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考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表第二段---解释寓意第三段---给出评论第一段：第一句1、Asisshownabove,描述图画（倒装）・Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。描述图画注意：第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。第三部;寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。模式：在图画中央有（倒装），它（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有（独立主格作状语）第二句总结Thepicture,atthefistglimpse,seemstobesimple,butonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficialmeaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。Theauthor'srealpurposeisnotthefactitself,buttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。第二段第一句观点的提出(1)Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththe重要主题.Innocountry,otherthanchina,ithasbeensaid,isthisphenomenonmoreobvious.(2)Thepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsocialphenomenon,thatis,peopletendtooverlookthefactthat有害主题・(或Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.)Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicycarriedout,bringingsomeproblemsatthesametime,withtheaboveonebeingtheforemost・在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。(或Innocountryotherthanchina,ithasbeensaidmisthisproblemmoreserous・)万能观点：图画主题的重要性Nothingcanbecomparedwith••••••isnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable…•••remainstobeanintegralpartin・••图画主题的有害性Nothingismoreharmfulordamaging.•••isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging・•••inlargemeasuredetrimental・第二句进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视）（1）Thepublicfailstoattachdueattentionto有害主题・（2）Thepublicattachdueattentionto重要主题・givepriorityto・••优先考虑•••attachattentionto・••对••注意emphasizetheimportanceof・・・强调•••的重要性stressthefundamentalroleof”，强调•••的根本作用第三句---对主题进行展开（3-4句）Bydoingso,十^一个角度平行展开八•（也可用科学论据法或举例法）（一）、十一个万能理由（角度）物质回报：主题canprovide（offer）peoplewithnotonlydeliciousfoodbutfashionableclothesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwellingsandhandsomeautomobiles・Theindustriousandinsightfulpeoplewillneverfailtoprofitsfrom（benefitfrom）doing主题・时间角度节约时间Itcanmakethemostofonestime,chanceandtechnology・主题.Learningmorewesternculture),occupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom/wonderingandhelpsthemachieveamorebroadenhorizon・浪费时间Asallknown,thedaysofyouthshouldnotbefriend/idledawayandtimeshouldbecherished,but(主题・starworship)wasteshours,lavishesdaysandevensquandersyears,whichleadsustosaykillsanevenmurdersyoungster'sprimetime・效率角度主题(e・g・Starworship/AddictiontotheInternet)makespeoplewearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshimtolearnmore,andfinallylosetheirinteresttolearn,andleadtolowgrades/lowefficiency/underachievement・One'senergygraduallywearsoffandone'sthought,creativethinkingandexplorationhasbeenstifledbydoing主题・方便和快捷主题(・WideWorldWeb)providespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation・主题(・MSNandotherinstantmessengers)canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.安全角度①主题cansecurehisfoodandshelter.②主题canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.身心健康（主题）canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblems,stress,isolationandsolitude.Bydoing（主题）peoplestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.（主题）canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone'sknowledgeandgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld.生活娱乐It'samajormeansofentertainmentthatrelievesone'spressure,boredom,stressandburden.表“受益”的词组：Broadenone'smindEnrichone'sexperienceEnhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone'sworkItiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainmentthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasourceofimaginationaswell.Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyouseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.有助成长和成功（自己和他人）①Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentalcomfort,orspiritualbackfromyoursupport.②Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,increasetheirincome.Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperationandfinallyfindtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness.Thoughyourassistance,notonlycantheyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.Peoplewhotreatotherswithlove,sincerity,sympathy,enthusiasm,hospitalityorgenerosityalwayswinrespectfromothers.Itdose/doesn'tnecessarilycultivatetalent,confidence,self—worth,self—relianceanddignity.文化价值观①Itcannothelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,confidenceandtolerance.②Itcansometimesintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetweennations.Itputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger.Itcannotpromotemutualunderstanding.Itcanbreachthefriendlyties,andwidenthegapbetweenpeople.环境保护Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundstoeliminateairpollution,noisepollution,reducesoilerosionordesertification,preventthethinnessofozonelayers,reduceindustrialsewage,andrescuethedwindlingtropicaljungles.Itgovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalpreservation,therebypromotingsustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivableenvironment.社会宏观角度Itcanminimizeinflation,economicstagnation,economicrecession,unemploymentrate.Itcanmaintainsocialorderandreducecrimerate.Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountry,meansofcocommunicationandqualityoflife.Itmeansthattheauthoritiescanallocatemorefundstotheconstructionandqualityofinfrastructurerangingfromkindergartens,hospitals,medicalcenter,museums,schoollibraries,trainstohighwaysandexpressways.Itmeansthatpeoplecanhaveequalopportunitytocollegeeducation,employments,self—realizationandpursuitofmaterialwealth.(二)、科学论据法AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScience(CAS),…AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSocialScience(CASS),…ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeoplefromfourprofessions-asurgeon,awhilecollarworker,acarpenterandafarmer.Thesurveydiscoversthatallofthemareoftheideathat主题重要或有害.(三)、举例子Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof•••,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。Amongallthetouchingfactsrelatingto・・・thatIhavehoard,noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis•••在我所听到的、看到的、经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服力的是…第四句(结尾句——虚拟语气和利弊句)虚拟语气：(1)积极的主题如果没有••・我们可能根本做不了•••Weretherenosth,neverwouldwedosth.(2)消极的主题如果情况继续下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,wewouldpaythehighprice..Werethetendencytocontinueasitis,ourfuturegenerationwouldnotbothertothinkofexcuseforus.利弊句：(1)弊大于利The