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2018年书面表达TOC\o"1-5"\h\z\o"CurrentDocument"一、提纲作文 -1-二、图画作文/漫画作文 -15-三、图表作文 -16-四、(半)开放作文 -17-一、提纲作文(2018•全国卷I)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件必容包括:.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:.词数100左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:书信体邮件(2)时态:一般现在时(3)人称:第二人称⑷要点:到达时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪【参考范文】DearTerry,Howareyoudoing?Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutbeingaguesttoaChinesefriend'shome.Now,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.Tobeginwith,accordingtoourtradition,youaresupposedtoarriveearly,sothatyoucanhelpthefamilypreparethedinner,whichisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,you'dbetterbringsomegifts,suchasabookoraChineseknot.What'smore,whenyouareenjoyingthemeal,youneedtoavoidmakingnoiseswhilechewingfood.Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbeofgreathelptoyou.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattime.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【范文赏析】段落布局:第一段引出话题,第二段介绍具体要点,第三段合适的结尾。高级词汇:inform,relevantdetails,tradition,besupposedto,avoiddoing,chew,lookforwardto句子衔接口。beginwith,Besides,What'smore复杂句式:beofgreathelptosb.;非限制性定语从句whichisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting;同位语从句Ihavetheconfidencethat...。(2018•全国卷II)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Grow%g7。g々/工内容包括:.短片内容:学校的发展;.放映时间、地点;.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:.词数100左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:通知(2)时态:一般将来时⑶人称:第三人称(4)要点:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见【参考范文一】Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Recently,anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.Welcometojoinusandenjoyit!Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith,thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool.Itisbelievedthatthemoviewillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,pleasenotethatitwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoononJune9th.What'smore,everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit,enjoyingthemovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.Hopefully,youwouldmakeittoouractivity.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.TheStudents'Union【范文赏析】段落布局:第一段必容背景,第二段,具体内容,第三段,适当结尾。高级词汇:outstanding,relevantdetails,beloved,meaningful,heated,makeit。句子衔接口。beginwith,Besides,What'smore,Hopefully。复杂句式:非限制性定语从句whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool,主语从句Itisbelievedthat…,宾语从句pleasenotethat...,现在分词短语enjoyingthemovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments。【参考范文二】NoticeInordertolearnmoreaboutthedevelopmentofourschool,allthestudentsarewelcometowatchtheshortfilmGrowingTogether,whichisadocumentaryonthehistoryofourschool.Producedbyourteachersandusseniorstudents,itreflectsyearsofhardworkatschool.Ifyouarecuriousaboutthehistoryofourschoolorconcernedaboutitsfuture,youmustn'tmissthisexcellentopportunity!Weencourageanykindoffeedbacksonthefilmfromourviewers.ItwillbeshowninRoom1,FirstTeachingBuilding,from7:00pmto8:00pm,June10,Sunday.Wearelookingforwardtoyourwarmparticipation.TheStudents'Union(2018•全国卷IU)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:.学校的体育场馆;.主要的运动项目;.你喜欢的项目。注意:.词数100左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【审题谋篇】.体裁:书信类应用文。.时态:全文以一般现在时为主,兼顾一般过去时或一般将来时。.人称:以第一人称或第三人称书写。.要点:①学校体育场馆简单介绍;②学校主要运动项目介绍;③你喜欢的运动项目。【参考范文】DearPeter,Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichPingpong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,I'mintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours,LiHua【范文赏析】本文写作目的明确,思路清晰,要点齐全,特别是高级词汇和句型的使用更是让读者眼前一亮,也充分体现了作者很强的语言运用能力。文章第一段开门见山点明回复的问题,第二段根据题目要求写出了要回复的三个要点,且层次分明,简明扼要,其中用到了高级词汇和复杂的句型,增强了文章的可读性。书信结尾总结前面内容,且进一步表达了自己的盛情邀请。高级词汇:bedelightedtodo;giveyouaroughsketch;fabulous;awiderangeof;enjoypopularity;beintoxicatedwith等。复杂句型:Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichPingpong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.这是一个复合句,主句是awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,前面有with的复合结构作状语,ofwhich引导了定语从句Pingpong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularityo在定语从句中没有用常用的and而是用了aswellas连接三个运动项目。(2018•北京卷•书面表达第一节)第一节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件必容包括:.表示欢迎;.推荐他上哪所大学;.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,LiHua【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:书信⑵时态:一般现在时为主⑶人称:第二人称为主⑷要点:①欢迎来北京上学;②推荐他上北京大学;③建议做的准备工作。【参考范文】DearJim,I'msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceisneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit'smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【范文赏析】范文入题交代背景并表示欢迎,第二段交代推荐他上北京大学的原因及需要做的准备工作;最后一段表达了自己的情感。整篇文章一气呵成、要点齐全且排列有序。文中运用了如“unforgettable,besoakedin,profound,asfor”等高级词汇;句式方面的高级表达有:Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcome...不定式作宾语;LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture...现在分词作状语;oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina作同位语;whereyoucanbecompletelysoakedin定语从句;it'smypleasuretoshow.「中it作形式主语。(2018•天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:电子邮件(2)时态:一般现在时为主(3)人称:第一、二人称为主⑷要点:①7月底在天津举行世界青少年机器人技能竞赛②向就读于天津并曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖的Chris发出邀请③告知Chris训练计划将发送给他并请他提出建议。