书面表达 获奖教学设计

一、书面表达（共15分）18．时间飞逝。转眼间同学们已进入初中最后一年了。自进入中学以来，你一定在各个方面都发生了很大变化！请同学们就进入初中前、后，自己在兴趣、爱好、外貌、性格特点等方面有哪些变化，尤其在英语学习的方法上有哪些新的尝试，效果如何等写一篇短文。100字左右。（Howtimeflies!It’smorethantwoyearssinceIbecameamiddleschoolstudent.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinme.Asformypersonality,IamabletocontrolmytemperthoughIusedtobetouchy.Andmyappearancehaschangedalot.Iusedtohaveshorthairandmyeye-sightwasgood.ButnowIgrowlonghairandIamnear-sighted,soIwearglasses.MyEnglishlearningisnotthesameasbefore.NowIlistentotheEnglishteacherwithconcentrationandtakenotesineveryclass.ButIusedtotalkandplayintheclass.Onweekends,Iusedtoplaycomputergames.Butnowadays,IlookovermynotebookfromcovertocoverandwritemyownoriginalsentencesusingthegrammarIwaslearning.Itisthesedaysthathelpmemakefewermistakesandgetbettergrades.Inaword,IamnotwhatIusedtobe.AndwhatwillIbeinthefuture?Onlytimewilltellme?）二、书面表达（共15分）18.《中学生》杂志社的王主编给同学们在网上发了个邮件。他想了解你的学校以及你在校学习、生活的情况。请仔细阅读该邮件,然后给王主编写一封回信，回答他在邮件中提出的所有问题。信的开头和结尾已经给出，且不计入总数内。注意信中不出现你的真实姓名和班级。要求：内容完整，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整，不少于60词。Dearfriends,Wearedoingasurveyaboutyourschoollifeandwereallyneedyourhelp.Pleaseanswersomequestions.What’syourname?Wheredoyoustudy?Howdoyoulikeyourteachersandyourschool?Whatdoyouthinkofthesubjects?Whichoneisyourfavorite?Why?Whatdoyouoftendowithyourfriendsafterclass?Whatdoyouthinkofyourschoollife?Howcanyoumakeyourschoollifebetter?Pleasewritesoon!Yours,Mr.WangDearMr.Wang,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollife._____________________________（DearMr.Wang,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollife.MynameisBob.IstudyatNo.14MiddleSchool,whichisnotonlymodernbutalsobeautiful.TheteachersinmyschoolaresokindandhardworkingthatIlovethemverymuch.Ofallthesubjects,IlikeEnglishbest,becauseIwanttobeavolunteerat2022Olympics.Myfavoritesportisbasketball.MyfriendsandIusedtoplayittogetherafterclass,butnowwehardlyeverhavetimetohavefun.Everydaywehavetoomuchhomeworktodo.Althoughmyschoollifeisalittleboringnow,IknowIshouldworkhardatmylessons.Asateenager,itismydutytotrymybesttodealwitheachchallengeinmyschoollife.Ihopethislettercanhelpyou.Yours,Bob）三、书面表达（15分）目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。原因：1、考试太滥2、自身勤奋不够3、学生大量时间上网和玩游戏4、为了骗取家长和老师高兴(Atpresent,anumberofmiddleschoolstudentshavepickedupabadhabit—cheatinginexaminations.Therearethreemainreasons.First,schoolshavegivenstudentstoomanyexams,someofwhicharetoodifficult.Second,somestudentsarenothard-workingandtheydon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Third,theywastealotoftimeplayinggamesorsurfingtheInternet.Sotheyhaven’tenoughtimetopreparefortheexams.Finally,studentshavetodosotomaketheirteachersandparentshappy.Inmyopinion,cheatinginexamsdoesgreatharmtoourstudy.Westudentsshouldbehonestanddiligent,andonlyinthiswaycanweimproveourstudyandmakeprogress.Besides,ourteachersshouldofferusfewerexamsandmoretimetostudyforourselves.)