读后续写：我和Sabrina学案=高三英语写作专项

SabrinaandIwereingymclasstogether.Iwasquietandkind.Shewasabully(仗势欺人者).Sheandherfriendsenjoyedharassing(骚扰)meonadailybasis.

Iwaslessthanathletic.Thatday,wehadplayedsoccer.Inotonlyembarrassedmyself,Ialsomade

Sabrina

mad--basicallybecauseshewas

onmyteam,andwedidn’twin.So,intheshower,shethreatenedme!“Iwillmeetyouafterclass,”shesneered(讥笑).

Immediatelyclasswasover,Islidouttheteacher’sentranceandrantomylockerwhereSusan,myoldersister,wasalreadywaitingforme,sowecould

walk

hometogether."“What’supwithyou?”sheasked,

noticing

thelookofpanicinmyeyes.“Sabrina!”Ichoked.“Welostthesoccergameingymanditwasmyfault.”

“Oh,”Susansimplystated.“well,”shesaid,“wewillwalkdownSeventeenthSouthinsteadofHarrison.It'soutofthewayenoughthatSabrinawon'tfindus.”Nextday,inthemathsclassroom,Sabrina'sbest

friend

passedmeanotethatstated,"Atlunch,youwillpayforrunningaway!”Ididn'teven

lookup,butIaccidentallyswallowedmygumandfeltasevere

pain

inmychest.Mr.McKonkieexcusedmegoingto

thenurse'soffice.

Walkingdownthehall,Ifeltaslightsenseofreliefandfreedom.Butsuddenlysomeonehitmeonthe

shoulder

frombehind."Youlittlechicken!”Sabrina'svoicesneered.Ididn’tturnaround.Istartedrunningdownthehall.IhadnoideawhatshewasgoingtodoandIwasextremelyscared.

Sabrinawasnowrushingafterme.Atlast,shecaughtupwithmeenoughtokickthebackofmylegs,tryingtoknockmedown.Inapanic,Iswungaroundtothe

stairs.Sabrinawassoclosetomebythenthatmysuddenchangeindirectionknockedheroffbalanceandshefelldownthestairs.Istoodtherewatchingherfall.

Atfirst,Ifeltasuddenindependenceandvictory.

Sabrinaneverharassedmeafter

that.

导读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和Sabrina的故事，人物的动作和心理描写较多，可以学习。续写线索：心理变化--帮助Sbabrina--不再欺凌--赢得尊重翻译：1.我冷笑了一声转身逃跑，这时我注意到萨布丽娜挣扎着站起来，但却失败了。

___________________________________2.深吸一口气，我几乎冲下了楼梯，碰了下她的肩膀。___________________________________

3.她呼吸急促地呜咽着。___________________________________4.然后她抬起头，眼里朦胧地含着泪水。___________________________________5.她又重重地喘息了几下，透过模糊的视线，慢慢地明白发生了什么事。___________________________________6.立刻，我扶着她站着，把她的胳膊搭在我的肩膀上。___________________________________7.那一刻，她低下了一点身体，试图掩饰自己内心的尴尬。___________________________________8.我拍了拍她的肩膀，我们一起蹒跚地走到护士办公室。___________________________________9.她仍然讨厌在体育课上加入我的团队，有时会突然发脾气，但事情有所不同。___________________________________10.走在大厅里，我感到一丝解脱和自由。___________________________________11.最后，她追上我，踢了我的腿的后面，试图把我绊倒。在恐慌中，我转身走向楼梯。___________________________________12.萨布丽娜离我很近，我突然改变了方向，让她失去了平衡，从楼梯上摔了下来。___________________________________答案：1.我冷笑了一声转身逃跑，这时我注意到萨布丽娜挣扎着站起来，但却失败了。

I

sneered

andwasturningtorunawaywhenI

noticed

that

Sabrina

struggledtoherfeet,

butfailed.

挣扎着做某事：struggletodo2.深吸一口气，我几乎冲下了楼梯，碰了下她的肩膀。Takingadeepbreath,Ipractically

raceddown

the

stairs

andtouchedher

shoulder.（非谓语）race:(tomoveveryfast)

Thedaysseemedtoracepast.

日子似乎过的飞快3.她呼吸急促地呜咽着。she

moaned

throughlaboredbreaths.4.然后她抬起头，眼里朦胧地含着泪水。Thenshelookedup,hereyesmistedwithtearsmist

vt.&vi.(使)蒙上薄雾,(使)模糊,

例如:夜晚,水雾在灯的映射下发出神秘而幽暗的光。Atnightlightschargethemistwithmysteriousglow.|

毛毛细雨是很小的以至于它看起来像雾一样。Drizzleissolightthatitcanlooklikemist.

5.她又重重地喘息了几下，透过模糊的视线，慢慢地明白发生了什么事。Afewmore

labored

breaths

asher

blurredvisionslowlyrevealswhathashappened.她模糊的视线：hisblurredvision

|

雨点聚集在他的浓眉上，模糊了他的视线。RaindropsgatheredhisthicklashesandblurredRoss'svision.

6.立刻，我扶着她站着，把她的胳膊搭在我的肩膀上。Instantly,Ihelpedherintoastandingposition,putherarmaroundmy

shoulder.

7.那一刻，她低下了一点身体，试图掩饰自己内心的尴尬。Atthatmoment,she

lowered

abitofherbody,

tryingtohide

herinnerembarrassment.站姿：astandingposition

8.我拍了拍她的肩膀，我们一起蹒跚地走到护士办公室。

Ipattedhershoulder,andtogetherwehobbledtothenurse'soffice.pat注意双写，续写常用的双写还有hugdragclap

|

hobblev.

蹒跚，跛行

9.她仍然讨厌在体育课上加入我的团队，有时会突然发火，但事情已经不同了。

Shestillhatedbeing

onmyteam

ingymclassandflaredupsometimes,butthingsweredifferent.突然生气：flareup10.走在大厅里，我感到一丝解脱和自由。

Walkingdownthehall,Ifeltaslightsenseofreliefandfreedom.asenseof...感|

He

felt

anoverwhelming

sense

ofloss.他感到非常失落

11.最后，她追上我，踢了我的腿的后面，试图把我绊倒。在恐慌中，我转身走向楼梯。Atlast,shecaughtupwithmeenoughtokickthebackofmylegs,tryingtoknockmedown.Inapanic,Iswungaroundtothe

stairs.

12.萨布丽娜离我很近，我突然改变方向，让她失去了平衡，从楼梯上摔了下来。Sabrinawassoclosetomebythenthatmysuddenchangeindirectionknockedheroffbalanceandshefelldownthestairs.

不平稳的，摇摆的：offbalance

参考范文：

Atfirst,Ifeltasuddenindependenceandvictory.

I

sneered

andwasturningtorunawaywhenI

noticed

that

Sabrina

struggledtoherfeet,

butfailed.

Instincttakingover,IthoughtImustdosomething.

Takingadeepbreath,Ipractically

raceddown

the

stairs

andtouchedher

shoulder.“CanIhelp?”Iaskedgently.“Icannot

walk.”she

moaned

throughlaboredbreaths.

Thenshelookedup,hereyesmistedwithtears.Instantly,Ihelpedherintoastandingposition,putherarmaroundmy

shoulder.

Atthatmoment,she

lowered

abitofherbody,

tryingtohideherinnerembarrassment.

Ipattedhershoulder,andtogetherwehobbledtothenurse'soffice.

Sabrinaneverharassedmeafterthat.

Weneverbecamefriends,butfromthatmomentatthefootofthestairs,IwasconvincedthatIhadearnedher