2023届浙江省绍兴市英语二模续写作文解析讲义VIP

第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasterrifiedofheights.Ofcourse,itwasnotreallyafearofbeinginahighplace.Rather,itwastheviewofalongwaytofall,ofrocksfarbelowmeandnofirmwallbetweenmeandtheedge.Mysenseofsecuritywasscreaminglyabsent.Icouldrelyonlyonmyownsure-footedness.我恐高。当然，这并不是真的害怕身居高位。更确切地说，我看到的是要从这么高的地方坠落，离我很远的岩石，以及我和悬崖边缘之间没有一道坚固的墙。我极度缺乏安全感。我只能依靠自己稳健的脚步。Despitemyfear,twosummersagoIsomehowfoundmyselfclimbingtoahighplace,whilequakinginsideandout.MostofourhighschoolhadcomealongonadaytriptotheBoqueron,abeautifulandpleasantspotinthefoothillsofPeru.Itschiefattractionisthemainwaterfall,about100feethigh,thatthundersintoacrystal-clearpoolfeedingtheAguaytiaRiver.Allaroundthepoolandondowntotherushingriverarerockslargeandsmall.Thebeachisstrewn(布满)withrocks.Onbothsidesofthefall,thejunglestretchestomeetit,risingparalleltoitonagentlerslope.Thejungleextendsoneithersideofthewaterfallandrunsparalleltoitonamoregradualincline.丛林在瀑布的两侧延伸，并在一个更平缓的斜坡上与瀑布平行。尽管我很害怕，但两年前的夏天，我发现自己爬到了一个很高的地方，我的内心和身体都在颤抖。我们高中的大部分同学都参加了去波奎伦的一日游，那是秘鲁山麓一个美丽宜人的地方。它最吸引人的是主瀑布，大约100英尺高，轰隆隆地流入一个清澈的水池，注入阿瓜迪亚河。大大小小的岩石布满在池塘周围一直延伸到湍急的河流。海滩上散布着(布满)岩石。丛林延伸到瀑布的两侧，形成一个平缓的斜坡与瀑布平行。Aftereatingourlunches,manyofuswantedtomaketheclimbtoanareaaboveit.Weknewothershaddonesoonprevioustrips.Afewguyswentfirsttomakesuretheywereontherightpath.Butaftertheyleft,mygroupofsevendecidedtogoaheadwithoutwaitingforthemtoreturn.Isuspectedweweregoingthewrongway,butIkeptsilent,figuringthattheothersknewbetter.Wewentalongthebaseofthehilluntilwereachedtheclimb.Itstoppedmeinmytracks.吃完午餐后，我们中的许多人都想爬到它上面的一个区域。我们知道在之前的旅行中也有人这样做过。有几个人先走，以确保他们走的路是对的。但在他们离开后，我们一行七人决定不等他们回来就继续前进。我怀疑我们走错路了，但我保持沉默，认为其他人知道得更清楚。我们沿着山脚走，一直走到山顶。我停下了脚步。Theclimbrosesteeplyaboveus.Alongtherightedge,thejunglehuggedtherocks;passagethroughitstreesseemedunlikelytobeachieved.Themajorityofmyviewwasfilledwithrocks.Peeringbackdowntowardtheriver,Isawasteepslopeofrocksallthewaytothewater.AllIcouldthinkaboutwashowfaritwouldbetofall.攀登的山峰陡峭地耸立在我们之上。沿着右边的边缘，丛林紧挨着岩石;穿过树林似乎不太可能了。我的视野大部分都被岩石填满了。回头望向河边，我看到一个陡峭的岩石斜坡一直延伸到河边。我满脑子想的都是会掉多远。注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mytensethoughtswereinterruptedbytherealizationthatmyfriendswerealreadybeginningtoclimb!我紧张的思绪被我的朋友们已经开始往上爬的意识打断了!Myfriendskeptrightonclimbingbuttheydidnotforgetme.我的朋友们继续攀登，但他们没有忘记我。Sure-footednessreferstoaperson'sabilitytomoveoractconfidentlyandsecurely,withoutstumblingorlosingbalance.Itisoftenusedtodescribephysicalmovements,suchaswalkingonroughterrain,butcanalsorefertomentaloremotionalstabilityinchallengingsituations.Asure-footedpersonisonewhoissteadyandstableintheirmovements,withgoodbalanceandcoordination,andisabletonavigatedifficultortrickysituationswitheaseandconfidence.Thiscanbeavaluabletraitinmanyareasoflife,suchassports,outdooractivities,andprofessionalsituationsthatrequireadaptabilityandquickthinking.Inshort,sure-footednessisaboutbeingreliable,confident,andstableinone'sactionsanddecisions.Thesentence"Itstoppedmeinmytracks"isanidiomaticexpressionthatmeansthatsomethingunexpected,surprising,orshockinghappenedthatcausedsomeonetocometoanabrupthaltintheirmovementsorthoughts.Thisexpressionisoftenusedtodescribeapowerfulemotionalorphysicalreactiontosomethingthathasjustoccurred.Forexample,ifsomeonehearssomeshockingnews,theymaybesostunnedthattheystopwalkingortalkingabruptly,asiftheywerephysicallyhaltedbythenews.Anotherwaytothinkofthisphraseisthatitimpliesthatthepersonwassotakenabackbywhateverhappenedthattheywereunabletocontinuewithwhattheyweredoing,atleastmomentarily.Itcanalsoimplythatthepersonneedstimetoprocesswhathappenedbeforetheycanresumetheiractionsorthoughts.Overall,thephrase"Itstoppedmeinmytracks"conveysasenseofsurprise,shock,orawethatissopowerfulthatitinterruptsone'snormalfunctioning.stopdeadinone’stracks1.Tostopattheexactspotwhereoneisandholdmotionless.Westoppeddeadinourtrackswhenweheardrustlinginthebushesjustoffthetrail.Istoppedinmytracksatthesightofapoliceofficerstandingbymydesk.2.Tocauseonetostopinsuchamanner.Inthisusage,anounorpronouncanbeusedbetween"stop"and"(dead)in."ThesoundofSamantha'sangelicvoiceontheradiostoppedmedeadinmytracks.Thekidswererunningalongthelawnwhenthesoundofaloudmotorcyclestoppedthemintheirtracks.3.Toceaseprogressingorperformingcompletelyandveryabruptly.Thetalkshowhost,whowasrightinthemiddleofhisopeningmonologue,stoppeddeadinhistrackswhenanaudiencememberstumbledoutontothestage.Theeconomystoppeddeadinitstracksasaresultoftheglobalpandemic.4.Tocausesomeoneorsomethingtohaltprogressioninsuchaway.Inthisusage,anounorpronouncanbeusedbetween"stop"and"(dead)in."Thebossstoppedeveryoneintheofficeintheirtrackssothatwecouldallfocusonanimportantnewproject.StoryOutline:TheprotagonististerrifiedofheightsandfindsthemselvesclimbingahighplaceduringahighschooltriptotheBoqueronwaterfallinthefoothillsofPeru.主人公恐高，在她上高中去秘鲁山麓的博克隆瀑布时，她发现自己爬上了一个高处。Storyline:ProtagonistisfearfulofheightsbutgoesonahighschooltriptoBoqueron;theyandtheirfriendsdecidetoclimbtheareaabovethewaterfall;protagonistisworriedabouttheclimb.主人公恐高，但去了一个高中旅行到波克隆；他们和他们的朋友决定爬上瀑布上方的区域；主人公担心攀登。情感线(EmotionalLine)：主人公对高处恐惧，对攀登感到不安；他们担心摔倒，犹豫是否继续前进。Theprotagonististerrifiedofheightsandfeelsinsecureaboutclimbing;theyworryaboutfallingandhesitatetocontinue.恐惧高处terrifiedofheights,fearofheights攀登 climb,ascend矛盾心理 innerconflict,mixedfeelings高中旅行 highschooltrip,schoolexcursion瀑布 waterfall,cascade路径 path,route,trail难度加大 challengesintensified,increasingdifficulties快速呼吸 quickenedbreathing,rapidbreaths心跳加速 heartraced,poundingheart,acceleratedheartbeat信任 trust,havefaithin,relyon鼓励 encouragement,motivation,inspiration支持 support,backing,assistance坚持 persevere,persist,stickto安全感 senseofsecurity,feelingofsafety回头望 glanceback,lookback,peerback缓解 relief,alleviate,ease感激 grateful,thankful,appreciative进步 advance,progress,moveforward紧张 tense,nervous,anxious犹豫不决 hesitate,waver,beindecisive合作 teamwork,collaboration,cooperation充满活力 feelalive,fullofenergy,invigorated面对恐惧 facefear,confrontfear,overcomefear感情表达 expressemotions,conveyfeelings,showemotions预测下文情节发展(PredictedPlotDevelopment)：主人公面对恐惧，继续攀登，可能在朋友们的鼓励和支持下完成攀登。Theprotagonistfacestheirfearandcontinuestheclimb,possiblywiththeencouragementandsupportoftheirfriends.