四、书面表达18．由于08年奥运会在北京成功举办，越来越多的外国人关注北京、想了解北京。汤姆给王刚发了个电子邮件表达了他想来北京旅游的愿望。假如你是王刚，请给汤姆写一封信，介绍一下北京近年来发生的变化，哪些地方值得一去、有哪些事儿可做、交通、住宿、吃饭是否方便等。60词以上。下列词汇仅供参考使用。placesofinterest名胜DearTom,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangGang（DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyou’dliketocometoBeijing.I’msureitwillbeagreatexperienceforyoutotravelinChina.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinBeijing,suchasthePalaceMuseum,theGreatWallandsoon.Overtheyears,Beijinghaschangedalot.Asthehostcityofthe29thOlympicGames,Beijinghasbuiltmanynewmodernbuildingswhicharealsoworthseeing,suchastheWaterCube,andtheBirdNest.Asweallknow,manykindsoflocalfoodsinBeijingarenotonlycheapbutalsodelicious.Youcanhaveatasteofit.AsforthetransportationinBeijing,Ihavetosaythatitreallyneedsimproving.Becauseofthetrafficjams,travelingaroundthecitybyrentingabikecanbeagoodway.It’scomfortabletostayinahostelinBeijing.Italsohasalowprice.Ingeneral,IhopeyoucanenjoyyourselfwhenyouareinBeijing.Yours,WangGang）五.书面表达18.李蕾一家寒假要出去旅游，假如你是某旅行社的工作人员，请你根据他们提出的条件，给他们提供一至二个旅游地点。WhereWeatherActivityPlaceforeigncitywarmswiminteresting(Iknowyouwanttovisitaforeigncity.IthinkyoucanconsidervisitingAustralia.It’sreallybeautifulcountry.It’salwayswarmalltheyearround,soyoucanwearprettyskirtsandT-shirts.Ifyouloveswimming,youcangotothebeach.Youcanenjoythesunshineandrunbythesea.Whatagoodtime!YoucanalsovisittheWildZoo.Alsoyouwillhaveachancetotakealotofphotoswithkoalasandkangaroos.ThereisanotherinterestingplaceinAustralia—MovieCity. Inaword,Ihopeyoucangothereandhaveagoodtime.)六.书面表达18.旅游已成为越来越多的人假期休闲的首选。请你对以下旅游任选两个进行评论，并说出你决定去哪里及给出理由。1)HongKong/verycrowed/greatentertainment2)NewYork/wonderfulgalleries3)Singapore/beautifulviews/lotsofmuseums/goodplaceforshopping(Inmyfreetime,I’dliketogoonatrip.However,whereshouldIgo?NewYorkCityseemstobeagoodchoice.I’veneverbeentherebefore,andIknowthatthereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest,suchastheCentralPark,theFifthAvenueandsoon.Also,it’sfamousallovertheworldforitswonderfulgalleries,andthere,IcanpracticemyEnglish.However,NewYorkissofarfrommycountryandgoingtheremaycosttoomuchmoney.SomaybeSingaporeisafarmoresuitableplaceformetotakeaholiday.Thereareoceansofbeautifulviews,whichalwaysdeeplyattractme.What’smore,ithaslotsofmuseumsandI’llenjoymyselfwalkingthroughthem.Besides,Singaporeisagoodplaceforshopping.Iloveshopping,soI’msureI’llhavelotsofgoodtimethere.Allinall,IpreferSingapore七.书面表达18.以“MyGoodFriends”为题，写一篇150字左右的描写文。参考词汇：特别外向的人：atypicalextrovert

