2023深圳二模读后续写boxing写作指导逐句翻译【】

2023年深圳市二模·读后续写写作指导第二节(满分25分)47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly’sfamily.HereldersisterSerenawasnowdancingatatopcollege.ThoughKelly’smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersister’sfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethadfadedyearsbefore,andshewaseagerforanewchallenge.Onedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudio,shewalkedpastthegym,fascinatedbyboxers(拳击手)traininginsidetheboxingring.Shewasdeeplyimpressedbyhowhardtheyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infact,she’dlongbeenattractedtoboxing.Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase：BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT(选拔).ThatwaswhatKellyreallywantedtodo.Sheknewhermomhadhighexpectationsforherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.Thenextday,shegatheredhercourageandtoldSerenaabouthernewpassion.Atfirst,Serenadidn’tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious,shereplied,“YouknowMomwantsyoutobeaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingisonlyforboys,andyou’resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly.”“ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,”Kellyinsisted,“andwhatexactlydoes‘onlyforboys’mean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!”Gradually,touchedbyherdeterminationandpassion,Serenabegantounderstandandsupporther.Kellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingtorespectherdecision,nomatterwhat.Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunching(击打)abilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn’tcomenaturaltoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindtostickwithherchoice.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右;2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryoutkeepingitasecretfromhermom.____________________________________________________________________________________________ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.情节分析：Character(人)：Kelly,Serena,Mom（主要人物）candidates/teammates（次要人物）object(物)：ballet,boxing,boxingring,sheet,footwork,punchingabilitytime(时间)：tryoutday,Mondaylocation(地点)：boxinggymconflict(冲突/问题)：balletVSboxingEnding（显性结局）：chosensuccessfullyEnding（隐性结局）：winthesupportofhermother情节构建【TEAM框架】Para1:ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Ttraining--practiceafterschool-->improvetechniquesEexhaustedbutsatisfied,gainconfidenceAtrainwithothercandidatesM略Adayoftryoutarrived.-->showherskill(nervous/confident)Eend-->breathasighofreliefTtheresultannouncednextMonday.Para2：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.T(nervousandexpectant)scanthesheetandsawhernameE(thrilledandwildwithjoy)jumpandscreamASerenahugherandcongratulateherMCongratulations;tellMumAwinthesupportfromhermumEgratefulTproveshecouldcarveherownpath①情绪累exhausted满足satisfied自信confident坚定determined意志力strong-willed宽慰relievedsighasenseofrelief紧张nervous/heartpoundingwildlyinone’schest期待expectant兴奋thrilled/wildwithjoy振奋的exhilarated感激的grateful骄傲proud②动作训练train/practise移动move重击punch击打beat浏览scan看到saw/spot/catchsightof踏进stepinto跳jump/springtoone’sfeet大声说exclaim成功makeit逐句写作指导Para1:ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.尽管身体和精神上的挑战，但她仍然在课后练习中付出了艰苦的努力，重复练习着拳击台上的步伐与拳法。Despitephysicalandmentalchallenges,shestillmadepainstakingeffortsinafter-schooltraining,repeatedlypractisingthefootworkandboxingtechniques.慢慢地，她增强了自己的力量，并在这个不熟悉的领域提高了自己的技术。Slowly,shebuiltupherstrengthandimprovedhertechniquesintheunfamiliar/newarea.筋疲力尽但十分坚定，凯利在拳击馆逐渐获得了归属感.Exhaustedbutdetermined,Kellygraduallygainedasenseofbelongingintheboxinggym.每天，她都和有着对拳击同样激情的队友一起努力着，Everyday,shemadeeffortswithteammateswiththesamepassionforboxing随着时间的推移，选拔赛的日子终于到来了。Astimeprogressed,thedayoftryoutfinallyarrived.当轮到凯莉上场时，尽管她很紧张，她在台上熟练地展示了她的脚法和击打技巧，给评委留下了深刻的印象WhenitwasKelly’sturn,nervousasshewas,sheshowedherfootworkandpunchingabilityskillfullyonthestage,whichimpressedthejudgesdeeply.试训刚结束,结果将于下周一公布，凯利就松了一口气。WhenthetryoutendedwiththeresultstobeannouncednextMonday,Kellybreathedasighofrelief.Para2：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.凯利极度紧张和期待，小心翼翼地浏览了一下名单，最终看到了她的名字！Extremelynervousandexpectant,Kellycautiouslyscannedthesheetandeventuallycaughtsightofhername!凯利感到如此激动和兴奋，她立即跳了起来，发出了一声响亮的尖叫。SothrilledandexhilarateddidKellyfeelthatshesprangtoherfeetimmediately,lettingoutaloudscream.Serena在她身边目睹了这一幕，她紧紧地拥抱着她，眼睛里闪烁着自豪的光芒。Havingwitnessedthescenebyherside,Serenahuggedhertightlywiththeproudsparkleradiatingintheeyes.“祝贺你！我就知道你能成功！”她喊道。“现在我们去告诉妈妈一切吧。”她补充说道“Congratulations!Iknewyoucouldmakeit!”sheexclaimed.“Nowlet’sgototellourmumallthestory.”sheadded. 尽管她的母亲一开始对她的新追求犹豫不决，但她感到很自豪。看到女儿成长了，且充满成就感和幸福感。Thoughhermomw