参考答案：第一篇Mytensethoughtswereinterruptedbytherealizationthatmyfriendswerealreadybeginningtoclimb!MyanxietyincreasedasIwatchedthem.“DoItumback?”Mywholebeingshouted,“Yes!”“WillIregretitlater?Ireallywanttogettothetop,but...”Ivoicedmyuncertaintiestomyfriends.Theydismissedmyfearsandencouragedmetostickitout.Questioningmyownability,Idecidedatleasttoattempttheclimb.Ichoseapaththatseemedeasiestwithmyfriendsaheadofme.Whenthe“path”leduptoanextremelynarrowarea,thedifficultiesincreased,withscaryspotsoneafteranother.Mybreathspedup,andmyheartpoundedevenfaster,growingloudinmyears.当我意识到我的朋友们已经开始爬山时，我紧张的思绪被打乱了!看着他们，我的焦虑加剧了。“我要回去吗?”我整个人都在喊:“是的!“我以后会后悔吗?”我真的很想上位，但是……”我向朋友们表达了我的疑虑。他们打消了我的恐惧，鼓励我坚持到底。我怀疑自己的能力，决定至少尝试一下攀登。我选择了一条似乎最容易的路，因为前面有我的朋友。当这条“小路”通向一个极其狭窄的区域时，难度就会增加，可怕的斑点一个接一个。我的呼吸加快了，我的心跳加快了，在我的耳朵里大声地响着。Theword"being"referstotheentiretyofaperson'sexistenceoressence.Inthesentence"Mywholebeingshouted,"itsuggeststhatthespeaker'sentireselforessencewasconsumedbyastrongemotionorfeelingthattheycouldn'tcontain.Itisawayofexpressingthatthefeelingwassopowerfulthatitseemedtoemanatefromthecoreoftheirbeing.Forexample,ifsomeonesays,"mywholebeingshoutedwithjoy,"itmeansthattheyfeltanoverwhelmingsenseofhappinessthataffectedeverypartofthem,notjusttheiroutwardexpression.stickitoutThephrase"stickitout"meanstopersistorendurethroughadifficultorchallengingsituation,oftendespitethedesiretogiveuporquit.Inthecontextofbeingencouragedtostickitout,someoneisbeingencouragedtocontinuewithataskorsituationdespitethedifficultiestheymaybefacing,andtopersevereuntiltheend.Itimpliesasenseofresilience,determination,andcommitment.Myfriendskeptrightonclimbingbuttheydidnotforgetme.Someonewasalwaysbehindmetohelpholdmyfeetsteady,whennecessary,whilesomeoneelsewasaheadtoofferahandup.Itrustedthemmorethanmyself.Withfriendssupportingmebywordsandactions,1slowlygainedground.Finally,wecametothetoughestplace.Onceagain,IshrankwhenIpeeredbackatthesteepslopeofrocks,“Youcanmakeit!Wewon’tletyoufall.”Myfriends’assurancesgavemethestrengthtogoon.Whenmyfeetmadecontactwiththesolidrockonthetop,Iheavedahugesighofrelief.Icouldfeelallthefeardrainingoutofme.Ineverfeltsoalive,andsothankfulformyfriendsandthatlife.我的朋友们继续攀登，但他们没有忘记我。在我需要的时候，总有人在我身后帮我稳住脚，也总有人在我前面伸出手来。我信任他们胜过信任自己。在朋友们的言语和行动的支持下，我慢慢地获得了支持。最后我们来到了最艰难的地方。当我回头望着那陡峭的岩石时，我又一次退缩了。我们不会让你们倒下的。”朋友们的保证给了我继续前进的力量。当我的脚触到上面坚硬的岩石时，我松了一口气。我能感觉到所有的恐惧正在从我身上消失。我从未有过如此鲜活的感觉，我对我的朋友和生活如此感激。Drain:V-TIfsomethingdrainsyou,itleavesyoufeelingphysicallyandemotionallyexhausted.使心力交瘁Myemotionalturmoilhaddrainedme.困惑焦灼的情绪使我心力交瘁。ADJ使心力交瘁的Ibegantosufferfromheadaches,whichleftmefeelingcompletelydrained.我开始感到头痛，它使我感到精疲力竭。V-T/V-IIfthecolourortheblooddrainsorisdrainedfromsomeone'sface,theybecomeverypale.Youcanalsosaythatsomeone'sfacedrainsorisdrainedofcolour.使(色泽)消退;(色泽)消退Harryfeltthecolourdrainfromhisface.亨利感到脸上没有了血色。V-TIfyousaythatacountry'soracompany'sresourcesorfinancesaredrained,youmeanthattheyareusedorspentcompletely.耗尽(资源、资金)Thestate'sfinanceshavebeendrainedbydroughtandcivildisorder.国家财政已经被旱灾和内乱消耗殆尽了。