人品：personality

特别内向的人：atypicalintrovert

普通的衣服：plainclothes节约地：frugallyMyGoodFriends(TomandJackarebothmygoodfriendsalthoughtheyarecompletelydifferentfromeachother.Tomisveryshortandratherfat.Helikestobewell-dressed.Everymonth,Tomspendsallhismoneybeforehisparentsgivehimsomemore.Tomenjoysbeingwithpeople.He’sextremelycheerfulallthetimeandlikestotelljokes.Helovestogotoparties,andisalwayssurroundedbypeople.Helikestodanceandtolistentoloudmusic.Ateverypartyhesingshisfavoritesongsatthetopofhisvoice.Tomisatypicalextrovert.JackiscompletelydifferentfromTominlooks,personality,andhabits.Jackistallandthin.Helikestowearplainclothesandlivefrugally.Everymonthheisabletosavesomemoney.Jacklikesquietnessandtostayalone.Heseldomlaughs;heisveryserious.Helovesreading,paintingandtravelingalone.Heisatypicalintrovert.)八.书面表达18.根据表格，谈谈Carmen和XuFei对音乐的爱好。musiciansmusicCarmenplaydifferentkindsofmusicreallyloudandenergeticXuFeiwritetheirownsongsquietandgentle(Carmenprefersmusicianswhoplaydifferentkindsofmusic.Shelikesreallyloudandenergeticmusicbecauseshethinksthatloudmusiccanmakeherhappy.However,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.XuFeilikesmusicianswhowritetheirownsongs.“Theyarereallycool,”hesaid.Heenjoysquietandgentlemusicandthinkstheyareprettybeautiful.Hebelievesthatlightmusiccanhealallthewounds.MusicisthegiftoftheGod.Whichkindofmusicdoyoulikebest?)九.书面表达（本大题共15分）日前，由教育部、国家体育总局、共青团中央联合举办了“全国亿万青少年学生阳光体育运动”启动仪式，其影响巨大，意义深远。你在本校参与了此项活动，请你根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文。内容感想●学校师生收看了启动仪式；●开展了一小时的集体体育活动，如：跑步，做操，打篮球等●锻炼有利于强身健体；●运动使大脑休息，学习效果更好；●每天锻炼一小时，幸福生活一辈子注意：1.词数80～100个左右。2.短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。3.短文须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可适当加入细节和适当发挥，使短文通顺、连贯。4.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。参考词汇：thelaunchingceremony启动仪式；buildupone’sbodystrength强身健体moreeffective效果更好“Millionsofyoungstudentsnationwidesportssunshine”launchedonApril29,2022.Theteachersandstudentsinourschoolwereorganizedto…(“Millionsofyoungstudentsnationwidesportssunshine”launchedonApril29,2022.Theteachersandstudentsinourschoolwereorganizedtowatchthelaunchingceremonytogetherfirst,andthenwewenttotheplaygroundtohaveone-hoursportsactivities,suchasrunning,doingexercisesandplayingbasketball.Ifeltverygoodafterhavingsomesports.Ithinkitisagoodwaytobuildupourbodystrength.Sportscanalsoletbrainshavearestsothatourstudywillbemoreeffective.Todophysicalexercisesandhouradaywillmakeushappyawholelife,soIwillkeepondoingit.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplewilljoinusinsportsactivities)十.书面表达18.书面表达。(共15分)假如你是张红，你想参加学校组织的‘‘走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，请你用英语写一份申请。申请的开头和结尾已给出。

内容应包括：1．你参加这次活动的目的；2．你的兴趣、特长；3．你希望住在什么样的美国家庭。要求：1．词数：60词以上；2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。提示词语：夏令营summercampDearSir/Madam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

ZhangHong(DearSir／Madam, IlearnthatyouareorganizingasummercampaboutenteringtheAmericanfamily.I’mveryinteresteditandIhopetobeoneofthemembersinthisactivity.IbelieveitisagreatopportunityformetolearnmoreabutAmericanculturewhichisquitedifferentfromours.Besides,I’mgoodatsingingEnglishsongswhichIthinkisofgoodhelptomakefriendswithAmericans.Additionally,itwillbegoodnewsthattheAmericanfamilymembersIwilllivewithareeasygoingandkindsothatwecancommunicatewitheachotherinafriendlyway.Andiftheirchildrenlikeplayingrugby,thatwillbealsogreatbecauseI’marugbyplayer.