【参考范文】DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionistobeheldinTianjinattheendofthisJuly,whichinterestsmegreatly.Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouonceparticipatedinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.Wearedesperatelyinneedofyourhelp.Soasthegroupleader,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinus.Iamconvincedthatwithourjointeffortswecanundoubtedlygetgoodresults.What'smore,Iwillemailyouourtrainingplansoon,hopingyoucanoffersomeconstructivesuggestionsregardingit.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin【范文赏析】-10-(1)文章开门见山交代比赛的时间和地点,随后说明自己的同学组成团队参赛并邀请Chris加入,并希望Chris对计划提出建议,言简意赅。(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇,如interest作动词,formagroup,participatein,accumulate,desperatelyinneedof,ourjointefforts,undoubtedly等。(3)在句式方面,既有which引导的定语从句又有名词性从句Iamconvincedthat…等。总之,本文不失为一篇优秀范文。(2018•江苏卷)81.请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。LiJiang6July,SunnyOurfamilywillgoonatripnextmonthandneedasuitcase.Twodaysago,MomaskedmetofindrelevantinformationontheInternet.ButtheinformationIgotwasrichandvaried,orevencontradictory.Confused,Isimplybasedmydecisionontheratings.Withinfiveminutes,weorderedtheoneweweresatisfiedwith.Thisafternoon,Momreceivedthecaseandtoldmeshelikeditverymuch.SuHua6July,SunnyThismorning,ourfamilywentout,hangingroundinthedowntownarea.WefoundaratingoftheTopTenRestaurants,andwentintooneofthem.Wespentquitealotofmoney,butwerenothappy.Momcomplainedalot,andsaidthatdespiteitshighratings,thefoodwasnottoourtaste.Iwaspuzzled.ShouldIbelieveinthese-ii-ratings,orshouldInot?【写作内容】.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2—3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:议论文(2)时态:一般现在时(3)人称:第一人称(4)要点:介绍排名现象;我的习惯做法以及原因:一是相信排名,二是节省选择时间;观点:不能完全依赖排名,要客观对待。【参考范文】Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation,theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly,thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly,thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct,orbetterservice.Basedontheratings,-12-Iboughtmybelovedbackpack,sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly,ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase,itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.【范文赏析】本文条例清晰,层次分明,结构完整,完全符合题目要求。很好地使用了一些语篇标志词,比如:Interestingly;Firstly,Secondly使得文章很有条理。用到了一些比较高级的句式,比如:whateverIpurchase;Basedontheratings;both…and…;Thereisnodoubtthat等。(2018•浙江卷•书面表达•一)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘必容包括:.口语能力;.相关经验;.应聘目的。注意:.词数80左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【审题谋篇】-13-(1)体裁:应聘信(2)时态:现在时(3)人称:第一人称(4)要点:我口语能力好;我曾接待过外宾,有相关经验;我想通过为外宾服务,提高自己的口语水平,同时为促进中外文化交流做贡献。【参考范文】DearSir/Madam,IhavelearntthatourEnglishassociationneedssomevolunteerstomeetthevisitingforeignstudentsandIwanttoapplyfortheposition.Firstly,IcanspeakfluentEnglishandIhavelittledifficultycommunicatingwithforeigners.Secondly,Ihelpedreceivesomevisitingforeignerstoourschoollastyear.Thisexperienceissuretoenablemetodobetterthisyear.IalsowanttoimprovemyspokenEnglishandhelpthemhaveabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemethechance.Yours,LiHua【范文赏析】开门见山,表达自己写信的目的。然后写自己的优势以及目的,简洁明了,不拖泥带水。运用了firstly…secondly等语篇标志词,运用了一些较为地道的搭配,havedifficultydoingsth.;enablesb.todosth....;haveabetterunderstandingof...等,这些都使得这篇短文读起来很流畅。-14-二、图画作文/漫画作文(2018•北京卷•书面表达第二节)A/t- -M-第一节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。【参考范文】Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentsinourschooltoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,whichturnedouttobeextremelyrewarding.Onarrivingattheteahouse,theforeignstudentswereimpressedbytheuniqueteapotsandteacups.Igavethemavividandinformativeintroductionofteaculture,includingitsprofoundhistory,itsrichvariety,andtheexquisitecraftsmanshipofmakingteawiththeirinterestgreatlysparked,Ithenbegantoteachthemhowtomaketea.Inordertodeliveraclearpresentation,Islowlyexplainedthetraditionalprocedureofmakingteaindetail.Absorbedineverymoveofmine,theforeignstudentswereonceagainamazedbythisuniquecultureandtheycouldn'thelptakingpicturesfromtimetotime.-15-NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.Washingtheteapots,addingtealeaves,andpouringwaterintothecups,theyfollowedmyinstructionsandwerereallyimmersedincharmingteaculture.Theteahousewitnessedareallyenjoyabletimeforallofus.Attheendoftheactivity,holdingtheteabagsinourhands,wetookapicturetomemorizetheunforgettableday.Itsuddenlyhitmethattraditionalcultureliketeaculturewasofgreatcharmandhugevalue.AndIswelledwithpridetospreadourownculturetopeopleallovertheworld.【范文赏析】文章按照品茶的逻辑顺序展开,其间不断地呈现表达作者情感的词汇,形象生动地描述了整个过程。文中还涵盖了诸如authentic,vividandinformative,theexquisitecraftsmanship,deliver,absorbedin,beimmersedin,memorize等高级词汇。在亮点句式方面,文中有:whichturnedouttobeextremelyrewarding定语从句;。口arrivingattheteahouse介宾结构“一就”;howtomaketea”特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语;Nextcamethemoment倒装结构;holdingtheteabagsinourhands现在分词作状语。三、图表作文无-16-四、(半)开放作文(2018•浙江卷•书面表达•二)Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).【wasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don'tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tget10
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