GPT答案：Mytensethoughtswereinterruptedbytherealizationthatmyfriendswerealreadybeginningtoclimb!MyanxietyheightenedasIobservedthem."ShouldIturnback?"Myentirebeingscreamed,"Yes!""WillIregretitlater?Itrulydesiretoreachthetop,but..."Isharedmydoubtswithmyfriends.Theybrushedasidemyfearsandencouragedmetopersevere.Doubtingmyownabilities,Iresolvedtoatleastattempttheclimb.Ifollowedaseeminglyeasierpathwithmyfriendsleadingtheway.Asthe"path"ledtoanextremelynarrowarea,thechallengesintensified,withfrighteningspotsoneafteranother.Mybreathingquickened,andmyheartracedevenfaster,growingloudinmyears.我紧张的思绪被我的朋友们已经开始攀爬的意识打断了!当我观察他们时，我的焦虑加剧了。“我应该回去吗?”我整个人都在尖叫:“是的!”“以后我会后悔吗?”我真的很想登顶，但是……”我把我的疑虑告诉了我的朋友。他们不理会我的恐惧，鼓励我坚持下去。我怀疑自己的能力，决定至少尝试一下攀登。在朋友们的带领下，我走上了一条看似轻松的道路。当这条“道路”通向一个极其狭窄的区域时，挑战也随之加剧，令人恐惧的地方一个接一个。我的呼吸加快了，我的心跳加快了，在我的耳朵里越来越响。Myfriendscontinuedclimbingbutdidn'tforgetaboutme.Someonewasalwaysbehindmetohelpstabilizemyfeetwhenneeded,whileanotherpersonwasaheadtoofferahandup.Itrustedthemmorethanmyself.Withmyfriendssupportingmebothverballyandphysically,Igraduallyadvanced.Finally,wereachedthemostdifficultpart.Onceagain,IshrankbackwhenIglanceddownatthesteepslopeofrocks."Youcanmakeit!Wewon'tletyoufall,"myfriendsassuredme.Theirwordsgavemethestrengthtocarryon.Whenmyfeettouchedthesolidrockatthetop,Iletoutamassivesighofrelief.Icouldfeelallthefearleavingme.Ihadneverfeltsoaliveandgratefulformyfriendsandforlifeitself.我的朋友们继续爬山，但没有忘记我。在我需要的时候，总有人在我身后帮助我站稳脚，而另一个人在我前面伸出手来。我信任他们胜过信任自己。在朋友们口头和身体上的支持下，我逐渐进步了。最后，我们到达了最困难的部分。当我低头望着陡峭的岩石斜坡时，我又一次退缩了。“你能做到的!”我们不会让你掉下去的，”我的朋友们向我保证。他们的话给了我坚持下去的力量。当我的脚触到山顶的坚硬岩石时，我松了一口气。我能感觉到所有的恐惧都离我而去。我从未像现在这样充满活力，对我的朋友和生活本身充满感激。语段学习：AsIapproachedthesteepslope,Itookadeepbreathandsetmysightsonthepeak.Theslopelookeddauntinglysteep,withlooserocksandgravelscatteredacrossitssurface.Undeterred,Ibeganmyascent,carefullyplantingeachfootandusingmyhandstogripontothenearbyrocksforsupport.Despitetheburningacheinmylegsandthesweatdrippingdownmyface,Ipersisted,drivenbythedesiretoreachthetop.AsIclimbedhigher,theviewbegantoexpand,andthebeautyofthesurroundinglandscapetookmybreathaway.Witheachstep,Ifeltasenseofaccomplishmentandpride,knowingthatIhadconqueredthechallengingslopethroughsheerdeterminationandgrit.approachedthesteepslopelookeddauntinglysteepsetmysightson/rest/landmyeyesonlooserocksandgravel松散的岩石和砾石scatteredacrossundeterredadj.perseveringwithsomethingdespitesetbacks.Hewasundeterredbythesedisasters.deter：~sb(fromsth/fromdoingsth)Thehighpriceoftheservicecoulddeterpeoplefromseekingadvice.这么高的服务费可能使咨询者望而却步。beganmyascentplantingeachfootgripontothenearbyrocksforsupportthesweatdrippingdownmyfacetheviewbegantoexpandthebeautyofthesurroundinglandscapetookmybreathaway.conqueredthechallengingslopesheerdeterminationandgrit1.接近陡坡2.看起来陡峭得吓人3.把目光投向/休息/注视4.疏松岩石和砾石5.分散在6.未被吓住7.开始我的攀登8.脚踏实地9.抓住附近的岩石以获得支撑10.汗水从我的脸上滴下来11.视野开始扩大12.周围美丽的风景让我惊叹13.征服了具有挑战性的斜坡14.绝对的决心和毅力描述害怕Myheartracedastheirpalmsgrewclammy,andmybreathingbecameshallowanderratic.Thefearwaspalpableinmyeyes,whichwidenedanddartedaroundfrantically.Mybodytensedup,andmymusclestrembledinvoluntarilyasItriedtosteadymyself.Thefearcausedmyvoicetoquiver,andmywordscameoutinashaky,stutteredmanner.Myfacewentpale,andmylipstrembledasIstruggledtomaintaintheircomposure.Thefearwassooverwhelming