Yours

ZhangHong)十一.书面表达18.根据表格中的内容，以Peter’sChanges为题，谈论Peter三年来的变化，并写出他提高英语水平的三个方法。Peter’schanges3yearsagoNowshy,quietoutgoing,friendlyswimmingbasketballbeweakinEnglishbegoodatEnglishhavemanygoodwaystolearnEnglish,forexample…ItseemsthatPeterhaschangedalot.Heusedto…(ItseemsthatPeterhaschangedalot.Heusedtobeshyandquiet,butnowheisoutgoingandfriendly.Andhisfavoritesport,withhischaracter,haschanged.Swimmingwasoncehisfavorite.Atpresent,heiskeenonbasketball.Asforstudy,heusedtobeweakinEnglish.Surprisingly,heisgoodatEnglishnow.Thegreatchangeisduetothegoodwaystolearnit.Heknowsthatyoucan’tdoanythingwithEnglishunlessyoumasterthewordsverywell,andhemakesvocabularyliststohelpmemorizethewords.Inordertoimprovehislisteningandspeaking,healsowatchesEnglishvideos.Itmakesabigdifferencetohisgrades.Inaddition,heisconvincedthat“Practicemakesperfect”andhepracticesagainandagain.So,asyoucansee,itisbecausehetooktheseeffectivestepsthathehasmadesuchprogress.)十二.书面表达18.月考结束，老师们对你的学习进行了全面评价。请根据你的成绩单，谈谈老师对你的评价。ReportCardChineseteacher:candobetter__Mathteacher:hardworking_Englishteacher:goodatlistening_.teacher:lazystudent____Musicteacher:shoulddobetter(Igotmyreportcardyesterday.IwasveryhappybecausemymathteachersaidIwasveryhardworking.AndmyEnglishteachersaidthatIwasgoodatlistening.Tomyastonishment,myChineseteacherthoughIcoulddobetter.ButIthinkI’mreallygoodatChinese.Well,mymusicteachersaidthatIshoulddobetter.AnotherdisappointingresultisfrommyPEteacher.HethoughtIwasalazystudent.Ican’tstandthatbecauseIpracticeiteverydayafterschool.Anyway,Ihavetostudyharderinthenewterm.)十三.书面表达（共10分）（80字左右）假如你叫李平，参加了学校开展的“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动，调查结果如图所示。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，内容包括：调查结果（不局限于用分数表述）、理由及自己的想法。要求：1、语句通顺，合乎逻辑。2．词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。提示词：survey调查；trust信任同学、朋友说（理由：年龄相仿、愿意倾听，能理解）老师、家长说（理由：有爱心、有经验，可以信任）己独立解决（理由：不愿与人交流，朋友少）October26th,2022Deareditor,IamastudentofGradeThree.Wehavemadeasurvey“Towhomyougowhenintrouble.”Herearetheresults.Bestwishes.Liping(October26th,2022Deareditor:I’mastudentofGradeThree.Wehavemadeasurvey“Towhomyougowhenintrouble.”Herearetheresults.Mostofthestudentswillgototheirclassmatesorfriendswhenintroublebecausethey’realmostofthesameage,theycantalkwith,communicatewithandunderstandeachothereasily.Theyarepatientenoughtolistentotheirproblems.Somestudentswilltelltheirteachersorparentsabouttheirtroublesastheteachersandparentshaverichexperienceandlovethemverymuch.Theycanbetrustedbythesestudents.Onlyafewstudentssolvetheirproblemsallbythemselves.Theyhatetotalkwithothersandcan’tgetonwellwithothers.Theyhavefewfriends.Inmyopinion,whenintroublewe’dbetteraskourteachers,parents,friendsorclassmatesforhelp.Bestwishes.LiPing)十四.书面表达A.连词成句66..they.wonderful.a.time.last(.)67.went.thehe.to.bed.the.after.finished.letter.he.(.)68.hekeepcanthis.for.two.book.weeks.(?)69.told.To.leave.nobody.me.When(.)70.not.go.the.to.park.why(?)B)根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。假设你叫露西，昨天收到了朋友Nick的e-mail，得知他马上就要期末考试了，但是每次考试之前他总是紧张，不知道做些什么。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍一下你在考试前的一些做法或体会，并提出你的建议。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。）提示词语：haveaplan,workhard,rest,nottoworry,sureDearNick,Thanksforyourletter.Youaskedmeforsomeadviceaboutrevision(复习).Yours,Lucy((A）连词成句（5分）66TheyhadawonderfultimelastSunday.67Hewenttothebedafterhefinishedtheletter.68Canhekeepthebookfortwoweeks?69Nobodytoldmewhentoleave.70Whynotgotothepark?B)书面表达(10分)DearNick,Thanksforyourletter.Youaskedmeforsomeadviceaboutrevision(复习).First,Ithinkyoushouldhaveagoodplan.Keepnotesofwhatyouwanttoreviseeachday.Second,don’ttrytogoovertoomuchatatime.Workhardtwoorthreehoursandthenhaveashortrest.Thendosomemorestudying.WhenIwaspreparingformyexam,Ialsotriedtoeathealthyfoodandgetplentyofsleep.IwentforwalksandsometimesImetmyfriendstotalkaboutotherthings.Andlasttrytokeepcalmandnottoworry.I’msureyou’llbefine. Yours,Lucy)十五.书面表达(本题共15分，A题5分，B题10分)(A)假如你是Ann的父亲，因晚上有事很晚才能回到家。根据下面的英文提示，给Ann写一则留言条。Thingstoremember!Don’tforgetto…●putawaytheclothes●dotheshopping●tidythebedrooms●cleanthewindows

