高中英语书面表达集-建议信

高中英语书面表达集建议信(Letterofsuggestion)一、简介(1)建议信写作注意事项,写作目的是提出建议或忠告。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。(2)写作方法①首段：说明目的，注意语气。②主体：提出具体建议；首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。(3)写作流程图提出建议介绍详情、说明原因说明写信的目的提出建议介绍详情、说明原因说明写信的目的提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复一．keywordsandphrases1.someadvice,somesuggestions,2.learnfrom3.takesthintoconsideration=takesthintoaccount4.inaddition,5.Iamsorrytohearthat6.IfIwereyou,Iwould7.Ilearnthatyouhavetroublein8.widentheireyes.9.especiallyforusstudents.10.Amajorityofstudents11.Whatisknowntousisthat12.forthereasonthat二．keysentences1.ThankyoufortrustingmeandI’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.3.IamsorrytolearnaboutyourproblemandI’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.写作指导首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...主体：提出建议并阐述理由。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...IfIwereyou,Iwould...Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingmeasures...Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我建议……I’dliketosuggestthat……Inmyopinion……Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadviseyouto……IfIwereyou,Iwould……Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould……Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…结尾：希望收信人接受建议。注意措辞要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。1.Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.2.Thanksforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.3.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.4.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.5.Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.6.Iwouldbemorethanhappyifmysuggestionscouldbeconsidered.7.请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.8..英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式

Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.

Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementinthisregard.

Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.

Iwouldbereadytodiscussaboutthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Whateveryoudecidetodo，goodluckwithyourstudies/work！Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

试题分析：本文是一篇应用文，首先对题目进行审清，先对自己进行自我介绍，并表达得知她的遭遇后同样感到很伤心。再对所知的情况进行描述，将表示鼓励的话语表达出来，可以使用诸如inspiresbtotakethestepstowardsfuturelife.鼓励某人朝着未来的生活迈进。这样的话语进行行文，并表达相信她一定能成功。最后，说出自己如何帮助她，可用上诸如tryone’sbesttodosth尽某人最大的努力做某事，这样的表达来起句子，并表达对她的祝福。

点评：对于应用文写作是高考常考的文体，把握好各个应用文的写作格式也是平时学习过程中必须注意的，同时平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆，万能句型的积累，高中作文写作，要注意在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。写的过程中，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。平时的英语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达，考试时才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。DearAmy,

IamastudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.Iamverysorrytohaveheardofyourpresentsituationthatyouaresobitterafterhavingalungcancer.

Atpresent,ACSdecidesthatitwillgiveyouthreecentswhenyoureceivealetter.Thatwillofferyousomuchcourage.Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.Youaresuretomakeit.

Iwilltrymybesttoaskallmyfriends,schoolmatesandrelativestowriteletterstoyou,whichmayhelpyou.Itwillgivemorecouragetoliveon.

Mayyourecoversoon.

Yours,

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信。要点都已经给出，信件要点包括：自我介绍，得知的情况，表示鼓励，打算为她做什么，祝她早日康复，审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.使用了nomatterhow引导的让步状语从句，还有Iwilltrymybesttoaskallmyfriends,schoolmatesandrelativestowriteletterstoyou,whichmayhelpyou.用了非限制性定语从句。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。DearAmy

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