写作的顶级装备——27个加分词汇

will

beabetterdifficult.challenging

.

alternative

.表达关注的名词表达争辩的名词

attention,focus,concerndiscussion,debate,argument表达现象的名词

phenomenon表达优弊端的名词表达增加或降落的动词

advantage,disadvantage,strength，weaknessincrease,accumulate,decrease,declineresultin,leadto,bringabout,contributeto,giverise表达致使结果的动词短语to表达支持、反对的动词短语approveof,beinfavorof,objectto表达可能性的形容词likely表达有利处的形容词beneficial表达重申的副词particularly,especially①Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenonthesedays.这幅图显示了这些日子的一个常有现象。②TheInternethasbroughtaboutmanychangesintheworkplace.网络给工作场所带来了好多变化。③Ourteacherislikelytogetangrywhensheseesthedirtyfloor.我们的老师看到地面这么脏时，可能会生气。Ⅰ请用高级词汇替代以下句子中的加黑部分1．(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)NowIwillinformyouofsomedetailedinformationtohelpyoufullyprepareforit.答案：make__full__preparations__for2．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达

)Youarewelcometogiveperformances

too.答案：as__well3．(2018·天津卷书面表达agrouptotakepartinit.答案：keen__on

)Weweresointerested

in

the

competition

that

weformed4．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达

)I

’m

very

gladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.答案：more__than5．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So，pleasespendsometimetakingabriefhistoryoftheTangDynasty，whichwillhelpyouprepareforyourclass.答案：Therefore;__make__preparations__for6．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)InordertogetabetterunderstandingofIadviseyoutolearnsomebriefhistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.

lookattheTangpoetry，答案：acquire7．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达

)Thecraftsmen

will

showvisitors

howto

cut

paperintodifferent

shapesonthespot.答案：

various/a__range__of8．(2017·天津卷书面表达

)Firstly

，thefinalexamofthistermis

comingsoIambusypreparingforit.答案：To__begin__with;__around__the__corner9．(全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)MyjobapplicationformandpersonalresumehavebeenpreparedandIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmecorrectthem.答案：polish10．Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.答案：challengingⅡ习作升级练习假设你是李华，你想邀请你的朋友John在周六夜晚去看科幻电影TheWanderingEarth，请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包含：1．发出邀请；2．介绍电影(主题：保护人类共同的地球家园；观众评论等)；3．恳求答复。注意：1.词数80左右；2．能够适合增加细节，以使行文连结。[考生作文]DearJohn，Iknowthatyouareinterestedinsciencefiction,soI’dliketoinviteyoutoseeafilmthisweekend.TheWanderingEarthisbeingshownthesedays.Itspurposeistosavetheearthandprotectourcommonhome.ViewersdescribeitasabreakthroughoftheChinesefilmindustryandithasreceivedmanypositivereviewssofar.Shallwegotowatchthefilmifyouarefree?HowaboutthisSaturdayevening?PleasecontactmeyouarefreesothatIcanbooktheticketsaheadoftime.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

whenYours，LiHua[我来提高]1．将文中加黑词汇升级(1)purpose→aim(2)many→a__wide__range__of(3)free→available(4)whenyouarefree→at__your__earliest__convenience(5)aheadoftime→in__advance2．将文中加黑句式升级(1)Knowing__that__you__are__interested__in__science__fiction,__I

’d__like__to__invite__you__to__see__a__film__this__weekend.(

分词作状语

)(2)The__Wandering__Ear