(B)用所给提示词，以PROTECTINGOURENVIRONMENT为题写一篇80～100词的短文。提示词：rubbish,important,pollution,harm,recycle,prevent,environment_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________((A)Ann,I’llbeoutthisevening.Pleaseputawaytheclothes.Thendotheshoppingandgetthedinnerready.Pleasetidythebedrooms.Don’tforgettocleanthewindows.Dad(B)PROTECTINGOURENVIRONMENTInthepastyearspeoplehaveimprovedtheirlivesgreatly.Morefactories,shopsandhouseswerebuilt.Butanotherproblemcomes.Morerubbishwasmade.Rubbishhascausedwaterpollution,airpollutionandsoon.Itisveryimportanttodealwiththerubbishinagoodwayincities.Ithasalreadydoneharmtopeople’shealth.Wastethingsmustberecycledorwelldealt.Watermustbecleanedbeforeitgoesintotheriver.Ourgovernmenthasalreadymadelawsagainstpollution.Butthat’snotenough.Eachofusmustalltryourbesttopreventrubbishfrompollutingtheenvironmentsoastosaveourcityandourlivingenvironment.)十六.书面表达(15分，提纲3分，关键词2分，短文10分)假如你是健康沙龙的一名记者。请仔细阅读Ann的来信，并就她信中所提出的问题给她写一封回信()，向她提出合理的建议。DearEditor,I’maprettygirl,butnowIhaveaproblem.WhenIgooutwithmyfriends,wealwayseat.SometimeswehavehamburgersatKFC.Sometimeswegotosomeone’shouseandhavesandwichesanddrinks.Iusedtobeslim,butnowI’mgettingfat.HowcanIsaynotofoodinaniceway?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Sincerely,Ann(A)Outline:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Keywords:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(B)SomethingI’dmostliketodo((A)Outline:1.TellAnnnottobeworriedaboutherproblem;2.AdviceonwhatkindsoffoodAnnshouldeat;3.SuggestAnndoingactivitieswithherfriends.Keywords:saygoodbyeto,feeltired,haveasleep,befree,begoodat,keepadiary(B)Onepossibleversion:DearAnn,Youneedn’tbeworriedaboutthis.Ithink,everytimeyouhavedinner,youcanchoosethefoodoflowfatandcalorie,suchasfruitsaladandvegetables.Youmayalsotrytotellyourfriendsthatjunkfoodisbadfortheirhealthandsuggestthemdoingotheractivitiesinstead,forexample,youcangoouttoplaysportstogether.Ithinkyourfriendswillunderstandyou.Hopetheadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Bestwishes,Susan)十七.书面表达请根据提示写一篇题为“MyFavoriteAnimal”的小短文。我喜爱的动物是狗。我和一只叫阿毛的宠物狗一起长大。无论我到哪，他都跟着我，他对我很好。甚至有一次我掉下河，他叫人救了我的命。狗是我最好的朋友，我开心的时候，他也开心，我悲哀的时候，他也悲哀。我非常爱狗。（MyFavouriteAnimalMyfavouriteanimalsaredogs.Dogsareveryfriendly,so1likedogsbest.1growupwithapetdognamedAhMao.Itisverybeautiful.Thisyearitistenyearsold.Nomatterwhere1go,itwillalwaysfollowme.Oneday,1wenttoariverwithAhMao,when1walked1suddenlyfellintotheriver,1couldn'tswim.When1wasindanger,AhMaorantoaskaman,theysavedmylife.When1amhappy,itishappy,too.When1amunhappy,itisalsounhappy.Ilikedogsverymuch.）十八.书面表达（本题共15分）请根据以下信息写一篇介绍我们学校的文章，首句已给出（90字左右）位置大良镇中心历史95年学生来源顺德各镇校园环境校园美丽，长满花草树木，师生注意环保，不到处乱丢垃圾师资有许多优秀的教师，他们热爱学生，工作勤恳学生情况尊敬老师，同学间互相帮助，学习努力，并积极参加社会实践ShundeNo.1JuniorMiddleSchoolinDalianglies______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(ShundeNo.1MiddleSchoolinDaliangliesatthecentreofDaliangTown.Ithasahistoryof95years.ThestudentstherecomefromdifferenttownsofShunde.Theschoolisbeautiful.It’sfulloftrees,flowersandgrass.Theteachersandstudentscareaboutprotectingtheenvironment.Theydon十九.书面表达（20分）请根据提示为你们班的英语园地“我的假期生活”栏目写一篇100词左右的短文。短文包括以下内容：去年暑假最喜欢做的事情：干家务活、帮妈妈做饭、参加俱乐部活动、旅游、参观名胜；今年暑假最重要的是保持健康：睡眠、饮食、运动；(LastyearIhadawonderfulsummervacation.IdidwhatIlikedbest.IdidalotofhouseworkandIoftenhelpedmymotherwithcooking.SometimesItookpartinclubactivities.TravellingismyfavouritesoIvisitedmanyplacesofinterestwithmyparents.Thisyear,Ithinkitisthemostimportantforustokeephealthy/fitthissummer.First,Iwillhaveagoodrestandgetrelaxed.Iwillhaveovereighthours’sleepeverynightandeatfreshvegetables,fruitandfishanddosomeexercise,suchasplayingballgames.I’lldo